[vyper]

The SOC vessel, GTDn Archangel, glides silently past a small terran colony planet. The inhabitants do not notice her massive hull, stretching across the sky, yet without her they would be dead in a matter of minutes.
The ship is StratComm's [glow=blue]Archangel[/glow] which I used for a campaign I'm doing, and the scene is just something I cooked up.
Below is the 640*480*32 version, click it to get the [glow=red]1280*1024*32[/glow] version.

[Ashrak]

no picture.........

[vyper]

Originally posted by Ashrak
no picture.........

I can see nothing wrong, someone else let me know if u can or can't see it.

[Stunaep]

I see it, and I like what i see. Been using glitterato again, yes?

[Deepblue]

Ummmr looks kinda... lackingoodlightingish? Get some good lighting in there and forget omni lights.
EDIT: Is the sun a light or just an added backdrop?

[Black Wolf]

The ship looks kind of blurry, but the planet is good.

[Ashrak]

i can see it now

[mikhael]

You really need to get rid of the ambient lighting. You're in a solar system with a planet and a ship between you and the star (close enough). The near side of the ship should be much more shadowed than it is. You might want to place a distant spot light facing the camera way off in the background, with a dark blue fill light much closer, maybe directly beneath the camera, lighting the underside of the ship dimly. A similar light off to the right, above the camera, illuminating the top of the ship (again, dimly) with a slightly different color will help a lot.

[vyper]

Originally posted by Stunaep
I see it, and I like what i see. Been using glitterato again, yes?

[Nico]

incredible! a geocities pic that shows w/o anything to do. w00t!
as for the pic... mmhhh. don't mix all those colours , that makes the pic messy. try to keep a colour trend.

[Knight Templar]

It's alright. Planet is nice.

follow mikhael on the lighting though.

[Styxx]

Originally posted by Deepblue
lackingoodlightingish

LOL!

Oh, and I agree with mikhael.

[Deepblue]

Hmmm maybe it would sound better as lacklusterlighting? Gets out papers too submit word to websters dictionary.

[vyper]

*drunken bump*

[Corhellion]

It's pretty good, just one little wee nit-pick..

Needs more ships in the pic, like a destroyer, some corvettes, some cruisers and some fighters buzzing around.

It's good regardless!

two thumbs up

Cor

[Anaz]

Originally posted by Corhellion
It's pretty good, just one little wee nit-pick..

Needs more ships in the pic, like a destroyer, some corvettes, some cruisers and some fighters buzzing around.

It's good regardless!

two thumbs up

Cor

we just can't have super caps running around alone...you allways need a supporting fleet...

[Setekh]

Mikhael's pointed out some good points - I like your engine flare, too.