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Offline Raptor

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Yes I know its a mega bump, but I've only really got round to acting on peoples comments.

I've removed to old engines and the nose (AFTER making a copy!)
and have begun to remodel it.  I've got two new noses.  One is following the Defiant trend, the other is based on the Space Shuttle.







I've also begun to rethink the engines (again:sigh: ) and have had thoughts about adding wings, slightly downward slanted.



Thing is, that setup makes the side docks pointless, since the wings get in the way...

Maybe bobs submodel rotn thingy could help.....

Comments please.
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Offline pyro-manic

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I think the wings look good. You could angle the dockpoints upwards slightly (so they're more perpendicular to the wings), or turn them into turrets or something.

With regard to the cockpit - I think the biggest problem is the big gap around it. It deosn't look right. You need to have a smooth transition rather than a hole in the hull with the cockpit sticking out. I prefer the angular one, but it needs to be as wide as the smooth one, and joined properly as I said.

Good stuff - please finish it. :):yes:
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