[Tiara]

Again... I was bored...

This time 1280x1024 resolution:



Comments?

[Knight Templar]

replace the thoth with a Bakha. Thoth = ugly


Font = meh

[kasperl]

don't want to be nitpicking, but:
1) the toth, (or whatever vasudan craft it is) is a bit shiny, a little plastic like
2) the text isn't easy to read, and it looks wierd divided like this.
3) again the logo, but i'll shut up on this, i read the other thread......

but overal, it looks good

[Tiara]

The font is Freespace font and I like it so MEH!

Hmm.. perhaps you are right about the Toth... I'll wait for some more opinions before I change it though.

[kasperl]

it's not the font, it's the color. there's to much black in it, IMHO. perhaps you can make it in one of the colors form the logo?

[Tiara]

Originally posted by kasperl
don't want to be nitpicking, but:
1) the toth, (or whatever vasudan craft it is) is a bit shiny, a little plastic like
2) the text isn't easy to read, and it looks wierd divided like this.
3) again the logo, but i'll shut up on this, i read the other thread......

but overal, it looks good

1). Meh, you are the second to complain... I'll change it...
2). I can read it just fine. In the lvlshot its a bit hard to read. Be sure to look at it full size. And its supposed NOT to be particularly monotone.
3). MEH!

[Tiara]

Originally posted by kasperl
it's not the font, it's the color. there's to much black in it, IMHO. perhaps you can make it in one of the colors form the logo?

Either your monitor needs some readjustments or you need glasses... I can see it quite clearly. Green is the best color for GTVA IMO...

Don't forget to look at it full size

[Tiara]

Ow and I can't seem to get a better Vasudan fighter pic then the current. They all end up uglier...

[Tiara]

Now also available in the HLP mini mod database

[Warlock]

Honestly it looks like the glow effect on the font went a bit off.

But hey, as long as you're happy with it that's what matters

[Anaz]

Originally posted by Tiara
Now also available in the HLP mini mod database

:thepimp:

[pyro-manic]

Good idea!

Comments:
1)ships look too shiny - they need to be dirtier.
2)make the writing bigger, and not quite so dark.
3)put some dust clouds or something in the BG - very subtle, not a great big galaxy or anything, just a faint nebula type thingy.

Like it, though.

[Ashrak]

first of all toth kicks ass in TVT and the text erm NEEEEEDS!!!! work

[Tiara]

Nah, I'm leaving this one... Working on another one already... Now actually taking my time for it. Not 10 minutes like with this one

[aldo_14]

Y'know, the Toth is actually textured to look shiny - the edges of the brown plates have higlighted edges.

[Tiara]

Ok, made the text a tad bit lighter. You should be able to read it easily now.

[Galemp]

For goodness sake, it's spelled Thoth. How long have you guys been playing Freespace?

And Tiara... could you please put that on some sort of gentle background, so it's not all plain black. A light starfield, or perhaps a faded dark texture or nebula.

[SlipStream]

 It looks good to me. How about 1 for freespace 2.

[Knight Templar]

hey! I   spelled it right.

[Hippo]

thats 3 people out of 11 that spelled the Thoth right...

I'm only wondering why you chose those ships. They're hardly the most elegant, and none of them were a joint project between the two races. By showing the two seperate ships, made by different races, you are showing seperation between them, with the only link being a logo.