Originally posted by Ashrak
so far iv had only one constructive crit.....tha one about the engines the rest was pure spam.
Originally posted by mikhael
A frying pan with a star background. Beauty shots don't do much for me. There's nothing happening here, no dynamics. The framing is good, but that's about the only thing I like.
Which part of "no dynamics" did you fail to parse, Ashrak? You've got a ship that's sitting in place. There's nothing here to make us sit up and go "oooooh!". Is she moving or is she floating dead? In either case, why is she doing so? Give us some context IN THE PICTURE for what we're seeing. Otherwise, its just a beauty shot of a ship and those are just not interesting.