Author Topic: The Sequel, Take 2  (Read 35162 times)

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Offline Dark_4ce

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Good stuff as always! :yes:
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Offline Shrike

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Who are these people?  I'm not even registered at the Relic forums.  :p
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Offline Anaz

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we must have a scene with jeeves and a large automatic weapon
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Offline Stunaep

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I want more parts.
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Offline Darkage

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Quote
Originally posted by Anaz
we must have a scene with jeeves and a large automatic weapon
:nervous:



I already see him defending the the shiny array:D
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Offline Unknown Target

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Lol. I remember jeeves, altho in a very indistinct way :\

Anyway, hrm, edited the second to last line in the last part. Important, and I forgot it.

Lastly, I'm kinda sick, and I don't have any writing cojos right now, so no other story, altho I (and hopefully you) really am gonna have fun with the next section :)

Lastly, 2 things: admins, could you sticky this? I'm afraid it's gonna drop right off the front page, and be lost forever :(

and, two, think this is news-worthy? or no? (that I'm continuing writing it, I mean).

 

Offline Singh

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Can't wait for more :D
And yes, i'd say its news worthy.
(wonders if he can write a bit of this like trashman did) :D
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Offline Windrunner

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thread stuck. And UT if you want to post news about submit it on the frontpage. its simple as that.
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Offline TheCelestialOne

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Offline Unknown Target

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Sorry this took so long. I'm sick, and my writing skills aren't quite up to snuff lately :(

INT. Hard Light Communications Center. Day.

We open to see the usual consoles. Large windows surround the entire room. We can see the vastness of the Hard Light station below us. We cut to TRASHMAN, sitting in front of a communications console. A large pair of headphones is on his head, and he's studying the console intently. Suddenly, he puts his hand up to one of his ears, pressing one of the headphones closer. He listens for a couple seconds, then looks at the console. A stream of text is going down the screen. We cut to a close-up of his console, from a side view. He hits a few buttons, and we cut to:

INT. wEvil's (formerly Cloaked Figure's) quarters. Day.

We open to see a room, still completely dark. Faintly, we can see the red glow of wEvil's eyes, but not more, until a computer screen screeb suddenly flairs into being. Flickering for a few times as it warms up, it eventually provides a steady blue glow in the room. wEvil's eyes snap open fully, and he gets up to go to the computer screen. Sitting down in the chair, a small image of TRASHMAN appears on the screen. There is a slight delay between the two computers, and his image refreshes after every other frame or so.

wEvil: What?

Trashman: (Stumbles for a bit) Uhhh, sir. You asked me to report to you if we recieved any messages from the Relic boards?

wEvil: Yes, aaand?

Trashman: Umm...well, we, uh, did, sir. I'll send it to you know.

TRASHMAN looks down from his image his console. He types a few things in, and suddenly another window pops up, right next to his image on wEvil's computer.

Trashman: Here you are, sir.

wEvil doesn't answer. He reads the message for a few seconds. He chuckles.

wEvil: Sooo...the Relic Forums choose not to get involved, eh? Excellent. Trashman!

Trashman: Yes, sir?

wEvil: Send a communication to all forces. Begin preperation for the attacks.

Trashman: Yes, sir!

He salutes, and his image cuts out. The computer screen turns off. wEvil turns around in the now pitch-black room, and all we can see are his bright red eyes, bobbing up and down as he laughs a long, evil laugh. We fade to:

 
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Offline TheCelestialOne

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Offline Odyssey

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[color=cc9900]Excellent, as always.
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Offline TrashMan

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Yes Sir!:D


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Offline Unknown Target

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There's something wrong with the movie.

I dunno what it is, but I just came to the realization that I don't like it. Too generic.

Thoughts on this?

 

Offline Gortef

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it may be a bit generic... but the fact that you are using the forum members as characters and the forums itself as places does make it unique.
Habeeb it...

 

Offline StratComm

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I think the problem lies in the main characters; there's so many people, and so many of them are only making cameo appearances, that it becomes difficult to pick out any real character development.  Not that character development is necessarily lacking, it's just scattered and somewhat disjoined.
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Last edited by StratComm on 08-23-2027 at 08:34 PM

 

Offline Darkage

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Don't forget to put me back in:D

I am somewere in the earlyer parts of the sequel but not here do i still play a role?:D
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Offline Dark_4ce

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good stuff as always! :yes:
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