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Offline Blue Lion

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My attempt at humor mk II
Reply #20 on: February 14, 2003, 09:57:47 pm
It's hard to write a good story when the punchline is a guy falling from the sky
 

Offline Stryke 9

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My attempt at humor mk II
Reply #21 on: February 14, 2003, 10:18:45 pm
Something about a skydiving-on-a-budget scam?
Webpage. Yes.
 

Offline Blue Lion

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My attempt at humor mk II
Reply #22 on: February 14, 2003, 10:23:06 pm
In a bar? that's a good scam
  

Offline Turnsky

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My attempt at humor mk II
Reply #23 on: February 14, 2003, 10:32:19 pm
ok  how about i add a visual cue to it?  in between the 3rd and 4th panels and see if that clears things up.. i'll rework the "punchline" while i'm at it..

thanks for the constructive critisism any way..
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do not torment the sleep deprived artist, he may be vicious when cornered,
in case of emergency, administer caffeine to the artist,
he will become docile after that,
and less likely to stab you in the eye with a mechanical pencil
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