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Offline adwight

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The Terran Something....
Well here it is, the first something bigger than I fighter I've tried to whip up.  Comments/ideas are appreciated.  I also haven't decided a name for it either...

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I know its not great, I just want to know what you think, and what I can do to improve my skills (or lack thereof) period.
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Offline Starks

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Call it the GTCv Sebarak.
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Offline adwight

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What does Sebarak mean, I'm just curious...
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Offline Starks

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I doesn't mean anything... We can always call it the GTCv Scimitar, which is a type of sword.
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Offline Liberator

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Looks like a bomber version of the Vesuvius.  How about Pompei.  Besides being the more well known city-by-the-volcano, IIRC Pompei was also a Roman Emperor.  Though it may be spelled different.
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Pompeii with two i's I believe.

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It's boxy. And boxy.
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I like it, in an old-school kind of way. It reminds me of some of the FS1 tri-segmented Terran designs, like the Fenris, Faustus, Chronos and Centaur. If you made it a civilian freighter, with a TAC1 dock on the side, it would be nice to use in the FS2 era since the Chronos was retired.

As a fighter or bomber, though, it's not particularly attractive.
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Offline karajorma

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I wasn't picturing this as a bomber at all. This has to be a torpedo cruiser! :D

I quite like the basic shape too. It is fairly old school but it does remind me of the FS1 era ships like galemp says.
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Offline adwight

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Yes I've been intending to be some sort of a Torpedo Cruiser too.  However, what do I need to do to make it so un boxy, smooth it out and make any fixes?
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Pompeii wasn;t an emperor, there were a few guys named pompeii, all generals, some senators, some govenors of pretty important places, one even consul without a colleauge, but non made emperor IIRC.

anyway, i don;t like the assymetry for a terrran design, but it does have some good things about it. if you put that wing on both sides it might look more Terran. otherwise, add a lot of spiky stuff, and round it off a bit, and call it a shivan bomber.
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The easest way to make it rounder is to press the "Smoth Quad Divide" button.
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Put textures on it. The Colossus textures may look like so good.
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Offline adwight

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Alrighty, I'll have to give it a shot.
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Offline Woolie Wool

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Originally posted by Liberator
Looks like a bomber version of the Vesuvius.  How about Pompei.  Besides being the more well known city-by-the-volcano, IIRC Pompei was also a Roman Emperor.  Though it may be spelled different.


GTC Herculaneum! That city was also destroyed by the 79 A.D. eruption.

Oh, and there was a man named Pompey who competed with Julius Caesar for control of Rome; I think you're talking about him.
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Pompeii with two i's I believe.

What's with everyone leaping to name a ship that isn't even finished yet, and NOT CRITIQUING THE DAMN MESH?


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Offline Beowulf

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Extrude much? ;)

Anyway, I like the idea of a torpedo ship, maybe like a PT boat idea. Give it something powerful like torpedoes, make it fast, make it weak.
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Offline Woolie Wool

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There's not much to say about it. It's just this cruisery bombery thing. There's nothing really good or bad about it, it's just boring.:blah:
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Offline magatsu1

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Originally posted by Fozzy
The easest way to make it rounder is to press the "Smoth Quad Divide" button.


care to explain further ? ;7
um. please ?!
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