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Author Topic: Haiku (Inspired by a 2002 thread)  (Read 2627 times)

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Offline Aardwolf

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Re: Haiku (Inspired by a 2002 thread)
Reply #20 on: February 05, 2008, 10:37:49 pm
I began Blue Planet
In the middle of the night
I found it creepy.
 

Offline Dark Hunter

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Re: Haiku (Inspired by a 2002 thread)
Reply #21 on: February 05, 2008, 10:44:58 pm
Your first line has six
Syllables are important
Your haiku is fail. :p
"You need to believe in things that aren't true. How else can they become?" -DEATH, Discworld
  

Offline Aardwolf

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Re: Haiku (Inspired by a 2002 thread)
Reply #22 on: February 05, 2008, 11:13:51 pm
Fine, make it "played" instead of "began"

Dark Hunter is picky
About how to write Haiku
Watch him pick his nose
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