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Offline Darkage

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I made these 2 today i hope you all like them,and please tell me what could be improved etc...Thanks  

   
First one...

   
Second one...

Enjoy,and don't drool to much  

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Offline DragonClaw

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everything can be improved  

j/k

I think the background and lighting effects need work  

Lens flare seems too original as well

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Offline Nico

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Use a local light for all the ligthning. For the first renders, it's enough I think. You'll have better shadows then. Mmh, in fact, you'll have shadows lol.
Mmh, I think that's Setekh who told this to snipes: let you pic tell a story. Don't just throw some models in front of a pretty background. First decide what you want to show. A fleet? A capship fight? Anything? Take the time to place your ships hwo you would place them in fred and then imagine how they would move in fs2(yeah, that sounds dumb, but I think it works well), Then move the camera around to have the best point of view possible.
But my main advice is related to the shadows: Try to have contrasts, contrasts make the mood of your pic, and you can only have contrasts thanks to lightning.
Ok, that's my two cents, I now let render masters like Setekh giving better advices coz my neuron is now almost dead from a very exhausting night  
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Offline Snipes

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Are those capships? Because I think a scled down version would make a kick ***  fighter... Intercept most likely, it looks fast...
     
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Offline DragonClaw

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   Come to think of it ur right... lol


lol here's my first render... using 3D Exploration... I'm kinda scared of it

 
 http://theancientsarmada.homestead.com/files/TLWBanner.jpg  is a cut-paste from Modelview... and I cut out the black

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Offline Snipes

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Um... you are allowed to use that ship?
     
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Offline DragonClaw

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  Its up for public download on MT's site duhh

besides that was.. "Imperiator's" campaign I did those for... good thing he trashed it too... little scumbag.

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Offline Jabu

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Damn... I'd have a kickass B5 render for you, but I need more RAM to render the 409 000+ poly scene  

 

Offline DragonClaw

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haha what format is it in... I only got 256 megs of ram on my good comp...

maybe DarkShear can do it. he's got a buttload of ram

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Offline Jabu

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.blend  

Guess what it's made with  

 

Offline Daedalus

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I'm just curious. What is it about lens flares that they MUST be in every render?

 

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Offline Jabu

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Especially since it's always the exact same Photoshop flare  

 

Offline Setekh

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Looks great guys   Keep practicing and you'll be fantastic in a very short time!  
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Offline Darkage

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And now introducing the Ancient RBC     hehehe...i'am getting pretty good now     it works but the it needs better turrets and some other stuff    

       
Test fire

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Offline Slanker

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 Its up for public download on MT's site duhh

Yeah, but you might want to wait for it´s ´facelift´ to be completed.
Here comes my sig... oh finished :D

 

Offline Nico

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Yeap, but I doubt this one will have a general release before the MT release itself... or maybe I missed something
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Offline DragonClaw

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  I said before that was my first render...

I made that about 5 months ago....

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Offline DragonClaw

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  here are my latest renders: http://www.freespace2.f2s.com/fanart_dragon.php3


   And why did you Pimp your RBC here????

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Offline Nico

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because it's his thread?
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Ancient pod-racing!!!

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