At least make some distinction between stuff.
I know some of them say alliance in the tech descriptions, but something like the Excalibur (which I must assume is GTVA ) has nothing of refrence. Seperate them into sections (Terran, Shivan, SG-1 species, etc. ) Also, Screenshots of ships above them are A-1 Supar. (do this for weapons too
and another thing; IIRC you had a big deal where somehow the entire Vasudan race got killed off, but not the terrans, yet you still have the GTVA in there...
Edit: err anotherthing. Some of your tech descriptions make it sound like you are more curious or questionong of them than us.
Turret breaker:
This beam has been developed to destroy the subsystems of bigger ships.Its name should be a memory on those who died while taking out the main beams of the sathanas.
uh.. maybe try giving it a better name then?
Dark Energy Beam:
The DEB has never been researched it has just been found. Nobody knows how this weapon could use the dark energy that does quiet high damage but ... nobody who has got that weapon wants to know it... It could be very dangerous to know how this weapon works..
At least make it sound like a classified piece of Alien technology and not give any info on it like what was up with the Sathanas in the main campaign. Right now, the only image that I get is the Ark of the Covenant from Indiana Jones...
Glory:
This is the fastest known beam! No other beam we ever saw had a faster recovery..it does not do big damage but it could be put on freighters or small cruisers!
Once again, tech description, not a little boy pointing up in the sky, shouting in awe. Tech Descriptions usually mean a paragraph of useless, but half-sensical technobabble that describes how 'it is so fast'.
To sum it all up.. What Shrike said..
