Finished what the first chapter. Only one major gripe, the rest are minor issues. My major gripe is the GTVA's Ceres-Class fighter. You see the enemy use it a lot, and it seems great, yet you only get to fly it once, and what do you do with it? Run away!
The minor issues are as follows:
There is a spelling error in the mod description. "Rouge" should be "rogue."
In "Home Doorstep," there is a GTSC Faustus "Nossae," that should be marked as unknown but is instead marked as friendly.
In "In the Storm's Wake," the directive for destroying the Asellius is marked as completed before the mission starts.
Other than that and a few others I may have missed, you did a fantastic job!