In the interests of exactness, I just want to point out that there are a number of errors that I've noticed so far on the FSURP.
First of all, Admiral Bosch was in command of the 6th Fleet (based in Epsilon Pegasi), not the 4th Fleet, at the start of the NTF Rebellion. And "Neo-Terra" is technically the name of Bosch's ideology, not his government, which was probably just called "the Neo-Terran government." If America has an ideology, it's generally called "the American Dream," while the US government is called simply that, "the US government."
Also, the GTI was never an actual "government," as your faction database suggests. The GTI was pretty much the CIA of the GTA during the First Great War back in 2335. Many GTI officers tried to stage a coup d'etat with their Hades superdestroyer (hence the "Hades Rebellion") but some GTI officers (including Aken Bosch, who was a GTI pilot) refused to go along with the GTI rebels and warned the GTA about the Hades and the coup attempt.
It's the same with the Hammer of Light as well. The HoL was more a religious movement of disgruntled military officers (with a smattering of priests) than an actual planetary government of rebellious Vasudan planets (although HoL did manage to atleast partially posess a few Vasudan systems like Altair during the Great War). If it helps, think of the HoL as a sort of futuristic Al Queda with access to state-of-the-art military equipment.
Most everything else looks okay at first glance.
I have additional information posted at the FRED Zone, located here:
http://ugcworld.com/fredzone/Lonestar and I did research on FS history and posted it here. Aside from my historical timeline claiming that Bosch constructed the NTF Iceni inside the Deneb asteroid belt (this is erroneous; Bosch built the Iceni in Polaris after his coup and then hid the Iceni in the Deneb asteroid belt once he took that system and began his research into the Ancient archeaological sites in Deneb) and that I couldn't confirm some dates for some events (those dates had question marks next to them), the timeline and other FS info at FRED Zone should be accurate.