[Blitzerland]

Um, you sure you want nitpicking? Well, okay. If any of the following offends you, let me know, and I'll downgrade it to "Polite, Constructive Advice." That said, here's your nitpicking.

[cruel honesty] The briefing is short, the in-game messages are outright lies, and once the Shivan corvette goes down, there isn't even a victory message or a return to base message. Your only enemy is a single wing of Maras. No background, no nothing.

The wing name is annoying, and makes it hard to keep track of your wingmates in battle. Furthermore, how come the vasudan corvette doesn't fire beams until it's just about ready to collide with the Moloch? Huh? Tell us, Raa!

Finally, there isn't any difference between the first and second verison. Huh? Why is that Raa? I HATE YOU, RAA! I HATE YOU![/cruel honesty]

Uh, ignore that last paragraph. Urm...

Uh...er...I blame the school systems.

[Taristin]

The messages are lies? How so?
Taurin wing arrives.
Command acknowledges.
Thut claims to take control.
Eventually a Ravana enters. And the Thut says so.
Thut is eventually destroyed, and taurin wingmate pulls a captain obvious.


I don't care that you don't like the wing name.

The Corvette isn't supposed to attack until either you are ~500m from the corvette, or the enemy wing is destroyed.
Why? I dunno. I felt like doing that.

There should be a difference between the versions.

And the briefing is short because I gave up mid stream

[Blitzerland]

The messages are lies because they talk about a "cain," not a "moloch."

[brutal honesty] It's a corvette, Raa! A corvette! [/brutal honesty]

Dang, I did it again, didn't I? Slap me if I do that again. Please.



The Ravana never jumped in for me. What are its arrival conditions?

[Taristin]

Umm. The message names should refer to a cain, but the messages themselves whould say Moloch.

The Ravana is supposed to jump in randomly when the moloch hits 20-45% hull.