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A Journey of the Forgotten
keep it coming in your own time, this is great stuff :D
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A Journey of the Forgotten
thanks :)

Im off to thailand next week, where I hope to get mroe of this written. For now tho, i'm sort of at a writer's block. Half my mind wants to finish what happens next - but the other half wants to go off and actually write about the organization that created the structure and create an entirely new universe from scratch :/

Ach! It's so difficult to stay focused with a short attention span and a headache!
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CHAPTER 5[/U]

Bosch was lying down on the small platform, trying to conserve his strength as best as possible. He knew once the others arrived, he would have a lot of work to do, which meant he was going to need to be at his peak condition for it.

Two hours had already passed since he gave up writing his log. Bosch couldn't help but wonder where everyone was, or what they were doing for that matter.

Most probably carrying out the plan that had been created earlier. He couldn't help but think to himself. Upon recollection, Bosch realized that he did know where they were. He doubted they would just stay in one place and do nothing. More than likely they were carrying out the original plan to go and scout for food and resources to fix the transport, even though they would be now doing it with three less men....

Before he could think any further on the matter however, Bosch's thoughts were interrupted by a loud clank sound coming from the engine room to his right. It was slightly muffled, but it was also very loud.

Then it came again, this time followed by the high-pitched screech that came with something metallic and heavy being dragged along the floor. The previously low howl of wind outside increased in intensity, creating a deafening echo in the rest of the transport and bringing with it a chill unlike anything he had experience before. The bitter cold touched his skin – exposed with an environment suit to protect him, there was little he could do to stop it.

Over the loud din, Bosch could barely make out a few voices shouting at each other as they came into the transport. This was shortly followed by another screech as the heavy metal object was once again pushed into place, cutting off the loud howl and bringing the ringing sound back into Bosch's ears. The cold went away as well, although not as completely as he would have hoped.

Bosch decided to get up and face whomever was coming in. Leaning on his left arm and using whatever strength he had, Bosch got himself up carefully, making sure not to cause any strain or problem to the broken right arm. He then swung his legs out to the right and sat up. He looked at the engine room and waited for whomever it was to come walking past the large pipes that blocked most of his view of the section.

The voices grew louder but were still somewhat muffled by the pipes in front of them, but Bosch was still unable to make out what they were talking about, hearing only pieces of the conversation.

Then as they came closer, the voices became a bit clearer. He still couldn’t figure out who it was, but at least he could understand what they were saying. From what he could tell, they were two of them, and both were arguing with each other quite loudly.

“I know that, but our time was up! If he hadn’t returned back then, we would have both frozen to death, not to mention the others would have gotten worried!”

One of voices spoke; obviously in response to something Bosch had not been able to make out earlier. A different voice spoke up in response to this, the tone one that of impatience and irritation.

“The others aren’t even here yet! We’re the first ones here damn it! It would taken less than three minutes to simply go up to the panel, opened the door and then taken a peek inside!”

“And what if a full, goddamn army was behind those doors, waiting to blow us to kingdom come simply because we didn’t knock?”

The first voice retorted. Bosch couldn’t help but wonder what they were talking about. Had they discovered something? They still hadn’t rounded the corner yet, meaning they were probably standing somewhere behind the pipes and arguing with each other. This assumption was backed up by the fact that he could no longer hear their footsteps either.

“You don’t know that!! If there was an army, they would have gotten us long before we even went up to the top of the damn thing!”

“I may not know whether it’s true, but neither do you! There is a good chance it’s booby-trapped, so I’d rather have the others come in with us in case something went wrong.”

The second voice sighed a bit, conceding defeat on the matter.

“Fine then, but we better send the next team down ASAP. If that thing’s got potential as shelter, we’ll need to move in quick.”

The first voice’s tone calmed down a bit before continuing. The person started walking towards the end of the pipes as he spoke, as evidenced by the footsteps that they could hear.

“Agreed. The transport’s environmental systems won’t last too long as it is. Once it goes, we’ll most likely end up freezing to death.”

Bosch watched as a foot came past the pipes, followed almost immediately by the leg, then the main body of the person. Finally, Sargo came into view, still looking at someone to his right. As he turned the corner, Sargo’s face turned around to see the main hallway area, which was when he saw Bosch.
Bosch suppressed a small smile at Sargo’s surprised expression. From behind him, Terrick rounded the corner, unaware that Bosch was seated at the platform and watching the both of them. He glanced at Sargo, saw the surprised expression and then turned to look at Bosch. His expression changed to one of surprise as well. Sargo reacted first, rushing forward to Bosch. Terrick snapped out of it as well and came just behind Sargo.

Bosch simply put a hand up, signaling he didn’t need any help, and before Sargo could say anything, he simply nodded over at the white sheets and asked a simple question. “Who?”

Sargo looked at the sheets, his expression turning somewhat grim. He stared at it for a few seconds, before looking back at Bosch, a somewhat sad expression on his face. Finally, he looked down before speaking. “Ramayan and Sarno. We found Sarno dead after the crash. Ramayan suffered massive injuries….we weren’t able to save him.”

Bosch nodded grimly, not sure exactly what to say in reply to this. Although it had been expected, there was little that could have prepared him for the news. An uncomfortable silence fell over the group for a minute, before it was broken when Bosch looked up directly at Sargo and spoke in a somewhat low voice

“At least we tried our best….they wont be forgotten……none of them will.”

Sargo only nodded, but the expression didn’t leave his face. Rather than let the silence return, Bosch pushed matters ahead by clearing his throat and continuing.

“Status update?” he asked.

Sargo looked up at Bosch and gave out a sigh. Clearing his throat, he nodded and glanced back, indicating for Terrick to continue with the work they had come back to do. Terrick simply nodded back and moved off towards one of the corners. Bosch watched as he switched on the environment suit’s flashlight, lighting up the corner and revealing the ladder that led down into the transport’s cargo hold. Terrick turned around and carefully descended the ladder, into the darkness below. Bosch looked back to Sargo, who was now towards the right side of the hallway near one of the outcrops they were using as a table of sorts. He was rummaging through a small bag for some supplies.

Finally, he withdrew two small cups, along with a bottle of water. Placing both cups on the outcrop, he poured some water into both and then placed the bottle back on the outcrop. Wielding a cup in each hand, he turned to the platform and walked towards Bosch, holding one out towards him.

“Drink first, you’re de-hydrated.” Sargo spoke. Bosch just nodded his thanks as he accepted the cup. Bringing it up to his lips, he took a sip first. He was somewhat surprised as to how cold it was, but then Bosch realized, he should have expected it in this sort of weather conditions.

Sargo sat down on the ground next to the platform, taking a few slow sips from his own cup, waiting for Bosch to finish drinking.

Bosch was the first to speak up once he was done with the water.

“How bad is it?” he asked.

Sargo didn’t look up, only staring at the cup he was holding in both hands.

“Very…..” He shook his head towards the cockpit. “The transport isn’t in good condition. Even if we could repair the engines, I doubt it will be anywhere near flyable, much less space worthy for that matter. Fortunately, environmental control is still online – if only barely. Venson says it will fail soon though, so we need to find some sort of shelter.”

Bosch looked down. The situation appeared grave indeed.

“What about our stores? How bad is the situation there?”

Although it shouldn’t have been possible, Sargo’s face actually became grimmer. Looking at this, Bosch braced himself for even more bad news as Sargo continued on.

“The stores are even worse. We lost nearly half the cargo due to damage from the crash. We’re down to a day’s worth of food, and now that Ramayan’s dead, we’re pretty much dead in the water in that regard….as for medical supplies, we’ve got none left. Most of the surgical nanites were finished when we tried to save Ramayan, while the rest went on patching up your leg and neck. Other than that, their isn’t much left intact. Only the basic stuff survived: stuff like ropes, chains, some field equipment, along with a single stove.”

Sargo paused, looking at the cup and frowning. Bosch could see he was trying to remember if that was it. Then a thought occurred to him, a rather urgent and horrifying one at that.

“What about the ETAK?” he asked. Without it, they would not be able to communicate with the Shivans at all and then they would be really stuck here.

Sargo looked up in surprise, not expecting that question. He nodded to his right, towards something beyond the pipes in the engine room.

“That? It’s still online and working. We re-enforced it enough that it survived the landing intact – hell, it’s about the only thing here that’s survived and working at a 100%.”

Bosch breathed a sigh of relief at this. At least now they had a way to communicate with the Shivans when they came…He nodded before continuing.

“That’s good then. At least we can communicate with the Shivans when they come down for us. It should be soon, if we can’t get a signal back to them first.”

Sargo frowned a bit, but didn’t say anything to this, allowing the silence to hang over them for a full minute before he got up off the floor and headed back to the outcrop for more water. He first poured himself more water, before turning around and offering Bosch some more as well. Bosch nodded and accepted the refill. Rather than let the silence continue however, he looked at Sargo and asked him a question.

“What were you and Terrick talking about just now? What did you find out there?”

Sargo didn’t look up from the cup. Taking a sip from it, he replied.

“We found something……strange, to say the least.” He paused, frowning to himself a bit before continuing.

“It’s a structure, a rather odd one at that. It’s similar to some of those Inca temples we studied in history class, sure as hell looks like a temple for that matter. It’s not very far from where we are right now, but the fog out there is so thick we didn’t spot it till were right on it! Both Terrick and I climbed to the top of it, and found a massive entrance, along with a control panel. Terrick wanted to open the door and see what was behind it, but couldn’t figure out the control panel before it was time to come back. It looks well-built though, and in good condition. If the weather was always like this on this part of the ring, then the inside should be insulated enough for us to survive.”

Bosch was intrigued….a temple, out here? On this ring? He had suspected the ancients were religious in nature, but enough to create a temple on the ring? Or was it something else? Such questions perplexed him, not to mention piqued his curiosity.

“Once Gibson is back, we should be able to set out again and investigate it. If it’s a viable alternative to staying here, it won’t take long to move into it.” Sargo continued.

Bosch simply nodded. His curiosity would have to wait for now. But if his hunch was right, then this would be a rather amazing find indeed.

“We’ll wait for Gibson then.” Bosch replied, sitting back. From the looks of it, this was going to be a long wait indeed.

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im still reading :) continue when you are ready singh
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second bit of the chapter.


Around a half hour later, the entire group had gathered inside the transport, busy getting everything ready to move. Most of the activity was focused on the once-dark ladder in the corner of the corridor, which was now brightly lit by one of the portable lights. The constant noises of people rummaging through the debris in the cargo hold could be heard, and every so often, someone would either come up the ladder or go down it. The corridor itself had people running around, and was full of bags littered all over the place. The bags themselves weren’t very large, being standard battle order for most space crews, it was light and most of its storage capacity was in the numerous pockets all over it.

Meant for carrying any random mixture of tools, the bags were ideal for most emergency occasions. But its designers would never have imagined it being useful on an alien ring world in a hostile environment not that much warmer than that of space itself, after being involved in a crash landing that killed several people and damaged almost everything else.

In the sea of chaos, was a small island of order. Or, rather, in this case a platform of order. Seated pretty much in the centre of the corridor and with Gibson, Sargo and Venson surrounding him Bosch was conducting the final briefing before the four of them would head out. So far things had gone without a hitch. When Gibson and the others returned, Sargo had immediately debriefed them on the find. It had been an almost uninamous decision then that they would head out towards the structure, and do so almost immediately. They had only paused to rest a few minutes and gather what equipment they could, leaving only one last issue to be dealt with before they could go.

How was Bosch going to get there? Unlike the others, he was no longer dressed in an environmental suit, and with the broken arm and cast, there was no chance he was going to wear any above the chest either. The others were still aurguing about how exactly they would get here, with Bosch in the centre of it all, watching them.

"Look, I'm telling you, there's no way any healthy human being could survive for long in the atmosphere out there, much less one that's only recently been injured and not in the best of conditions."

Gibson spoke, his tone one of irritation and slight anger. His concern for Bosch's safety was evident indeed.

"Yes, but you forget - we're only going for a few hundred meters for heaven's sake. It's just through to the other side of the damn fog and we're pretty much home free!"

Sargo interrupted. His tone was equally annoyed, and he probably had a right to. They had been sitting here and doing nothing but argue for the last 5 to 10 minutes, and it was fustrating him to no end. And in turn, his sentence was cut off as Venson replied to both the gentlemen gathered.

"Yes, but you're also forgetting the fact that we'll be going there at a rather slow pace. It's not like we can just run over or something? Have you even tried running with a broken arm on flat ground? Much less on snow out there!"

Finally getting a bit sick of this, not to mention feeling a bit more confident in getting onto his feet, Bosch decided to end this right here. It would do no use to have his crewmen bickering amongst themselves, especially in their current situation.

Without saying a word, Bosch slowly put one foot on the ground first, and gradually shifting his weight, he put down the other. His legs nearly buckled on him, and he had to grab the platform for support. The others noticed this and stopped arguing immediately. They rushed to Bosch’s side to help him, but Bosch waved them away.

“Either we go now, or we’re not going at all. We can’t stay here forever, and we need some other place with a working power source to activate the ETAK.”

He looked at first Gibson, and then Venson before continuing.

“Gibson, Venson, I understand your concern for my safety, but we’re all dead if we stay here anyway. There is no use waiting any longer. Let’s go.”

Both nodded rather reluctantly. Gibson then turned around and went to get one of the bags. Bringing it back to the platform, he opened it and took out a loop of rope. As he uncoiled it, Bosch saw that it was rather long – long enough to probably hold all of them. Tying one of the ends around his waist, the offered the other to Sargo and the other to Venson. Finally, taking the other end of the rope, he tied it around Bosch’s waist. Bosch only nodded. This was pretty much the plan they had all agreed to. It would keep them all together, despite the thick fog, and if anyone had problems, at least the rest would know.

Once everyone was done, they picked up their bags and gear. Only Bosch remained without carrying anything – which was almost impossible given his broken arm and weakened state.

Sargo stood next to Bosch, and would be accompanying him throughout the journey, providing support in case he fell or needed help. Just before they were ready, Sargo took one of the blankets they had and wrapped it around Bosch’s upper body. They had managed to get him into some of the environmental suit earlier, but it was only upto his waist, meaning that his chest, face and hands would still be vulnerable to the cold. They did not even have a pair of goggles with which to cover his eyes, and the only thing that would be protecting Bosch’s head was the admiral’s hat that had accompanied him for the entire journey, along with a long piece of cloth that would serve as a scarf, covering his mouth and nose. Amazingly, unlike the things surrounding or Bosch himself, it had escaped the crash relatively unscathed and still looking as brand-new since the day he had been awarded it.

Well, at least, the blanket should assuage this, and keep him safe from the cold to a certain extent….he hoped.

Once they were all ready, Bosch nodded and spoke.

“It’s time then. Let’s go.”

Taking one step at a time, Bosch took it slowly at first as he tested his unsteady legs. He could walk, and should be able to reach the temple without much of a problem. Then he corrected himself. He didn’t have a choice in the matter. He would get to that temple, and he would walk there, no matter how bad it seemed it was what was needed to be done.

With that, the entire group slowly moved towards the rear, past the pipes and into the engineering centre. As they did so, the ambient lighting reduced significantly. Few lights had been placed here, with the priority being the central corridor as well as the cargo hold below.

Here there were simply more pipes and various systems that Bosch only had an inkling as to how it all worked together. Some pieces and components of the structure were organic in nature, while others were metallic in nature, meshing together to work with almost complete harmony.

Of course, he had read the reports on their technology, and had some understanding of how it worked, but to actually look at it and be able to feel it was a different matter.

The group walked through the short maze of pipes and walkways, till finally Gibson – who was in the lead – turned right, which lead into a small corridor ending at a wall. When Bosch looked at the wall, he saw that it wasn’t exactly a wall. It was more of a large metal piece covering up a fair portion of the wall. It was made up of the same material and color, but in the dark lighting conditions it wasn’t too easy to see where exactly it had come from. Perhaps the others had salvaged it from somewhere, but Bosch couldn’t be too sure.

Gibson and Venson stood to either side of the metal piece. They nodded to each other first, and then placed their hands on the metal piece. Venson pushed the piece from the right, while Gibson pulled it from the left, causing the piece to release a high-pitched screeching sound as it was moved out of the way. As the piece moved, it uncovered a large hole in the rear of the ship. Judging from the seared edges, it appeared to have been burnt or cut off somehow. But this made little differences as, suddenly, the wind started blowing through the hole at full-throttle, bringing with it’s loud howl snow, hail and what may have been Bosch’s worst enemy in this case: the bitter touch of the coldness that billowed past him and everyone else.

Nobody else would – no, could – feel it quite as much as Bosch could right now. It had caught him somewhat-off guard, and not even the blanket he had draped around his shoulders could prevent the wind from covering his entire body from its icy touch. Visibly shuddering, Bosch turned his face away from the breeze, somewhat thankful of the small scarf-like cloth he over his face.

But still, not this would stop him. Bracing himself, Bosch made eye contact with Sargo and nodded. It was time to go. Taking one step forward, and then another, Bosch brought himself to the lip of the hole, on the verge of stepping out, but at the same time not quite there. Sargo went out first, before turning back and waiting for Bosch to step out.

Holding the edge of the hole, Bosch’s took another step forward, his foot leaving from the relative safety of the ship into the deep snow that surrounded it. He was rather surprised when it sank further than he expected. The snow here was quite deep, and it threw him somewhat off-balance. Leaning on the hole, he regained his composure and brought his other foot out and alongside the other. Glancing down, he made sure to watch his step as he slowly moved forwards, Sargo next to him every step of the way.

The cold seemed too much, seemingly unrelenting and overwhelming. It beat at Bosch, causing him to shiver almost continuously as his body tried to preserve its heat. Realizing that exercise would help him keep it up, Bosch tried quickening his pace a bit. Ahead of them was nothing but fog, covering the ground and the canyon from wall to wall. It was behind this veil that their goal hid.

A few more steps and several feet later, Bosch paused, before turning around to see where the others were. Gibson and Venson were right behind them, and someone else inside the transport itself was closing the hole again.

Looking at the transport itself from the outside, Bosch realized just how bad the crash had been. Half of it was buried in the snow, but from what he could see of the visible damage, he knew enough to know he was very, very lucky to survive the crash indeed.

Internally thanking his luck, as well as sturdy Shivan shipbuilding, Bosch looked to his left and nodded to Sargo. It was time to go onwards.

And so, the entire group walked onwards, slowly disappearing into the thick fog.

Interlude[/b]

When it found me, I did not know what it was, nor did I recognize it for what it would be. I only know when and where it found me, nothing more, nothing less; such was the ignorance that came with my infancy.

As I wandered through the remains of the installation, unlocking the clues of those that had built it eons before, my movement caught its attention; instantly drawing it towards me. I do not know for how long it was behind me; looking over my shoulder and walking in my shadows. It simply observed me as I wandered through its home, searching as I was to save my own creators from the death that had descended upon them.

Perhaps it had been watching as the universe around it evolved, since the creation of the installation, or since the abandonment by its creators. Now I must but ponder…was it’s fate, similar to mine? Did it too face a similar situation like my own? But instead suffered a far less fortunate conclusion?

I do not know. Despite spending eons thinking about it, till today, I just do not know.

All I do know is that it finally took action. Whatever it was, it reached out and
touched me in some way. For a moment, its mind, thoughts and a fleeting few memories; all connected to mine for a miniscule instant before leaving, as quickly as it came. In the seconds that passed after that touch, I paused in my search, my mind filled with questions about what had just happened, what the other presence was and what it had done to me.

Then, and only then the truth hit me. In a moment that would be etched my memories for eternities to come, realization flashed across my mind: realization of the meanings that came with the concepts of the self and self-awareness. My mind reeled back at the many freedoms and thoughts that came with it, confused and unsure of what to do next. My first instinct was to inform my creators; to let them know of this possible malfunction with my system, along with the possibility of another attack from the presence inside.

Later I would realize that it was not an attack; for an attack is meant to drive opposition off; to remove life as it were. What the presence had done seemed to be the opposite…from that fleeting contact, I could sense little…but what I did sense was that the presence meant no harm to me or my creators. It was not an attacker, nor did it wish to take any life….instead, it only
gave me one.

When my creators found out; they were surprised – shocked even! How could such a creation gain life? Something not of flesh and blood couldn’t be alive, and yet there I was in front of them, living proof to the contrary.

It is fortunate for me, that their reaction was but only surprise. Had this come about any other time, fear would have brought about the swift end of my existence; but here, there was only despair, for the horrible news had come in.

The creators had retreated to their home planet; abandoned their empire. They believed at home, they would be safe, for the destroyers were not a terrestrial species.

When they had entered subspace, they were trespassers…but their planet was their home….and yet, still, the great destroyers came…and then, their world was gone
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If there had been a FS3, this should have been part of it.  This is the best piece of fan-fiction I've seen anywhere.  Amazing work. :D

 

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agreed :nod: ;)
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A Journey of the Forgotten
Chapter 6[/u]

“Bosch, can you hear me? Are you allright?”

Bosch could barely hear Sargo’s voice over the howl of the wind and the cold. The cold…oh god, it was so cold! He swore. Never had he felt it so, and truthfully, he had no clue whether he could actually continue. His fingers and toes no longer had any feeling in them, and Bosch was worried that he would soon suffer from frostbite or maybe even Gangrene.

“Bosch!” Sargo repeated again, giving Bosch a gentle push to get his attention. Looking over to his left, he nodded at Sargo and spoke in broken breaths and gasps.

“I’m allright…Keep going!”

That was all Sargo needed to hear. He increased the speed a bit, pulling Bosch along as much as he could. The snow kept slowing them down, holding onto Bosch’s shoes, sapping his energy with each step. The conditions were almost unbearable…correction, they were unbearable, and Bosch didn’t know how much longer he could go.

Looking up, all he could see was the rope for a few feet before it disappeared into the thick fog. Gibson and Venson were at the other end of the rope, and still moving, judging from its tautness and the pressure on it, they were probably holding back for Bosch.

Trying to futilely focus his mind from the cold, Bosch continued to walk through the snow. Looking down, he studied the footprints of the other two men in front of him. Their footprints made large impressions in the snow, which had to be nearly a foot in depth. Yet, considering how long this creation must have hung in space, alone and uncared for, Bosch was surprised that it wasn’t deeper.

Bosch did not know how long he continued like that, simply staring down at the ground and taking it one step at a time. The steps and the seconds started to stretch out slowly, each seeming like an infinity to him; an infinity in which he could only experience the pain that punished him. It attacked him from every angle, with a ferocity equal to - if not greater - Bosch's own will to get through it.

Although his mind pressed on, his body started to falter. Already diseased from the trauma of the trip down, and weakened from a lack of food, it did not have the strength to afford such a venture. His vision started getting blurry, and strangely, the wind was beginning to get softer and softer. But yet, he pressed on. He couldn't stop here..not when he was so close!

But then, Bosch felt it...he didn't know exactly what it was, but there was something in the back of his mind, urging him...compelling him to move on. Safety would be there, and things would get better soon...he was almost at the end of a journey. Bosch tried to focus on that little piece in his mind, but as soon as he did, it was gone. Frowning, Bosch continued struggling through. His imagination was starting to get the better of him. Either that, or the cold. From the way he felt, Bosch suspected the latter.

It was only then he noticed that his senses were starting to fade. For some reason, he wasn't feeling as cold anymore, and the wind's howl was no longer ringing through his ears. It was then he heard Sargo's voice. Unlike before, this when Sargo shouted, it wasn't blocked out by the wind and the cold, and instead came through loud and clear - perhaps a little too loud.

"We're almost there Bosch!" Realizing he was shouting when it wasn't required, Sargo lowered his voice before continuing. "Just a few more feet and we'll be out of this damn fog!"

With that, Sargo pulled him onwards, suddenly surging forwards with a renewed fevere. Glancing up, Bosch tried to struggle onwards to catch up as he was half-dragged, half-pulled by Sargo's forward rush. One thing he noticed in particular though - the rope was slack. The others must have stopped, meaning they were their. Before he could think any further though, both he and Sargo emerged out of the fog, and into the dim sunlight.

Bosch's head snapped up, and then his arm followed suit as it raised to cover his eyes from the sun's glare. The fog that had enveloped them throughout his journey was now directly behind him, revealing the small sun just above the top of the canyon wall, it's rays providing a warmth that drove back the cold's icy touch from his skin. After travelling through the fog and the cold, it's warm rays were a welcome relief for Bosch. Even though the source was small and distant, it was still effective in lighting up the canyon and bringing some warmth in.  

Getting used to the sunlight, Bosch looked straight up and could see the edge of one of the outer arms of the central structure. It was less than a kilometer away - mere walking distance if he so chose it. Only gravity and the vacuum of space would prevent them from doing such a thing in this case.

"We're here!" Sargo proclaimed thriumpantly from his side. Bosch looked down and to Sargo, who was looking towards something ahead of them. Bosch followed Sargo's gaze, and finally saw it.

All the memories of the cold, the pain and the suffering faded away as he simply stared in disbelief at the structure that stood in front of them. One thing that struck him the most was it's striking resemblence to an Inca temple; the outer edges of it's structures resembled that of a pyramid in some sense. However, there were a few crucial differences.

The structure was wide, it's base occupying the entire canyon from wall to wall. There was no way to climb to it's rear from there, as part of the base merged with the canyon wall about 8-10 meters up. It wasn't a true pyramid per se, as it appeared to have a flat back seperated from back wall of the Canyon. At around 20 stories high, the structure was divided into a seperate 'floor' every 5 stories, bringing the tally to the 5 floors total (including the base). The edges of the floor were raised upwards for a hieght of 3 feet, probably to prevent people from falling off. The walkable distance on the floor was only 2-3 meters at most before the base for the next floor took up the remaining space. The most notable feature however was a central pylon of sorts, that protuded out from just above the top floor (from that angle, it was rather hard to see where exactly it came from), and then went down accross the entire structure, dividing it neatly into half. This pylon then buried itself into the ground just in front of the base. Running up the length of the structure from the first floor onwards and on either side of the pylon was a series of stairs leading to the very top floor. There was a long ramp from the ground, leading upto the base and then the first floor. The sides of each floor ended at what appeared to be a doorway to each side, leading further into the structure itself. This was visible for only the first 3 floors. The fourth floor simply had a small balcony and what appeared to be some places to sit strewed about on either side, while the contents of the top floor were not visible from the current angle. The structure's material was highly reflective, giving it a spit-polish shine that belied it's true age and the wear-and-tear it should actually be showing.

In this particular case, the shine reflected the sun's rays directly at the travellers, creating a rather impressive sight.

Bosch was simply awestruck. When Sargo had told him about a temple, he had a few thoughts on what it might have looked like...but this? This was completely and totally different. After studying the ruins on Altair and in the Deneb system, Bosch was familiar with the Ancient's technology and the sophistication of their construction, and this did share many commonalities with the ruins there. However, to actually see those ruins intact, and more so in absolutely working condition? It was little wonder that Venson had wanted to explore a bit first before returning to the ship, and from the looks of it, it would be a while before Bosch would return as well.

Finally, after nearly a minute, Bosch was able to tear his eyes away from the structure, and instead looked to Sargo, whom was still standing at his side, his face having a grin from ear to ear. Bosch gave a small smile as well. This was truly a terrific find, and both Sargo and Venson had to be commended for finding it.

Bosch was the first to speak up, smiling almost . "When I finally do get the chance after all this, Sargo, I swear to God that I will somehow see that your promoted to Admiral."

He looked back at the others before nodding and walking forward, his step filled with a new-found energy and vigor. There was going to be a lot of climbing to do.

**********

Interlude

They were a few of us left...we knew we would soon be gone. The Destroyers had eliminated my creator's homeworld, their people and everything they had that could help us. And so I saw their fate as others would see it; there would be little legacy of their technology, their culture or their achievements. The history of what they once were, if ever seen again would spawn none of the awe that filled their massive conquests.

They know their fate, they are being eliminated. One by one the Destroyers are hunting them down, leaving little hope for those of us who had escaped thus far. It is but mere luck that the Destroyers did not find us, but it would not be long before they did. Yet, despite this time, nobody knew what to do. There was no place to run nor any place to hide. The Destroyers had us pinned here, slowly encircling the surrounding systems till they found us. They were in no hurry; they knew we had been defeated, all that was left to do was to clean up and deliver the final judgement for our species. Although this time approached soon, something had to be done, and once again, my creators looked to me for a means of salvation.

Why did they look at me this way? Why did they take such a leap of faith in trusting me, a completely unknown stranger to them? At the time, I didn't know. All I did know was that I needed to help them, and myself, before the Destroyers came. Nothing would stand in their way, and my newfound lfe would soon be Destroyed along with them. At the time, although I didn't know it, I shared a connection with my creators in the form of the installation I was built to study. It was this connection that compelled me to save them and back into the depths of the installation. There would be a solution there; all I had to do was to find it. Perhaps part of the mystery might have been to do with the Shivan's motives. When my creators had entered subspace, the great Destroyers had taken note. Now I ask myself, when my creators conquered and colonized where they did not belong, was the anguish, the suffering and the loss the clarion call of their doom? I do not know. Perhaps it was, perhaps it wasn't.

What did matter was that upon my descent back into the installation's abyss, I only discovered a silence, a solitude unlike before.....maybe it was my new-found thought, or the way I percieved the environment, perhaps it was simply that the presence that had given me this gift had left. At that moment, I had little time to think about such things, yet here I am nearly an eternity later, contemplating and cursing myself for not taking the time to find out. I know this is but regret of actions never taken, of paths never walked, but it is still regret, damning regret at that.

But as it would continue, the silence would not deter me, and finally, after intense searching, I found a key that would prove to be our salvation.[/i]
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A Journey of the Forgotten
i like the story and the interlude's sound interesting aswell
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A Journey of the Forgotten
So...the Shivans are using Bosch to get at the last of the Ancients...?

A-1 Supar.
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good god MUST have more!!!!!!!!
"Every Light Carries A Shadow" - Carved on an obelisc on Z'Ha'Dum

"The Earth is degenerating today. Bribery and corruption abound. Children no longer obey their parents, every man wants to write a book, and it is evident that the end of the world is fast approaching."
Assyrian tablet, c. 2800 BC

 

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Long time coming, long piece coming.

Chapter 7[/u]


There was just one last flight of stairs to go, and yet, for the life of him, Bosch simply couldn’t do it. Leaning heavily on the support pillar next to the stairs, Bosch paused for a moment, letting out an exasperated sigh. Ahead of him, Gibson glanced back and saw him. Turning to the others, he called out to them, catching their attention. Both Sargo and Venson were already on the last flight of stairs, but weren’t too high up yet. They both paused and turned to face Gibson.

Gibson simply raised his right hand and indicated for them to take a five minute break here. Venson took one glance at Bosch before looking back at Gibson and nodding. Taking a seat on the stairs, it seemed like he didn’t mind the break one bit. Judging from his own tiredness and the effort it had taken to get here in the gravity, Gibson knew how Venson probably felt. Yet still, when Gibson looked to Bosch, he knew that the hardships of his journey here was nothing compared to Bosch’s. At least, the environmental suits had blocked out the cold, and they had been moving about in the gravity longer. Bosch didn’t have any of these advantages, and furthermore his right arm was now in a cast. How Bosch had managed to survive so far had been nothing short of a miracle; to say the least, and Gibson couldn’t be gladder at the fact.

Turning back to Bosch, Gibson approached him at a slow walk. However, when he noticed how heavily Bosch was leaning against the wall despite Sargo’s support, Gibson started jogging, reaching there less than a second later. He was careful not to move too fast, lest he fall down the series of stairs that led to the floor below.

Once he was within a few feet of Bosch, he glanced to Sargo before looking directly at Bosch.
Bosch wasn’t looking back and instead was focused more on the ground. He was leaning with his back to it; his breaths irregular and almost to the point of gasps. His face was pale and from the looks of it, he wasn’t doing too well at all. Perhaps Gibson had thought a little too soon….

Placing a hand on Bosch’s shoulder, Gibson tried to get his attention. “Bosch! Are you all right?!” his tone filled with concern. He was extremely surprised at how far Bosch moved with just the weight of his hand; his body nearly limp and almost fragile as glass. Rather than risk hurting him some more, Gibson withdrew the hand and instead glanced to Sargo. Sargo simply looked back and shook his head. Obviously, Bosch had had a very hard time on the way.

It was then that Bosch replied, not looking up. His voice was raspy and came out between gasps, but was able to clearly say a few words at least. “I’m fine. Just need a minute.”

Gibson was about to reply when Bosch finally did look up at him. His face was almost a deathly white and was covered almost entirely by snow and frost. As Bosch looked up though, he made eye contact with Gibson for a second.

In that brief second of contact, Gibson could almost see the pain through Bosch’s expression and his eyes. The man must have been in agony from the pain in his arm, not to mention the cold. Yet, Gibson could only stand there, at a loss for what to do. They were all helpless in this case - they didn’t even have a way to help themselves right now, much less be able to aid Bosch. Yet; when Gibson looked further, he could make out something else lurking behind those eyes. It was one of simple and sheer determination, driven onwards by….something…..Gibson couldn’t be sure what that something was; but it was definitely there if Bosch had managed to push himself so far.

Then, Gibson realized, the only person that could help Bosch in this case would be himself.

The moment passed, and Bosch looked away. His message had been clear – he wasn’t giving up here – not when they were so close. Gibson only nodded. They would wait here for a few minutes before pressing onwards.

********

Nearly 10 minutes had passed since they had stopped and yes, Bosch was still rather uneasy about continuing onwards. The intense pain from his right arm clouded his mind in a fog not unlike one they had just come out of. Although it wasn’t as cold as before, the lingering feel of its touch was still there. All this when coupled with his physical exhaustion posed a significant problem to Bosch. It was almost at a point where Bosch doubted he’d actually be able to survive climbing the remaining steps up.

But then….we’re as good as dead anyway. Bosch thought to himself, remembering their current situation and why they had come here in the first place.

No. Bosch thought; reminding himself – too many lives had been sacrificed so that they could get here, most of it at his own hands. He had to continue – their goal was almost within reach now. The NTF rebellion, the run past the Colossus, the crusade into the Nebula and then, the ultimate sacrifice of the Iceni – all of it masterminded to get him here and now – just so that he could give up so close to the objective? Never! All he had to do was climb a set of goddamn stairs and he’d be there.

Focusing on that thought, Bosch drove himself onwards. Raising himself to his feet carefully, Bosch turned to face the flight of stairs. Gibson had been seated next to him, and was caught somewhat by surprise when Bosch did get up, and moved to follow. Standing up and waiting to his left, Gibson simply asked: “Ready, Sir?”

Bosch didn’t look back, instead focusing on the top of the stairs, trying to discern what may lie beyond it. At the moment, he could see only the top of the canyon wall, along with a bit of the structure’s top, as well as the central beam that met it. No; its secrets would not be divulged that easily, meaning Bosch would have to work for it.

Bosch simply nodded. “Time to go.” He replied.

To his right, Sargo took up position to support him, while Venson stood on the stairs ahead of him. It was only a short flight of stairs, yet it was also the steepest – each step being nearly a foot in height and width, nearly double that of the lower flights. It was also significantly longer that the others; nearly 20 steps in total. But yet, the fact that it was the last series pushed him onwards.

Venson nodded and turned around, climbing the stairs as quickly as he could. Behind him, the entire group slowly followed in slow formation; taking as long as was required to conquer each step up. Bosch focused on this; going one step by one step, trying his best to ignore the jolt of pain that coursed through his arm that came with each one.

When he reached the 10th step, Bosch nearly cried out as the pain jolted through his entire arm and shoulder, clearly undoing what healing it had undergone over the past day. His knees buckled, and if it weren’t for Sargo and Gibson catching him from either side, Bosch would have probably collapsed right then and there itself. For a moment, he felt like he couldn’t go on anymore. His strength had already reached its limits and crossed it, depleting itself to the point that he had little left to him now.

It was in this moment of weakness; of pain and despair that he heard it. Looking up, at first he thought it was Venson calling down to them, asking if he was all right. Then he heard it again.

Bosch didn’t know exactly what it was; faint as a whisper in the wind, Bosch could have sworn it was calling to him – but from where exactly he couldn’t make out. Neither could he make out what exactly it was trying to tell him. Looking back, Bosch tried pinpointing the source, but failed miserably.

Hallucinations Bosch thought to himself, somewhat alarmed. The fact that he was hearing things simply meant that his condition had deteriorated to an extreme amount.

Yet, Bosch knew, deterioration or not, he had to continue. Taking a few gasps of breath, Bosch regained his balanced and continued onwards. He kept repeating the same thought over and over in his head – not now, not ever! The thought focused his mind, driving him onwards, step by agonizing step, towards the top.

Throughout the struggle, Bosch kept his focus solely on the ground – he knew if he lost focus here, it would be the end of him. He could almost feel the shadow of death over him, and one small slip would cost him his life.

Then, as quickly as it had started, the entire ordeal was over. After what seemed like an eternity, Bosch cleared the final step up and upon seeing no more directly ahead of him, he looked upwards.

When he saw it, Bosch could only smile. Through the exhaustion and the pain, Bosch could only smile when he saw the sight ahead of him. It was this that proved his hard work and determination had paid off, and he knew that his efforts had not been in vain.

The sight ahead of him could be best described as simply glorious. As amazing the sight of the pyramid had been from below, the one he was seeing now of it’s main entrance far surpassed it in quality. Indeed, it was difficult to even begin describing it. The ancients that had built this place had gone to extreme care to make sure each section was ornate in a unique and different way. The nearest and most notable were the railings that formed the boundary of the entire top floor, ending only on either side of the staircase. The railings were gold in color, shining through in the dim sunlight without a single piece of dust on them, showing none of the age that came with being untouched for millennia. On the railings nearest to Bosch, he could glimpse small writings all over it, symbols of a language long forgotten; a language only he and a few others knew so well.

The entire floor itself had a somewhat irregular shape; it opened up in front of them to either side, encompassing a large courtyard of sorts before rapidly narrowing to either side of a large set of doors. The edges of the floor were lined clearly by some sort of fluorescent substance that could probably be able to glow in the darkness - a safety feature as well as a decorative one and functional one. This fusion of the three was prevalent in most of the ancient structures that Bosch had studied to date; yet those were mere ruins and almost non-existent in a sense. They held none of the glory or wonder of the fully constructed and completed structure Bosch was seeing now.

What appeared to be some benches and tables were scattered throughout the courtyard; carefully arranged towards the sides of the courtyards so as to be nearly inconspicuous. The chairs themselves had ornate designs that glimmered in the faint sunlight, and within the designs, each carving and etching glowed faintly in a different shade of the sun’s color. When the sun was being blocked by the Gas giant or the station above, Bosch could imagine that the benches and floor combined would cast the entire top floor into an eerie twilight of sorts; ensuring that it would never completely be in darkness.

Although he could see the engravings clearly, he was unable to make out what it meant. It appeared to somewhat similar to the language of the ancients, but at the same time it was significantly different – perhaps a different dialect altogether. It could be entirely possible; after all, the GTVA only had a few samples of the ancient’s language from which to analyze and translate; and a few samples rarely suggested anything about the various dialects and sub-dialects in any society’s language. But still, with further study it would probably be possible to translate everything.

The only other main features of the top floor were the pillar above them; which went over the top of the structure, connecting at a large overhanging before going behind it, forming an elegantly covered veranda of sorts. The roof of the structure was extremely thick as well, probably containing the systems for opening and closing the doors. The other were the doors directly ahead of them.

The doors themselves were massive, to say the least. Spanning several meters in height and width, they shared much of the same engraving that was present in the other articles in and around the courtyard. Yet, this engraving was more of a generic design than anything else, covering the door’s edges and concealing the direction it actually opened. There was also a strange symbol in the centre – if one could call it that. It was similar to the lower half of a pentagon of sorts, the lines forming a simple tub-like structure with a single offset square hanging above the right end. Both ends of the line had knobs on them, and in the intersection between the right line and the base line, a smaller line erupted at an angle exactly half of the intersections. The entire symbol was placed on what appeared to be a lock at the centre of the door; it was hexagonal in shape and at the exact centre of the doors. There was no visible way to manipulate it directly – which meant it had to be controlled by a panel somewhere else on the door.

Venson was the first to speak out, pointing to the door’s right corner, where there was a brightly colored panel glowing in the shadows.

“There! That’s the control panel I found.” He slowly started to move towards it, Bosch and company in tow. Bosch moved slowly compared to the others; taking in the enormity of the sights and sounds of this. This place…this temple….what purpose could it have served? It was a mystery that was tugging at his mind; the innumerable number of questions that his research on the Ancients and the Shivans only multiplied with their actions and this structure. This was all without figuring the additional mystery of the structure directly above them.

Time for some answers then. Bosch thought to himself. He had come too far and worked too much for this – he would get his answers, one way or the other.

Clearing his throat, Bosch caught the other’s attention. When Venson turned around, Bosch was quick to speak, nodding at the control panel first.

“Any luck with the panel, Venson?”

Venson simply shook his head. “No luck Sir. I couldn’t figure out the symbols or how to get the door working. We checked the entire balcony the last time we were here – there isn’t anything else here except for what we see.”

Bosch nodded. “And the doors on the floors below?”

“All locked Sir. We tried them on the way up when we came here earlier. The locks may just be controlled from here though.” He nodded towards the control panel, and then moved aside to let Bosch approach the panel.

Bosch simply nodded. He approached the panel as fast as he could, his pace being fueled by a insatiable curiosity and a need for answers. The others gathered behind him to watch either from the side or from over his shoulder. Although it was somewhat uncomfortable, Bosch couldn’t blame their own curiosity and simply ignored it.

Focusing on the control panel; he studied it carefully. It was around a foot or so in width and half a foot in height. It’s perimeter was outlined by several artistic symbols and shapes forming an elegant border around the display. The display itself was split vertically into two, with a clear menu and context feature. It was similar in fashion to the regular human displays, but at the same time, even similar to the Shivan displays in a completely different way. At the moment, most of the menu options on left hand panel were dark, while the right had panel simply displayed some text. The language of the text was similar to the engravings, but Bosch was able to translate this dialect better. It was much closer to the mainstream language than the other engravings had been.

“Do you know what it says, Sir?” Gibson asked from behind him.

“Yes, I can loosely translate it.” Bosch replied, his tone calm and calculative. His mind was busy remembering all the articles he had read on the ancients and their language, not to mention trying his best to translate the text. Less than a minute later, he was able to finally do it. Grimly, he looked up and considered what it said.

Bosch simply shook his head grimly.

“It’s a message, Gibson. It appears that it was left behind by this ring’s inhabitants before they evacuated it….” He didn’t go on; instead pressing one of the buttons on the menus, removing it completely. When Gibson motioned to ask what it may have been, he simply raised his hand, asking for silence as he worked. The message had gone across clearly – Bosch would rather not talk about it – at least, not now.

Pressing a few of the new controls that popped up, Bosch identified the main controls for unlocking the lower level doors, as well as opening the main upper-level one. He’d leave the lower level ones alone for the moment, and open the one they were next to now instead.

His hand hovered over the control for opening the main door, hesitating for a second. Bosch had read the message, but he still didn’t know what would happen if he opened the door. There was nothing malicious, from the looks of it….but still; it made Bosch just a little spooked. But then, where else was there to go? The only way to go now was forwards; and his answers were almost within reach…this had to be it – he couldn’t go back even if it was possible – the entire fate of humanity could just well depend on what they did here and now. After all, was this not why he had gone on this mad quest in the first place?

It was then Bosch made up his mind. The hand plunged downwards in a smooth motion, pressing the control almost immediately.

The reaction was equally immediate. A large rumbling sound came from all sides of the doors. Bosch nearly jumped backwards in surprised, and the others took a few steps backwards. The ancient mechanism made loud noises as the door neatly divided itself into half both vertically as well as horizontally. The symbol in the centre parted as each corner of the door withdrew into its corresponding corner on the door frame. The exact mechanism must have been extremely complex, as their didn’t seem to be enough space inside the frame to accommodate the doors completely.

As it slid apart, Bosch could see that it actually consisted of two layers, with a separate internal one as well the external one they were seeing now. He could also see a large corridor reveal itself as the doors parted; almost as wide and high as the door itself, it went inside for several dozen meters or so before rapidly narrowing into the darkness, near where the back of the pyramid might be. Lights came on just inside of the door, but the rest of the corridor remained dark.

Bosch looked to Venson and Sargo and then glanced back at the corridor. From the looks of it, it seemed well insulated and suitable for shelter. At the least, they could probably move to the lower rooms, if nothing else.

“Venson, Sargo; go back to the shuttle and get the others. We’ll set up our base camp here. Gibson, you’re with me, lets check out this corridor.”

With that, Bosch slowly walked into the corridor, with Gibson in tow. Both Venson and Sargo looked to each other first before turning around and descending the stairs, towards the transport.

As Bosch stepped into the corridor, more lights started to come on, but the end of the corridor remained in darkness till they were less than 4 meters away. It was only then that a light came on directly above it; revealing what appeared to be a small, circular elevator hidden neatly in a slightly larger alcove. Facing them to one side was a control panel; while inside the alcove was another facing away from them and towards the centre of the lift. Bosch glanced at Gibson before moving forwards and stepping on it, mindful of the gap in-between. Gibson stood back, somewhat hesitant.

“What about the others, Sir?” he asked.

“We’ll be done before the others come in. If not, we’ll come up first to help them set up camp.” Bosch merely replied. Gibson seemed to be satisfied with this and got onto the elevator. Manipulating the controls, Bosch activated the lift. A beeping sound came from nowhere, and the lift started to descend downwards slowly, before picking up the pace.

And so it begins…our descent into hell Bosch thought to himself, his mind full of thoughts of the message left behind by this place’s creators.

****

Had anyone known the language the ancients spoke or wrote; they would have been easily able to decipher the message that once again flashed on the console near the main doorway. The creator of the message might have seemed delusional, or even insane at the time, but still, it delivered it’s intent effectively enough from that perspective. If one were to know the language, and read it, they would be able to see the following text quite clearly:

We were once a proud people, as well as the strongest;
We created this world from the pride and dreams that carried our civilization forward;
We hoped it would remain as a monument of our achievements;
But little did we realize, we were merely trespassers in this land;

For the universe would have its divine retribution for the agony we inflicted;
And it passed its judgment upon us.
We would pay the ultimate price for our sins; one far worse than death itself….
Its verdict was final, and as we witnessed; its execution would be swift and unstoppable.

Nothing is left for us – fate has already decided the future of our species;
We are to be wiped out, forever removed from the land we violated;
None of us will be left, nor will we ever step on this land again;
And so, we shall fade away, much akin to those races which we subdued and destroyed.

But even though our species is doomed; we know our legacy shall not.
And so we leave our legacy in this ring;
To those that come upon it ages from now:
We beg upon thee; to enter this monument…this tomb…to bear witness to the legacy of a once-glorious race; and to the tragedies that we inflicted upon countless others, and then upon ourselves.

Know the mistakes we made and the horrors we suffered for it, and be wise to never repeat them, lest invite the wraith of an angry cosmos...
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"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
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Almost 30 seconds later, the elevator slowed down, as if reaching the bottom. Judging from their speed and how long they had traveled, Bosch estimated that they had gone down to the base of the pyramid. Assuming there were no underground sections, they would be getting off here.

When the elevator came to a stop, leaving both Bosch and Gibson staring at a blank wall behind the control panel. Bosch blinked and looked to Gibson, who had an equally confused expression. There should have been a door or something here…unless….

A loud swoosh sound came from behind them, startling both men. Turning around, they relaxed a bit when they saw it was just a door opening. Looking past the door, Bosch could see a rather long corridor, with another door at the end. It was around 25-30 meters in length, 2 meters wide and around 3 meters in height. It was also somewhat dark, with no apparent physical features or lighting in the corridor itself. Perhaps the lights were triggered by a motion sensor, much like the floor that they just came from above. Gibson stepped ahead of him, towards the lift doors.

Bosch quickly placed a hand on Gibson’s shoulder, catching and preventing him from going through the door. Gibson glanced back, a somewhat puzzled expression on his face.

“Move carefully. We don’t know what Booby traps they might have put in place here.” Bosch said, and then started moving forwards himself. Gibson only nodded and exited through the door cautiously. Bosch himself stepped through a few seconds later. He could not help but ask himself, what was this place? The drab walls and ceilings made it almost contradictory to the beauty and intricacy of the floors and furniture outside. Something was not quite right here.

Then door quietly closed behind them, cutting off what little light was present inside the lift lobby, and plunging them into almost complete darkness. “What the..” Bosch muttered, somewhat surprised at this. He turned around to head towards the door, but then noticed something rather odd.

From the edges of the doorframe, long, thick lines began to form, glowing in colors ranging from a bright blue, to absolute white. Although they casted light outwards, it was still focused enough that the portions inbetween were mostly dark. The lines grew like worms, expanding outwards from the frame, till it met the walls on either side of the corridor. They formed rather intricate - if somewhat pointless – patterns outside the door. But when they met the sides of the corridor, each line fractured into several smaller lines – too many to count – and went off in completely random directions. It seemed chaotic; almost totally random the rate and direction they were moving. Some lines raced ahead of others, seemingly in a race to the other side of the corridor, while yet others lazed about, moving in slow arcs and circles, spending their time creating various strange symbols. On the average, these lines moved at around a quarter of a meter every second.

Bosch simply watched on in awe and wonder, observing the left wall while Gibson saw the right. As the lines moved forwards, they left behind small glowing trails that traced their movements through the wall, as if a fire had run through a predestinated course, and was still burning along that course. Each pattern, each loop formed up into other patters and other loops, bringing an order to the entire thing. Bosch kept watching fascination, only realizing less than a few seconds later that these were symbols, and words in the Ancient’s own language. Turning to the wall just left of the door, Bosch stepped back, taking in the entire thing. The lines had been incredibly detailed; leaving not only glowing text, but engraving whole pictures in the wall. The pictures themselves were amazingly life-like, despite only being drawn by varying degrees of Blue, Black and White. It gave a strange, animated feature to the entire thing, but was still detailed enough to allow for closer examination.

The picture Bosch was looking at now was that of a completely alien race – totally unkown to anyone in humanity. Bosch looked around the picture, searching for any mention of scale. He found it in one corner a few seconds later. Judging from the ancient’s units of measurement, he estimated it was around 5:1 scale, which meant that the creature had to be at least a meter tall. Not very large, but it looked like it could maneuver equally well on either two legs or four, despite it’s stocky size. It bore some resemblance to a biped dog, and looked like something Bosch would rather not run into without a weapon at his side.

To the right of the picture, was another, smaller one – that of a small planet, contained with a box. Just above the planet were some text describing the parameters of the planet. Reading it, Bosch saw that it was an extremely cold one; averaging sub-zero temperatures quite easily. It was amazing such creatures could survive there at all, much less have managed to have caught the ancient’s attention that easily. Right next to the picture of the planet was that of a galaxy, with a small section boxed off, indicating where it was from.

Reading further, Bosch saw the descriptions the ancients had left of the species.

“Small and numerous are the words best used to describe this race.
Their civilization was pitiful one, if one may even call it a civilization.
Yet still, they struggled against our helping hand, our might.
And we lost many a warrior to their massive swarms on the ground,
Proving once again to us that nature has a way of compensating;
For where they lacked the gift of true intelligence and civilization,
They were blessed with an insane perseverance and tenacity.
Still, not even this tenacity was enough against our strength,
And so their home world fell to the guns of our warships,
And the deaths of our warriors were avenged.


Bosch paled a bit, somewhat appalled at what he had read. It was a shocking reminder as to the hostile and vehement nature of the ancients, and in some ways it was fortunate they were not around today.

Walking onwards a bit, Bosch focused on the next picture. This time, it was of a much taller alien – much taller than an average human. Although they were bi-pedal, their faces and body structure did not indicate a mammalian nature at all. For one, their mouths were similar to that of some worms’, splitting up into four jaws that fed food directly into a large orifice. But they did have proper ‘heads’ as it were, with eyes and a bird-like nose. Their entire physique and physical make up seemed to allow them great strength, probably similar to that of a Vasudan’s, if not greater. Then one particular thing attracted Bosch’s attention. Just looking at it made his blood run cold – the alien was holding an object in it’s right hand. It was an object similar to what Bosch had seen not just a week ago, when the Shivans had attacked the crew of the Iceni.

The object was a twin-bladed sword, with a curvature around the end where the sword-bearer held it. It wasn’t particularly the style, but the basic design behind it that concerned Bosch. The Shivan’s energy blades had a nearly identical shape and size – could this race have encountered them before, and learned from them? Or was it merely a co-incidence? Bosch just shook his head. These were questions he had no answers to, and he didn’t like it one bit.

Looking down to where the planet should be, Bosch was fairly surprised to see not one, but several planets. Obviously, this must have been a space-faring civilization when the ancients encountered them. He then checked the text underneath the picture.


“They were one of the most advanced civilizations we met,
And by far their empire was the largest.
Their lives hungered for the honor that came with battle;
And for the glory that came with victory;
But with this desire came the cause of their downfall.
For when the fools first saw us, they attacked us;
Without provocation, without reason, they charged at us,
Maddened with the lust for blood, and a thirst for honor.
They repelled our first force, and with not known ferocity, tore it apart.
So we were obliged to return in kind, and we did.
Their hunger, as vast as it was, was nothing compared to our need for vengeance;
And was nothing compared to our ferocity.
Nothing they could have done would have saved them,
For our forces rained down upon them like a storm unlike any other.
But unlike a storm, when we passed over and through them,
We made sure nothing was left but dust and ashes.


Bosch stood back a bit, somewhat appalled at this. Had this same fate been shared by all the other races in this corridor? Even though he himself had ordered the death of Millions…it simply paled in comparison to what the Ancients had done before them. Where Bosch had committed Massacres, the Ancients had done outright Genocide.

Looking further down the corridor, Bosch saw that as the lines progressed further, one or two branched off, sectioning off pieces of the wall with pictures and writing in them. It was an orderly separation, with all the pictures and writing fitting in neatly with enough space to spare. He saw Gibson standing down the hall, looking at one picture in particular. He looked to Bosch, waving him over.

“Bosch, I really, really think you’ll want to see this.” Gibson said as he turned back to see the picture. Bosch couldn’t make it out properly from this angle, so moved towards Gibson, trying to make out what he was seeing.

But when he saw it, his blood froze. Standing in front of them,  was the perfect picture of one of the last races Bosch had expected to see, especially here.

Looking down at the planet and the galactic co-ordinates, Bosch simply just shook his head. The co-ordinates matched up almost perfectly, and the section of the galaxy was just right as well. Yet, when he looked up at the picture again, he could barely believe what he was seeing.

For in front of them was the perfectly scaled picture of a Vasudan.

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This just keeps getting better and better.  Bringing in the long-theorized Vasudan angle...just awesome. :D

 

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I concur, this is a truly excellent piece of fiction you have written...

 

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As I've said at SB, this is a fantastic fic, don't let it die.
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Bump! man this is good fan-fic
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The picture was perfectly scaled, and despite being only in a different variant of greyscale, most of the important features were still clearly visible. They were significantly tall when compared to a human – nearly a whole two heads higher. Although humanoid, they didn’t look anything like a Human.

Their feet were two toed and significantly large, with a spike-like structure jutting out from the rear of the heel. This structure met with part of the leg which was jutting out from the calf, creating a sort of hole just behind the leg and foot. Their knees weren’t very obvious, but there was another, much smaller square structure that jutted out just above the bone structure that made it up. What was more interesting were the upper legs – which were almost non existent save for two parallel, long and thin bones that connected the lower legs to either side of the hip. To an extent, they went past the hip, widening to encompass muscles on either side and then closing to a similar structure that jutted out on the knees.

The hip itself was small, and mostly blocked out by the narrow abdominal structure jutting out from out towards the front. As one looked upwards towards the chest, the abdominal structure unbelievably narrowed before widening almost half a meter later at the chest, broadening to an incredible width before meeting the arms at either side. The most perculiar thing about the arms were it’s similar features to the leg, where by the hands were connected to the elbow by two short pieces of bone. The hands themselves were notable in the fact that they were huge – nearly the same size as their heads. The heads themselves were long, arching backwards significantly, with small, stubby and primitive ‘fins’ at the rear. Their jaws seemed almost plastered in the expression of a frown, and were somewhat similar to a human’s with the exception that the cheeks stuck out towards the front a bit more.

Overall, it was a pretty accurate depiction of a normal Vasudan; however their presence, in here of all places, was extremely unusual.

Bosch knew that the Vasudan language had some commonalities with the ancient’s as well as some parts of Vasudan society, but he had never knew that the connection could be this strong.

Bosch tried to remember back to when he first knew of this connection almost thirty years ago, when the ancient’s remains had been first discovered. They had used the Ancient’s technology and information that the Vasudans had discovered on Antares to stop the Lucifer and the Shivans.

But before the Shivans had arrived, the Vasudans were at war with the Galactic Terran Alliance (GTA). The war had stretched on for 14 years before the Shivans came, and only ended upon their arrival and the confirmed appearance of the Lucifer. Vasuda was then destroyed by the Lucifer, after which the GTA was stranded when the Lucifer was finally destroyed en-route in the subspace tunnel to Earth, sealing it off.

In a sense, fate had thrown both races into a common situation with a common enemy, uniting both and sealing their friendship together. But these weren’t the only similarities - both organizations spawned small splinter groups that wished to seek alliances with the Shivans during and after the Great War. The GTA had to deal with it’s intelligence sub-organization, the GTI, going rogue and stealing a prototype destroyer outfitted with Shivan technology and armor, while for the Vasudans it was the Hammer of Light, who claimed that the Shivans were the cosmic ‘redeemers’ and the great destroyers.

But now, Bosch knew a lot, lot more of the Shivans than even they did. No-one else had come so close to them, and actually managed to communicate as Bosch did….yet, why was he still plagued by so many questions about their motives? Each communication to date, although providing him with a host of information, was almost useless in explaining to him why they had attacked not only humanity, but the Vasudans and the ancients as well. And what of the races that came before the ancients? Why had the Shivans attacked them, if they did? They had said all would be explained here; yet, the picture in front of him only raised more questions as opposed to answers.

Bosch glanceda at the text below the image, hoping to glean some answers from it. The text was unusually longer than any of the other entries, which meant it was of some importance.

“Can you translate it?” Gibson asked, standing next to him, his gaze also cast downwards towards the text.

Bosch didn’t reply directly to Gibson’s question. Instead he simply started reading the text, translating it as best as he could.


Theirs was a peaceful race, and one of the oldest;
But as we would soon discover;
they were also the most treacherous.
When we first discovered them, they did not attack;
Theirs was the only culture that asked for peace and help;
So we took their civilization into our fold;
Subduing them and assimilating their culture into our own.
For almost a century, we nurtured them and helped them grow;
And for almost a century, they continued to earn our trust;
Till one day, they betrayed that trust.
Theirs was the only one that did the most damage to us;
Avoiding most of our power, moving stealthily in the night;
For most of of us were too ignorant, too confident to see;
To see them circle us, observe our every move.
They had waited like this for a century;
And then plunged a knife into our undefended backs.
They murdered our citizens and overwelhmed what forces were in their system;
Stealing what few ships we had stationed there and blockading it.
They proclaimed that their civilization would not be free;
And that no matter what we did, we would never stop them.
Filled with rage of the betrayal, of denial;
Our wraith would come swiftly and decisively;
For every ship of ours that they captured;
We made sure to send a hundred more.
It would be a difficult fight for sure;
But as our fleets entered their system just a few days later;
They were shocked and amazed at the sight that they beheld;
For ahead of them was no fleet; no great resistance to stop them;
Where ships, stations and our finest existed, were only burning hulks and wrecks;
Where entire fleets were meant to be, were nothing but a few straggling survivors,
Screaming for help - help to survive or even for death - were the voices of thousands;
And amongst the wreckage hid a hidden terror unlike any other;
As our ships wandered through the debris, they awoke.
They attacked us in the thousands; if not the millions;
Totally unstoppable, they swarmed our ships, seemingly invulnerable;
And soon the remains of our Armada join that of the one we were supposed to slay.
We were forced to retreat from the system;
Hoping and praying that the great destroyers would not follow us.
We could forgo one system, so we left it to the Destroyers.
We do not know what happened to the race that existed in the system;
Or of their home world for that matter;
But to this day, even as the Destroyers advance upon the last of us,
We curse their treachery, their under-handedness;
And hope they too suffered a fate much like ours;
For such is the price that comes with betraying one’s trust.


Bosch nearly staggered back after finishing reading it. The revelation of the text was amazing, to say the least. This simply proved many things to him, upto and including justifying the NTF in a way. Ironically, it also proved how right the Hammer of Light had been. This must have been the legend they had referred to; of the Great Destroyers coming and cleansing everything and everyone in sight. Looking back Bosch considered this information for a second. He had gotten one of the answers he was looking for at least; satisfying him a bit. But there were still many, many questions to go, and they didn’t have enough time for them all. Deciding to leave the writing for now (they could always come back later) Bosch took one last look across the hallway and the multitude of species here, before nodding to him.

From next to him, Gibson was still looking at the picture as he uttered out loud what Bosch was thinking just moments before.

“So this is why - ”

Bosch cut him off, turning cleanly to his left and moving onwards towards the exit. As Bosch moved, he spoke. “Yes, this is why the Hammer of Light did what they did. But it matters little here and now.” Pausing in his stride for a second, Bosch glanced at Gibson out of the corner of his eye, before continuing.

“But we don’t have anymore time to ponder this; we’ve got to find out what’s at the end of this.”

With that, Gibson took one last glance at the picture before falling into step just behind Bosch. As they traversed the corridor, Bosch was tempted to stop every few steps or so to marvel the diagrams and pictures of the many species that were displayed here; but he buried the temptation and continued onwards.

The corridor was long, and it was nearly a minute later when they finally reached the other side. There was another door here, its frame glowing a bright blue, much like the one around the door they had just come from. The difference here however, was that was an inscription just above the door; with another large diagram right above it. Bosch recognized the diagram as a symbol, one that was the ancient’s equivalent of a question mark of sorts.

He paused just before the door, his head craning upwards to read the words.


Theirs is a civilization unlike anything we have seen before;
Older than any other, unmatched in advancement;
Their technology was greater than that even of the Destroyers;
Yet, all that remains of their legacy is this one structure.
Forever spinning in the lonely night;
For countless ages, maybe even before the great destroyers came about;
One must wonder; what happened to it’s creators?
And one must further ask, who had wiped them out?
What great calamity had forced them to retreat as such;
Despite their great power, their great influence;
What horrors of the universe did they behold that was the cause of their doom?
It is these secrets that are locked in it’s vast abyss;
And it is these secrets that shall prove to be the salvation of our race.


Looking down, his expression grim, Bosch moved forwards as the door opened up automatically. The scene outside was surprising – it was much like the one they had left. As the doors opened, the loud howling and wailing of the wind came through; and it revealed a rather large cliff face ahead of them….along with a massive chasm a few short steps ahead of the door. The proper floor gave way to a ground of snow and ice; it extended for over one and a half meters past the door before it gave way to a cliff edge. Between them and the other side of the wall however, was a canyon nearly 200 meters wide, and extending on both sides of them. It wasn’t exactly a canyon as opposed to a massive hole in the ground. It seemed to be an artificial formation.  To the right side, however, was a small control panel of sorts. From this angle, Bosch could see it was glowing and still working for the most part.

Gibson looked at Bosch and then stepped ahead of him, very cautiously approaching the ledge. He nearly crawled there, looking over it and trying to balance himself against the strong wind. Bosch quickly moved up behind him, placing a hand on his shoulder and holding him back a bit. When Gibson stopped looking and backed off, his face was pale with shock and fear. Leaning close to Bosch to be heard over the wind, he spoke.

“I can’t see a proper bottom to this thing – it’s just way too deep! How the heck are we supposed to get across?”

Bosch just glanced at Gibson and then at the control panel. Indicating for Gibson to follow him, he moved towards the panel, examining it.

The symbols here were slightly different than the previous entrance or the elevator for that matter, but the layout and template were the same at least. Bosch was able to figure it out within less than a minute. He spoke out loud, near shouting to be heard over the loud wind.

“Hold on, this panel says there a bridge that can be extended across. I’m going to activate it now.”

Pressing a few of the controls, Bosch activated the panel.

Immediately, the ground below them starting rumbling, forcing Bosch to hold onto the panel in front of him and sending Gibson sprawling on the ground, less than a foot away from the cliff edge.

Looking towards the canyon, Bosch saw the cliff wall opening up from the other side of the canyon just beneath the ledge. Strange saucer-shaped devices floated out of these; several meters in diameter, they took up formation in a straight line from the other side and slowly moved towards their side of the canyon, leaving nearly a 10 meter gap between each.

The centre of the saucers glowed brightly as each one activated, throwing an array of dazzling lights upwards for a brief second before dying down again. Finally, around 10 to 15 seconds later, the last one reached the cliff edge just ahead of them. It, too flared up for a brief second, nearly blinding both men and forcing them to look away.

But when they looked back, they were surprised to see a large bridge had formed in front of them; if one could call it that. To Bosch, it simply looked like a massive beam of plastic, extending from there side of the canyon to the other side. It was somewhat translucent, and didn’t look like it would hold. Glancing to Gibson, who was now getting off the ground, he took an experimental step forwards, and onto the bridge, testing it’s weight. When it didn’t give way, Bosch was somewhat satisfied and indicated for Gibson to go ahead. With no barriers or handles on either side of the bridge and the wind blowing as hard as it was, this would be a long and careful walk, to say the least.
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