Originally posted by untouchable
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Not bad so far, the 3-part hull is evident, its a good start. Since its a WIP it's understandable that some things are missing, but here are some pointers:
- The Goliath's neck is not supposed to be any narrower than the head itself, and there's only supposed to be one neckpiece. There should be a very large, squarish crevice all through the underside of the neck, tho. At the back of the crevice is Fighterbay #5.
- The double-Enercade mount on the chin should be short (both in length and in height) and should end quite abruptly about 1/4 of the head's length back. Past that it slopes upwards to create the aforementioned neck crevice.
- The rear thing should stick out a bit farther downwards before connecting to the ubermount. Then theres the ubermount itself, the HDP (the smaller, farther forward, ventral main-hull-to-ubermount-connector-structure) and other such things, but its pretty clear you havent gotten to that yet
- Mid and rear sections should be quite a bit larger in proportion to the head
- the side-mounted engines on the rear (make sure to face the side poly's on them slightly forwards)
- dorsal hump on rear section
- extremely angular look to the hull (I have a feeling this won't be a problem
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