Derelict was well made, but the only problem with it was the pathetic voice acting.
If you don't mind me asking so, what was so "pathetic" about the voice acting? Considering that those of us in this community who do take the time to record lines for projects are a bunch of complete amateurs using a varied array of ****ty microphones, I think we did a pretty damn good job on Derelict.
(Note that I'm not taking this as a personal affront or anything; I'd just like to hear some reasoning behind your statement.)
Well if you've played the Freespace 2 campaign, you'll have notice the stress, anger, humor, anxiety, fear and absolute panic in the voices of some of the pilots.
Now i'll hand it to you, i -DID- enjoy the antics of Alpha 2. "Looks like the defacation is about to hit the ventilation...

" , but the rest of it was pretty damn poor, ESPECIALLY the mission where the Nyralathotep cuts itself free. That had the potential to be the best mission ever, but the voice acting made it horrible.
Quite frankly, it was just too....plain. There will very little emotion and strength in the words. I understand you arent a professional actor, but you dont need to be. A bit of panicking, an agressive yell, a trembling voice of terror...its quite simple to do, and works wonders. Imagine if -you- were in the seat of a ship no bigger then a bus, surrounded by the blackness of space, and being hunted by aliens flying black and red ships that can send you into a cold vacuum.