[FreeTerran]

The DAWN OF THE APOCALYPSE website is released.
There is the Link

I, TrashMan, KillaVirus, FireDragon and Boewolf hope that we soon are hosted by the HLP

[Tiara]

Nice Much better then the Cross Over website

[FreeTerran]

The DAWN OF THE APOCALYPSE mod is my mod and the CROSS OVER are LORD LUKAV's mod.

[Solatar]

So you do a better site for your own MOD?


*makes mental note not to hire Free Terran for website*

EDIT: This site isn't half bad...


So tun Sie einen besseren Aufstellungsort für Ihren eigenen Umb.? * Marken Geistesanmerkung, zum von von freiem Terran für website nicht anzustellen * REDIGIEREN Sie: Dieser Aufstellungsort ist nicht beinahe schlecht...

[FreeTerran]

[SIZE=10]NO[/SIZE] but LORD LUKAV like the CROSS OVER site but now the CROSS OVER site is down and i rebuild it.

[diamondgeezer]

Originally posted by Tiara
Much better then the Cross Over website  

I noticed that you haven't mentioned when the campaign is set - I remember you once said i was set several hundered years after Capella. Hopefully, you've scaled it back to no more than a few decades so that the GTVA is still recognisable as the alliance we knew in FS2.

Shame about the giveway in the Ascart description - telling us that their nemesis enemy is/was the creators of the Shivans is a bit of spoiler. Also, you seem to be using both Ascart and Asgard - you need to decide which one you want. And to be honest, you really have stolen SG-1's plot with the Ascart and their deadly foe, haven't you?

Have a bit of a think about the points I've made here, and hopefully they will help you to come up with ways to improve your project. You do have a fair basic outline to start from... with work, this could be a campaign worth playing

And lastly, see what a difference it makes to have a native english speaker write (or at least translate) your text? Try and keep this practice up

[Solatar]

Oh..so Lord Lukav has set his standards low...not you...well it isn't your fault then:yes:

[FreeTerran]

What you mean will we hosted by HLP ?

[karajorma]

BTW Free Terran. I`m glad you`ve discovered the Huge font size tag but try to use it a bit less often. Almost every time you`ve used it could have been better expressed with use of the Italics or Bold tags.

[Solatar]

If you ask for hosting...you'll probably get it...

[diamondgeezer]

Sorry, gonna drag the topic OT here - I just twigged who Solatar is. What the hell happened, Hades?

[FreeTerran]

I don't no.

[Solatar]

Everywhere else on the internet (except vwatch) I'm known as Solatar, so I figured, why not her also?

Besides, Hades is kind of a gothic name....and I'm not gothic...I'm Catholic..

[diamondgeezer]

Originally posted by Solatar
....and I'm not gothic...I'm Catholic..

Er... well, I supppose that makes sense...

[TrashMan]

1. I wrote the story and there's far more you don't know about it that you know.
I have watched SG, but the name Asgart was Free Terrans idea..
and their enemy was the Shivans, not the creator of shivans

[diamondgeezer]

Originally posted by TrashMan
but the name Asgart was Free Terrans idea..

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I never said it wasn't

and their enemy was the Shivans, not the creator of shivans

From the species tech data page
In the first half of the campaign the TERRANS and the ASCART will annihilate the Shivans while in the second half they will encounter a new enemy. An enemy which will prove to be the creators of the shivan race

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Explain, if you please?

[Solatar]

At least change the name.. Asgart/ascart/ are all really close to Asgard..

[TrashMan]

It seems I and Free Terran had a misunderstanding regarding the story.......

Back to the drawing bord (or in this case, ICQ)

[TrashMan]

O.k. - that was a remaint from his old page....
nothing to worry about! it's beeing removed as we speak.

[FreeTerran]

OK i have it removed.