So I finally got around to playing this one, and it was definitely pretty fun! I'm not sure if you're still looking for feedback, but I thought I'd provide it anyway:
Three things in general; only having stars in the background is kind of "meh", the weapon loadouts available feel a little overpowered (I grabbed 4xAGM's), and the escort lists should be used for every mission. Packing this like Karajorma said would also be good!
M1-Make the raiders stealthed until the vipers identify them.
Nit-picks on the Debriefing: { "Luckily, the
raptor's computer...", "Because of your intervention
during the Cylon attack, we...", "
but As you know..." }
M2-Change launch key to backslash, just to be the same as the R1 campaign.
-A typo in the message "Stay inside debris field"
-The viper pilot "Landing Directive Trigger" is targetable
Nit-picks on the Debriefing: { "All right pilots," there are infinity symbols after "...Asheron wasn't attacked as well." }
M3-I keep receiving "Engine failure. Cannot engage FTL." even when the raptor jumps.
-Can't find the second raptor.
-"Alpha 1, Star... We have been
sent..."
-Claims both ships were destroyed, when both survived (but disabled) according to the event log.
M4-After Asheron jumps, you get the message "Here Arenea Carrier,..."
-AGM's make the kamikaze event trivial, though I didn't expect the passenger liner to be destroyed by it.
Cheers!