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Offline Darkage

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Death around the corner
:eek2:  This is actualy my second FS2 render i ever made whit lightwave ! I am prety proud of it. It was also a render to see how my shield came out and i must say for a first timer on shields it doesn't look that bad.

So what do you people think?

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Offline Joey_21

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Vewy pwetty :nod: :yes:

 

Offline wEvil

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try adding some kind of opacity map onto it so its not flaring all the way around - the shader seems tight though ;)

 

Offline Darkage

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Originally posted by wEvil
try adding some kind of opacity map onto it so its not flaring all the way around - the shader seems tight though ;)


Hmm...your right, i'll try later;)
It's prety late:D

I have a nice plugin that could be of use otherwise i'll just add one in the surface editor.
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Sweet. looks like a still frame from an episode of a scifi TV show. :D
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Offline Alikchi

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A good first try :nod: It seems a little..off (maybe it's just me?) but everything looks good overall.
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Offline Stryke 9

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Not bad. The Herc looks like it hasn't hatched yet, tho.

 

Offline Darkage

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Originally posted by Stryke 9
Not bad. The Herc looks like it hasn't hatched yet, tho.



Does it look that much like an egg?:)
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Offline Redfang

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It's very good, but the flak explosions are odd. They have a corner. :p

 

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Offline Darkage

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Ooh, Dragons! We don't see enough of those ships! ;)


I like those bugs thats why i used them:D
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Offline Gortef

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Originally posted by darkage



Does it look that much like an egg?:)


I bit so yea... like a plastic egg... you know the one you get inside a Kinder chocolade egg

Otherwise the render looks really cool, very intence battle :nod:
Habeeb it...

 

Offline Stunaep

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well, here's my constructive criticism:

The shield.
The Yellow beam. It is not a FS2 beam. FS2 beams have a white center. This one is more B5-ish
The beam glow of the Rakshasa is wayyy to big. Almost looks like an engine glow.
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Offline RandomTiger

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Nice, but I dont think you have those shield quite right

 

Offline Darkage

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Originally posted by RandomTiger
Nice, but I dont think you have those shield quite right



Hehe..as i said it was a first try;)

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Originally posted by Stunaep
well, here's my constructive criticism:

The shield.
The Yellow beam. It is not a FS2 beam. FS2 beams have a white center. This one is more B5-ish
The beam glow of the Rakshasa is wayyy to big. Almost looks like an engine glow.


It's a FS2 beam it has a white center, it didn't work out that well. i'll fix it later.

The beamglow i'll also fix.
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check it out! my version of death around the corner!

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Offline Stryke 9

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[devours vadar]

Man, that was bad. Anyway...

 

Offline Stunaep

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*sees vadars comic*
*falls over from heart attack*

I can't stand that much bad humour. And if you look at my teachers, I can stand a lot.
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Offline Darkage

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Comments about my pic please:rolleyes:

and Vadar_1 remove that damn stupid pic, if you want to show that stuff make your own thread, and not by hijacking mine !:mad:
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Offline Stealth

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i really like it Darkage!  looks really professional!