First off, very nice work, for a beginning renderer.

The models are rendered very crisply and the thruster glows look great. The lasers are also nicely done, and are fairly well aligned to the perspective of the scene...but the Mara isn't. It seems to be almost as far away from the camera as the Herc is, and the angle the Herc seems to be firing at just doesn't seem to match up. If the exploding Mara were bigger, it would help a lot. Also, you could try to use realistic lighting and shadows- the engine lights look good, like I said, but making it look more like the sun is the only source of white illumination on the Herc would be great. And, to make the shadowed parts still visible, you could color them darkly in green, from the lasers.
Just my bit of humble criticism!

Keep them coming, once again, excellent work!
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[This message has been edited by Sushi (edited 07-24-2001).]