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Offline Mobius

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Re: M09: The lost Volition mission
As I can see,the mission is full of grammar errors....
Which means that someone who doesn't speak English made it,right?
Oh,there's the GTCv Steadfast....uhm...
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Re: M09: The lost Volition mission
Excellent, that's a lot better than I could do. "Rest quarters" makes some sense for U5. I'm not sure about U1 though; "were summoned to" makes sense but I can't hear any "to" in there at all. That and U2 are for the most part all that's left. I'll update the original post.
« Last Edit: September 22, 2006, 03:47:56 am by CP5670 »

 

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Re: M09: The lost Volition mission
In the first briefing, it sounds like "we have come to".
In U2, I got "no further messages have been sent, doubtless to avoid attracting the Shivan's attention."
In the second debriefing, it's "neglected", not "neglect".