[KARMA]

a bit too wide and flat in the ending. it is the only thing i don't like of your ship, both for texture  and geometry
the warped areas are those on the side, where you can see those diagonal line distorted.
You probably may be able to fix it with lithunwrap (or probably with a different texture)
the point is..
what is this nose for? an opening hangar for civilian small ships? an element to let the ship dock with some space stations? maybe something else? an hydroponic garden for passengers? a giant swimming pool?
decide it's role and texture/model it consequentially

[Vasudan Admiral]

ok, i'll add that to the modify list, thanx.
what i think i will do is shrink it to whatever size looks best and try and modify that texture so the diagonal line will run parralell with the edge of the 2 polys it currently crosses, i think that should look better.

as for function, erm it doesn't really have one apart from looking like a front. i tried some different shapes in the concept but they just didn't work. the only vaguely plausable function i can think of would be that it's some sort of large cargo bay or sensors or something.....

i wouldn't have a clue how to texture it as much else-especially a swimming pool.