About the mission:
1)You forgot the y axis for most ships.A mission with ships arriving from all directions is cool....
2)There were GTB Artemis and Boanerges!They weren't available on that moment,specially for the NTF!
3)Com brief,4th stage:the wav file is different from the text.
4)A bit,bit bit battleofendorish...
5)wav files work well without installing your mod,you don't have to put all them in your modpack.
6)Ha hem the aquitaine arrives from the jump node...after a little amount of time,the Psamtik departs...from the first mission we know that passes some time between the arrival of the Aquitaine and "Surrender,Belisarius".Remember the all out attacks against NTF positions throughout the system?
7)The Command message about the Belisarius uses the wav file of the first mission,but your text is different...
However this remains a good mission,only the plot needs major changes....