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Offline Styxx

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Character WIP - Joan
Yep, it's from the Joan of Arc tutorial, but I won't work on the armor and clothes from it.

I originally started this as something to add to my Breakfast scene for the SFM challenge, as one of the many tutorials I had planned to try out during that project, but it became a project of its own. The model still needs some adjustments (some stuff is out of proportion) and I did the clothes kind of in a hurry last night so I didn't have to post her naked.

Comments and ideas welcome. :)



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Offline Nico

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Re: Character WIP - Joan
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Originally posted by Styxx
I did the clothes kind of in a hurry last night so I didn't have to post her naked.
 


isn't that a nice thought :D

mmh: the complete arm is the right size, but forearm is too long, and hand too short.
Legs are a bit too thin.
As for the rest, since JoA wasn't an attempt at realistic human proportions, it's all very well balanced I think.
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Offline Stryke 9

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Give her gray skin and fill the eyes with solid black texture, the picture might make more sense.

 

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Knees down is too skinny, eyes alien-slanty. :)
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Offline Nico

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mmh, yeah, actually, her forehead isn't the cutest either. bah, all that is easy to fix :) (soft selection powa :p )
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Offline Styxx

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Re: Character WIP - Joan
Updates based on your suggestions:



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Offline FreeTerran

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Can you give her hairs ?
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Offline DragonClaw

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omg he wants pubic hairs.


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Offline J.F.K.

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Re: Character WIP - Joan
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Originally posted by Styxx
I did the clothes kind of in a hurry last night so I didn't have to post her naked.


You didn't do a very complete job. :p

So, what purpose did you have in mind for this model? :)
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Offline Styxx

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Re: Re: Character WIP - Joan
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You didn't do a very complete job. :p

I made some pants for her last night, will post some pics later. :p

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So, what purpose did you have in mind for this model? :)

Read the first post. :)
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Offline Nico

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Can you give her hairs ?


yeah, hair makes things look more natural instantly:


(you really did expect me not to p1mp my own stuff in such a thread??? :D )
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Offline Styxx

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yeah, hair makes things look more natural instantly:

(you really did expect me not to p1mp my own stuff in such a thread??? :D )


Damn you!

* sets off to model hair *

:D
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Offline Styxx

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Dammit, just tried to open the files with the last updates (including the pants) and they appear to be corrupted. I'll have to check MAX's autobackup folder when I get home to see if I can save anything. Anyway, here's a small update - the latest version I have working here right now, with some adjustments (head size and other minor stuff).

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good stuff:)
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First try at some simple hair model:



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The way her back is arranged...looks odd. Looks like she's barely standing up right.

 
Amazing.

Now lets change the hair and make her legs shorter and PRESTO YOU GOT A HOT BABE

 

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Amazing.

Now lets change the hair and make her legs shorter and PRESTO YOU GOT A HOT BABE


Shorter? I like the legs as they are. ;)
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Venom: Nice hair on the 6 year old ;)

Styxx: Yeah, everything seems cool except the back. Seems like she's trying to stick her bum out...
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