"Couldn't help but think would Dekker approve." That was my first thought before I even read that line.
She doesn't really look different. Which is good because I probably wouldn't like you changing the established character designs too much. I suppose you'd have to colour her in for me to see properly. Changing the eye colour is no biggie, but I wouldn't go wild with unnatural colours. You've got the Cyrvans to crazy on with that, I presume Luna will be getting a design.
I always thought Dawn had green eyes, but it's just the shine from that thing in her hand in the picture with her stats. So I thought she was green eyed, then you tell me brown, now changing maybe to blue/purple. So it's not going to make any difference to me really what her eye colour is now at this point!
I'm not sure what to make of that ship. Is it supposed to be the new Prometheus Frame?
You just keep plugging away at the math, I know game balance was a big deal, maybe the biggest deal to you in this project.