[DeepSpace9er]

It wasnt really that much of an alliance, it was more of a cease-fire-to-destroy-the-shivans pact. The alliance is the GTVA.

[Singh]

ok. edited again.
Anyone think it's print-worthy? I do want to send it in sometime today or tommorow

[Lightspeed]

Still a mistake:

No destroyer could follow the lucifer into subspace. The Bastion was too slow and so our hero Alpha 1 and a few wingmates had to destroy the lucifers reactor cores all by themselves.

Also, Graphics: 6 is definately not good enough. FS2vanilla still looks better than most of today's space sims.

[Singh]

Originally posted by Lightspeed
Still a mistake:

No destroyer could follow the lucifer into subspace. The Bastion was too slow and so our hero Alpha 1 and a few wingmates had to destroy the lucifers reactor cores all by themselves.

Also, Graphics: 6 is definately not good enough. FS2vanilla still looks better than most of today's space sims.

So they never sent a destroyer into the node and Alpha wing had to do it? Edited

[Solatar]

Well, Alpha, Beta, Gamma, Delta, and Epsilon at the least.

[Odyssey]

In fact, just a few days ago, a campaign called homesick was released just a few days ago),

[color=cc9900]There's one little mistake for you Also, a little tutorial on the use of its and it's is in order:

• It's is the abbreviated form of it is.
  e.g. It's a nice day.
  
• Its is the form you use when you specify something that belongs to it.
  e.g. Its storyline is great.

Other than me being pedantic, that's great! It might be a good idea to get lots of people sending it to as many magazines as possible. Especially for the SCP bit, otherwise people might think that someone is just reminiscing on the past and get images of Wing Commander look-a-likes. Does the magazine give you a choice to send them a few images as well? Screenshots will help compound the emphasis on good graphics now the SCP is along.[/color]

[Singh]

ok.
It's going in today, i've edited as much as possible, hopefully the editor their won't have much of a problem with the rest. For screenshots, i'll point them to the HLP gallery, which has plenty of shots.

As soon as the mail is sent, this thread will be deleted. If anyone else wants to use this review, PM me.

[Sesquipedalian]

Originally posted by Singh


Then for heaven's sake! Help me correct myself! The former can be easily corrected in word, but the latter......help!

Well, actually, I made that post and then decided I'd do an in depth edit for you.  But two thirds of the way through, I had a system hang and had to reboot.  I didn't feel inclined to start over again unless there was an exchange of money involved.

[Singh]

Review deleted...I think its going to be accepted tho