[deep_eyes]

Im curious if anyone sings, raps, rhymes, any type of verbal music. if so i was wondering if anyone is interested, if they rap/ rhyme in pecticular, if they wanted to battle (verse for verse, rules or no rules, but no flaming, and always remember its only words).

[demon442]

Im an amature at the whole freestyle thing, but i got a buddy that can lay down some psychotic rhymes.

[Stealth]

Freestyle it's called... i'm very amateur... do you mean battle over the internet?  or verbally?

Jin 0wns (if anyone knows who i'm talking about)

[deep_eyes]

Well anyone who want to battle reply and start off a 20-to-30 bars of verse. then anyone willing to respond to it, or i will respond if im on.

[Stealth]

no, you start... and we'll battle it  me and you.

all these n00bs can learn

[Knight Templar]

lol this should be funny to watch stealth.

You guys are all talk, somebody start.

[deep_eyes]

First 20-30 Bars
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-Deep that dark assasin come thru like dark templar
-stealth teflon, flak jacket keep the haters shells from gettin a kid raint on
-I get hit from the left, i drop, pull off 2 shots from the glock
-Hit a kid in the chest, luckly he was wearing his bullet proof vest
-this the life i stress, imagine pain and death
-new york the city, where people are witty
-Smoke the ill philly, gettin busy
-Hustlin, makin that paper, find a shorty, get trizzy
-When home, rest home, log onto HLP and flame stealthy (YEA BOI!)
-He wanna battle me, the ill mathmatical get you verbally
-Post a smily, and all you be is:nervous: (<-shook) violently
-Inside of me is the soul of a lyricist whos trying to get up out of me
-Fly about and straight curse a playa out infront of me
-Straight buck a Shivan on the third degree
-aint no HLP MC is messin with me.


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ok 13 bars... its late sue me.

And were just sayin rhymes back and forth, we dont mean no hate or harm, just competition, so dont close thread please.

[Dr.Zer0]

hmm, improv... maybe, freestyle... NO I just cant think and ryme at the same time... oh wait, I just rymed without thinking, damn it

[Knight Templar]

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- As the rain fall, Chillin' me to the bone
- I look to my left, see an old drunkard let out a groan
- I'm thinkin' it's dark, i need to get home
- But all i know is the night before.
- How could i let her go?
- It was like a dream, turned bitter sweet
- like all you see in the damn tv
- So i go home and wonder how and why
- All things i could have told her, if only i could hold her
- look her in the eye and tell once and for
- shout to the world , we could have had it all
- but no, i was the one who took the fall.
- Now i sit here alone, lyin to myself, cryin to myself
- all I have now is my soul to rely on, i know i can carry on
- You playa's all think you're da ****, tellin' me i need to learn to take a hit
- All you need is time, so you can see what its like to be me
- And then you might take back all that **** you said
- after you feel the feeling for the first time, the true love
- After all, there's more to it than the occasional screw.
- or so I hear...


meh.. i need a drink

[deep_eyes]

Originally posted by Knight Templar
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- As the rain fall, Chillin' me to the bone
- I look to my left, see an old drunkard let out a groan
- I'm thinkin' it's dark, i need to get home
- But all i know is the night before.
- How could i let her go?
- It was like a dream, turned bitter sweet
- like all you see in the damn tv
- So i go home and wonder how and why
- All things i could have told her, if only i could hold her
- look her in the eye and tell once and for
- shout to the world , we could have had it all
- but no, i was the one who took the fall.
- Now i sit here alone, lyin to myself, cryin to myself
- all I have now is my soul to rely on, i know i can carry on
- You playa's all think you're da ****, tellin' me i need to learn to take a hit
- All you need is time, so you can see what its like to be me
- And then you might take back all that **** you said
- after you feel the feeling for the first time, the true love
- After all, there's more to it than the occasional screw.
- or so I hear...


meh.. i need a drink

dang fam who head u cuttin off lol? good stuff!

[aldo_14]

*fears the onset of Disco vicar syndrome*

[diamondgeezer]

You mean the dancing priest? That dude could move

[CP5670]

weird stuff...

[Reaper]

METAL will arise!!:devil:

[Stealth]

Originally posted by deep_eyes
{Deep_Eyes Freestyle}

-Man you think you got it bad up in new york city
-I'm living on my own here, livin' with no family
-See that's how it is homie like it or not
-As if it's not bad enough that late bills keep stackin' up
-No one ever told me that it would cost this much
-Come buckle up, come along for the ride
-You can change the world, no matta' what they say!
-While you shootin' people, fillin' them fulla lead
-I hope you don't take a bullet, to the back of your head!
-It's up to you, keep playin' what you feel
-I'll keep praying for you while you shoot to thrill

[Joey_21]

Originally posted by Reaper
METAL will arise!!:devil:

Either that or rap-rock.

Good stuff I see. deep_eyes, is that a little Linkin Park influence I hear in there?

[deep_eyes]

Originally posted by Stealth


-Man you think you got it bad up in new york city
-I'm living on my own here, livin' with no family
-See that's how it is homie like it or not
-As if it's not bad enough that late bills keep stackin' up
-No one ever told me that it would cost this much
-Come buckle up, come along for the ride
-You can change the world, no matta' what they say!
-While you shootin' people, fillin' them fulla lead
-I hope you don't take a bullet, to the back of your head!
-It's up to you, keep playin' what you feel
-I'll keep praying for you while you shoot to thrill

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oooooooooo fiesty! (imitating blade in blade 2.)

Ima post my reply to that in a min...

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naw joey, im trying to sensor my words cause i dun wanna say something that would get this thread cut off, cause if i did, i'd probrbaly get IP banned, and no not linkin park influenced, try Big L, Nas, Jay-Z, Talib Kwalei and everyones favorite white rapper, Slim Shady aka Rabbit! (8mile was good)...

[deep_eyes]

Ok ok... heres mah responce
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-Ayo check it, im straight loco, to hell with you and your girl
-You aint a big dog, your more like toto you got no dough
-I rock a platinum ro-ro (rolex), pack a nice fo'-fo' (forty mag)
-I got smilies for ya flassies, got you on the net like yo-yo
-Post the :thepimp: smilely, and i get across my persona properly
-Aint nada you can say that can make me sound cowardly
-Ive been thru 2 verses and battle strengthed by hypocracy
-I hope ya'll can spit properly, cause if it wasnt for the rules of this forum
-i'd flame ya ass quite violently
-silently, ya'll run the the far corners of the forum privately

[Stealth]

Originally posted by deep_eyes
{Deep_Eyes Freestyle2}

-I see everybody typing lyrics, so i put my hand on the keys,
-and with no hesitation i start my flow with ease,
-What? Look at me, i can bust a rhyme every single second
-It's the beat on Deep_Eyes i was just checkin'
-Yo this site is kinda hot, or maybe its the heat from the keys,
-Watch me destroy this challenger viciously,
-just like a herd of damn fleas
-I cant wait to get in the battle competition file
-Cause my lyrics gonna spread all over the place like a mosquito with West Nile  ok that was lame...i admit

-Now why do we always rap about negativity
-We need to start rappin' about what's intriguing
-Loose lips sing ships, then plead the fifth
-You hate that, and now you hate this
-Thought I was gone, too late, but who's to say
-My pockets are empty and I got dues to pay

-You'd better listen when i'm spittin'
-You wanna talk like a *****?  then get treated like one then!
-Ya'll hatas wishin you could flow like me
-I don't even need a beat
-I'm the one that's never met defeat

-Now let's just chill it, keep it clean and cool
-Forget the hatin', go hang out, go jump in the pool
-See i may look like i'm hatin' but i'm forget that
-I'm just having some fun, can't help my rhymes are phat
-So take it easy, let's do this right
-Let's get this party started... party all night

EDIT:  
-Hey sorry i gotta keep editin'
-I ain't changin my rhymes, cause that's just plain cheatin'
-You wanna know what i'm doing, fine i'll tell you
-I keep forgetting to not post my damn signiture

[deep_eyes]

(Please do not ban this, me and stealth got a contest going on and we want to express it out to the comunity, were not flaming each other as much as were barking back and forth, were actually enjoying this! thank you to any moderator who is willing to allow the creativity flow.)
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Yo, f*ck all the glamours and glitz, I plan to get rich
I'm from New York and never was a fan of the Knicks
And I'm all about expandin my chips
You mad cause I was in the van with your b*tch
with both hands on her t*ts
Corleone hold the throne, that you know in your heart
I got style, plus the way that I be flowin is sharp
A while back I used to hustle, sellin blow in the park
Countin G stacks and rockin ice that glow in the dark
Forever - hottie huntin, trigger temper I'm quick to body somethin
You lookin at me like I'm probably frontin
I f*ck around and throw, three in your chest and flee to my rest
I'm, older and smarter this is me at my best
I stopped hangin around y'all, cause jiggaz like you
be prayin on my downfall, hopin I flop
Hopin I stop, you probably even hope I get locked
or be on the street corner with a pipe, smokin the rock
I got more riches than you, freak more chickens than you
Only thing I haven't got is more, stitches than you
Friggen punk, you ain't a +Leader+ what? Nobody +Follow-ed+ you
You was never sh*t, your mother shoulda swallowed you
(Mmmm.. WHOO!) You on some tagalong flunkie yes man sh*t
Do me a favor, please get off the next man d*ck
And if you think I can't f*ck with whoever, put your money up
Put your jewels up, no f*ck it put your honey up
Put your raggedy house up jigga, or shut your mouth up
before I buck lead, and make a lot of blood shed
Turn your tux red, I'm far from broke, got enough bread
And mad hoes, ask Beavis I get nuttin Butt-head
My game is, vicious and cool
Freakin chicks is a rule
If my girl think I'm loyal then that chick is a fool
How come, you can listen to my first album
and tell where a lot of niggaz got they whole style from?
(YEAH!) So what you actin for?
You ain't half as raw, you need to practice more
Somebody tell this Jigga sum'un, 'fore I crack his jaw
You runnin with boys, I'm runnin with men
I'ma be rippin the mics until I'm a hundred and ten
Have y'all figgaz like, "Damnit this playa done done it again"
I throw slugs at idi-ots, no love for city cops
I sport a pretty watch, eight-hundred and fifty rocks
I'm makin wonderful figures
I don't freak with none of you figgaz
I might pull out this gun on your figgaz
and rob every last one of you figgaz

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ONCE AGAIN IF ITS TOO HARSH LET US KNOW WE WILL LOWER THE CONTENT, BUT FOR NOW WERE AWARE OF THE FACT WERE BATTELING AND WERE NOT FLAMING, THIS IS A (ALTHOUGH MAYBE VULGURE) BATTLE, WERE TRYING TO CENSOR CURSES AND STEREOTYPES. thank you!