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Offline Maxwell

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Re: Justify my plot device
Having valid excuses would be good if one character is trying to rationalize the whole thing. He might be delaying the eeriness for a chapter or two, building up to some more unsettling scenario.

If your on a boat and the radio goes dead you still don't wake up the entire crew (mainly because the night watch would be rather pissed at you).
You sooner think to yourself "well maybe the radios gone bad"
*check radio, it works fine*
"or maybe theres some interference"
*scan channels, nothing else broadcasting*
"or maybe..."  *gets near harbor, sees mushroom cloud rising from city* "...yea, that might be it"

 

Offline Colonol Dekker

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Re: Justify my plot device
Did you ever play silent hill 2, Radios are EEEVIL !! :eek2: :nervous: :shaking:
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

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Offline jr2

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Re: Justify my plot device
No.  Why are they evil?  (Use spoiler tags if you must, but I'm prolly not gonna watch this movie, so tell me plz.)

 

Offline Black Wolf

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Re: Justify my plot device
Do you even need an excuse? After all, if Earth suddenly stopped talking to them halfway through the voyage, it's not as if they can turn around and go home, since waking all the people early would, as you stated, put too much of a strain on the ship's systems, so having contact suddenly stop for no apparent reason would just add to the eeriness of it. I suppose it depends on 'what happens' and whether it is something that could justify going from 'normal communication' to 'silence' in the space of a single broadcast.

Well, they catch up with Earth later. Logically, the first thing they would ask would be "Why did you stop talking to us?"
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Offline Colonol Dekker

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Re: Justify my plot device
No.  Why are they evil?  (Use spoiler tags if you must, but I'm prolly not gonna watch this movie, so tell me plz.)

No, the game i meanz :lol:
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The only good Zod is a dead Zod
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Offline jr2

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Re: Justify my plot device
Hmmm.... I'll have to look for it.  You could still tell me, though..

 

Offline bizzybody

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Re: Justify my plot device
Techno-luddites (perhaps the Wahabbi Islamo-fascist terrorists who currently make many speeches about how they're gonna take over the world- dragging it back to the 17th century, except *they* will still have modern shiznit like weapons and mini-puckups to shoot from and RPGs) manage to do what they want and in the process use anti-satellite missiles to take out the orbiting laser communications platforms. (What's the best way to destroy a single use weapon? Fire it at the infidels or infidels' stuff- like those nasty infidel comm satellites!)

*poof* Contact with the sleeper ship- lost!

Once civilization comes back and pounds the Wahabbists into the sand (possibly including turing many hectares of said sand into glass), rational people get with the program and invent your FTL drive in time to greet the sleeper ship at its destination.
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Offline TrashMan

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Re: Justify my plot device
Solar flare or micro-meteorite storm could also do the trick..*POOOf* ..no more comm sattellitle..and it would take som time to get a replacement
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Offline Colonol Dekker

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Re: Justify my plot device
Who mentioned HAL and the AE unit? :confused:
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
President of the Scooby Doo Model Appreciation Society
The only good Zod is a dead Zod
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Offline jr2

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Re: Justify my plot device
Well there's always this old, proven option... :p

Onboard computer: I've just picked up a fault in the AE35 unit. It's going to go 100% failure in 72 hours.

 

Offline Black Wolf

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Re: Justify my plot device
Techno-luddites (perhaps the Wahabbi Islamo-fascist terrorists who currently make many speeches about how they're gonna take over the world- dragging it back to the 17th century, except *they* will still have modern shiznit like weapons and mini-puckups to shoot from and RPGs) manage to do what they want and in the process use anti-satellite missiles to take out the orbiting laser communications platforms. (What's the best way to destroy a single use weapon? Fire it at the infidels or infidels' stuff- like those nasty infidel comm satellites!)

*poof* Contact with the sleeper ship- lost!

Once civilization comes back and pounds the Wahabbists into the sand (possibly including turing many hectares of said sand into glass), rational people get with the program and invent your FTL drive in time to greet the sleeper ship at its destination.

That is really, really good. It fits perfectly into what I want to do with Earth :). Congratulations, sir... you've just justified my plot device :D
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Offline Colonol Dekker

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Re: Justify my plot device
We have a winner !


So how long til yu release a beta? :D
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
President of the Scooby Doo Model Appreciation Society
The only good Zod is a dead Zod
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Offline Mefustae

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Re: Justify my plot device
That is really, really good. It fits perfectly into what I want to do with Earth :). Congratulations, sir... you've just justified my plot device :D
Aww, you mean we've all been spoilered about your story? Dang nabbit.