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Offline Antares

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November 30, 2367
Unexplored star system


In the void of space, the Beast turned.

It had heard the scream of the dying star, had felt the spatial disturbance caused by its sudden collapse, and its equally abrupt explosion.  This, in itself, was not unusual, for all stars died, eventually, but the Beast could feel that something was amiss.  Something in the subspace distortion, in the cry of agony that had rippled across the cosmos.  This particular star was too young.  It had not died.  It had been murdered.

The Beast narrowed its eyes--The Destroyers.  It had to be.  Only they were capable of such wanton annihilation.

The Beast peered into the star-specked darkness, although the effort was in vain.  The supernova had occured several parsecs away, and light from the explosion would take many years to reach its current location.  But that was unimportant.  It now possessed a compass heading, a general direction in which to search--that was all that was necessary.

The Beast's maw opened, but no sound escaped.  Had there been air present, the creature would have laughed.

It flew through the emptiness of space, speeding toward the deceased star that the inhabitants of that part of the galaxy called Capella.  It burst through nebular clouds and skirted the atmosphere of nearby planets.  Asteroids shattered into dust upon contact; the Beast shrugged them off as nothing more than pebbles.  

The journey would take time, as the creature well knew, but that too was unimportant; the Beast could afford to wait.  It had already waited for millennia--another decade or two meant nothing.  It had hunted them for centuries, and if they managed to escape its grasp, if they fled back into the darkness of subspace, it was of no consequence.  The Beast would continue to track them, until the stars themselves were nothing more than dying embers.  Eventually, it would find the Destroyers once again.

When it did, it would kill every last one of them.


[Glow=red]Freespace: A r m a g e d d o n[/Glow]

The Great War ends: Christmas 2004
« Last Edit: February 23, 2004, 02:37:51 pm by 1461 »
We have returned to continue our purification of this galaxy. It is again your turn to be crushed beneath the great force that is the Antaran army. All your petty squabbling with the other beings in this galaxy is meaningless. The Antaran fleet will destroy you all, one by one. You may not surrender. You cannot win. Your only option is death.

 

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Offline Stryke 9

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HA! I laugh at your optimistic release date! Hahaha!

 
IS this KRULL part 2?

  I want to name a new fighter weapon The Glaive cannon (woohoo!)
Don't think of it as being outnumbered. Think of it as having a wide target selection !

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Offline aldo_14

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Hums jaws theme

 

Offline Jal-18

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*crosses fingers* not the red jelly, not the red jelly, not the red jelly...

 
Now THIS looks interesting...

Ever thought of doing a commerical?

 

Offline DeepSpace9er

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"The Beast" how original.

 

Offline nucas

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Originally posted by DeepSpace9er
"The Beast" how original.

whereas your moniker clearly belies your own vastly superior creativity.

while this plug does seem melodramatic, it is at least different. most people seem unable to envision non-terrestrial creatures as anything other than pilots of vessels with energy weapons and constant-thrust rear-mounted propulsion engines, employing humanity's technological characteristics in all respects. beyond, perhaps, asymetrical design and odd color schemes.

though i really doubt how such a narrative could be played out in the freespace engine, it could at least be interesting with proper ambiguity.

 

Offline Nico

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But I've already seen that plot in an old space sim ( can't remember the name ), where mankind fights an alien species ( they look like big fleas, you see them in very gore news shows, ala starship troppers, somehow ), and there's some gigantic space faring monster roaming around too. It's very old, I think it was around the time of the first Privateer.
SCREW CANON!

 

Offline Goober5000

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So is this a fanfic or a campaign?

 

Offline ionia23

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  • "YES, I did finally see 'The Matrix' 12 years late
"....and the Beast narrowed his eyes at the destroyers...

"Why does it want me to say my name?"

 

Offline Zarax

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The Best is Yet to Come

 

Offline Unknown Target

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Ummm...melodramatic and slightly cliched, imho.

 

Offline Noise

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I think that it could be a great campaign, if done properly that is.
"The point of war is not to die for your country, the point is to make some other poor bastard die for his."

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Originally posted by ionia23
"....and the Beast narrowed his eyes at the destroyers...



:lol: :lol: :lol:
That was very funny i nearly spilled my drink on the keyboard!!!
"What does not kills me, makes me stronger!" -Nietzche

There is no peace, there is Anger;

There is no fear, there is Power.

There is no death, there is immortality;

There is no weakness, there is the Dark Side.

 

Offline Silent Warrior

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ROFL! :D

Oh, there's a campaign announced, too? Whee! I command you to complete it. :)
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Choo choo, and that is the truth.

 

Offline Grug

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lol.

nice work, compliments to whoever wrote it :)

cant wait till the campaign. :D

 

Offline Havock

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what would that beast look like?

a gaint space caterpillar with rabbit ears, butterfly wings, a rattlesnake tail, a very menacing look, and beam cannons?

 

Offline ionia23

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Originally posted by Havock
what would that beast look like?

a gaint space caterpillar with rabbit ears, butterfly wings, a rattlesnake tail, a very menacing look, and beam cannons?


As previously mentioned...meet the greatest threat to the Universe since the 2nd Shivan Invasion...

"Why does it want me to say my name?"