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Offline Corsair

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Fairly self-explanatory......

I'm back in business! Yay! :D

Comments?
Wash: This landing's gonna get pretty interesting.
Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

Offline Galemp

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Something's off about it... there's no depth... probably the lighting, as in, there isn't any.
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Offline Grunt

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The explosions are good. I like the engine glows as well.
The starfield is a bit too dense IMO.
Also the three Aeolus are too much for a scene.
There was only a limited number ever produced according to the Tech Room. The one in the foreground doesn't look too good, you could delete it.
Apart from that it's good work. :yes:
Just fly on !

 

Offline Ashrak

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there were 3 aeolisus escorting bastin in the mission :)



lights :no: it looks like its full ambient which is bad use spotlights
Beam :no: needs to be denser and brighter
Explosions well theyr pasted dont like those
engine glows pretty normal tone them down a little try using 2 lights on same spot gives a better glow :)
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Offline Corsair

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I'm using 3DE and Photoshop....I can't do lighting really. Does anybody know if you can move the lights in 3DE???
Wash: This landing's gonna get pretty interesting.
Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

Offline Razor

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About Corsairs render:
I like it. :yes: It needs just a very little bit of work on lighting and it'll be perfect. :nod:
« Last Edit: May 09, 2003, 05:45:42 pm by 581 »

 

Offline SKYNET-011

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The second pic is AWESOME! :yes:

First one is good, but the explosions...
Petrach and a few other escaped in a pod but were covered in watermelon juice....it was horrible :eek2: :shaking: -dan87uk

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Offline Ashrak

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wohoa you really have to tell me how you did those beam lights going through ship ?


point lights and streaks tweaked?
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Offline Razor

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Corsair, about that lighting thing..here is a render of an orion I just made. A sort of suggestion on how you may do lighting.

 

Offline Ashrak

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custom glowmaps?
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Offline Grunt

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Originally posted by Ashrak
there were 3 aeolisus escorting bastin in the mission :)


 


Well that is called a memory leak. :D
Just fly on !

 

Offline Razor

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Originally posted by Ashrak
custom glowmaps?


Not exactly. ;)

 

Offline DragonClaw

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Originally posted by Razor


About Corsairs render:
I like it. :yes: It needs just a very little bit of work on lighting and it'll be perfect. :nod:


nice red X, i luv it :p

 

Offline Nico

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Originally posted by Razor


Not exactly. ;)


if that's max: videopost glow.
hence the fact there's glows where there shoudln't be any :p ( turret barrels? )
SCREW CANON!

 

Offline Razor

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Originally posted by Venom



hence the fact there's glows where there shoudln't be any :p ( turret barrels? )


Doesn't mean that they are on the wrong place. If I did something different than usual doesn't mena it is wrong. :p I actually find it cool to have nice looking turrets, so shut up. :p

 

Offline Razor

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Originally posted by DragonClaw


nice red X, i luv it :p

What red X? :wtf:

 

Offline silverwolf

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the red x that me and him see for corsair's render

 

Offline DragonClaw

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Originally posted by Razor

What red X? :wtf:


Lol dude you can't fool me, you just fixed the spelling about 30 minutes ago...

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Last edited by Razor on 05-09-2003 at 06:45 PM


my post was at 06:04 PM... so don't try and call me insane. The evidence is there :nod:

Thats all on my time btw so don't say my times are all messed up :)

 

Offline Razor

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Originally posted by silverwolf
the red x that me and him see for corsair's render

The one with vasudan and Shivans is mine. The first one is Corsairs. The Orion one is also mine, but you figured that I guess.

  

Offline SKYNET-011

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nice red X, i luv it


Odd... His quote has the red X, but the original post is fine...
Petrach and a few other escaped in a pod but were covered in watermelon juice....it was horrible :eek2: :shaking: -dan87uk

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