All right. If you want to know how to write a decent campaign outline, it should go like this (hint, p1mping here for TitT):
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Thirteen years have passed since the Second Great War with the Shivans. Ever since the Capella Supernova, the GTVA has been struggling to keep both its citizens and economy alive. Pirates infest the trade lanes and outer colonies, robbing the Alliance of its little, precious resources.
Selected to fly with the 60th Sword Dancers, you now pilot alongside the best fighter pilots in the GTVA, striving to protect the outer systems from the growing threats of the Procyon-Adhara Coalition....
....and an even deadlier enemy, bent on revenge.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Oh yeah, and if you,
SD, can link me something that you've done for the Freespace community, you'll have
partial right to call GE a n00b. Until then, cut the n00b crap.