I'm not informed about the plot of the mission so the testing can't be complete.
1)This mission is a red-alert one? Why messages from Command are disabled?
2)The freighters should be facing their waypoints.
3)The cargo of the freighters should be known to the player.
5)I assume that Leo wing was following the Vasudans. If yes, it should be orientated differently(point to either Vasudan).
6)You can give orders to basically everything....
7)Are the hostiles rebels? Is so, you should use alt names for them.
8)Gemini attacks the Boone, a bit unrealistic. Use protect ship for the Installation.
9)Place the waypoints differently. Freighters either ram or get too close each other.
10)The freighters undock from the installation after a short amount of time. I know the mission may become too long...
11)Freighters with their cargo units destroyed continue their dock course. I know that Tritons have internal bays....