[bobbtmann]

I would like to read your story, Battuta.

[General Battuta]

I would like to read your story, Battuta.

PM me with your email.

[mxlm]

Guys, he's lying, he doesn't need your emails, he just doesn't like you.

I know, he's mean.

[General Battuta]

I've been reworking the most complex, irritating scene in the story. Nobody's mentioned getting hung up on it yet, but guh, the character motivations are so...tricksy.

[IronBeer]

Just finished reading.

Good story, and I think that

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describing the general gist of it as a broad-spectrum mind**** would not be inaccurate. Very interesting thoughts on some of the issues that could be raised by transhuman existence, and the nature of memory and sanity.

[General Battuta]

Hooray!

Thank you.

[bobbtmann]

I would like to read your story, Battuta.

PM me with your email.

Strange, I thought it was on my profile...

[General Battuta]

I would like to read your story, Battuta.

PM me with your email.

Strange, I thought it was on my profile...

You've got it hidden.

[Scourge of Ages]

One issue that I've had with this sort of thing, namely the

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"we had to [REDACTED], but you agreed and gave authorization for it" theme, is that it would solve a lot of problems if they would just tell the poor guys when they woke up, instead of trying to hide it. Did you give a reason for that in the story and I missed it?

[General Battuta]

The reason is sort of implied, and I definitely had something in mind.

But it's also something I'm still playing with. I could in fact cut that whole plot point (and suggest the process was involuntary) without significantly changing the story.

One major problem I have is that I really really do not wamt the word count to grow further. It's already way too long.

[Dilmah G]

Battuta, I love you. So very, very, much. Would you like the donation to the GB Fund in cash or credit?

[mxlm]

The reason is sort of implied, and I definitely had something in mind.

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Something along the lines of, "Yeah, well, we would tell you, but that would bring you down from peak combat efficiency and damage your sanity, while the entire point of this exercise is to maintain your sanity and effectiveness"?

[Colonol Dekker]

If you still can, could you e-mail it [email protected]?

[General Battuta]

The reason is sort of implied, and I definitely had something in mind.

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Something along the lines of, "Yeah, well, we would tell you, but that would bring you down from peak combat efficiency and damage your sanity, while the entire point of this exercise is to maintain your sanity and effectiveness"?

Precisely so.

[Qent]

I'd like to read this please.

[General Battuta]

I'll handle the backlog of story requests once I'm moved in. Sorry.

[AndrewofDoom]

Right, I wouldn't mind reading what you've got.

PMed you my email.

[Rand al Thor]

Yup, I'd love to give it a perusal. PMing my email now.

[General Battuta]

Sent out another batch.

[Kolgena]

5 stars.

I'll probably come back to this thread again when spoilers are discussed more openly. I mean, there are spoiler tags, but then people will read them anyways and ruin the story.

Edit: Is it okay if I pass this on to a couple of my best buds to read? If it's okay, I could just forward my copy over, or I could have them give you their emails.