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Offline Singh

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Not exactly freespace-related, but its a bit of writing work I just did up. Any cosntructive criticism is accepted, while the rest can just bugger off. If you see spelling mistakes, do realize that Iam going only on my innate sense of english alone - I have no Microsoft word to back me up here. :/

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Calm and serene were one of the few words any person could use to describe this hidden little valley. Nestled between folds of hills and mountains, it was mostly untouched by any kind of setient life. What life did exist was, for the most part, the simple, but luciously green grass that covered most of the ground. Occasionally, one may see a tree or a small deer break the continuity of green, but such sites were rare.

Rivaling the green continuity on the ground below was the blue sky above. The day was quite sunny, and not one cloud marred the sheer excellence and blue of the sky. But here again, we have exceptions.

But this time the exception was much more odd than some simple peace of wildlife, or even the bright sun for that matter. The object this time was quite literally a bright white hole in the sky. It was interlaced with patches of blue here and there, along with some on the inside.

In addition to the blue and the white of the hole was, for a brief moment at least, the dull grey hull that was routinely associated with space ships - but the ship that emerged from the hole didn't look much like a spaceship ought to.

It came through the hole at close to double the speed of sound, covering incredible distances in a single second. Visually, one may descibe the thing as a large cargo plane, but with extremely stubby wings and several oval nodes running along the bottom of the hull. It was aligned more for height and width as compared to length, having at the very center of the front the Pilot's cockpit. The middle portion was the largest vertically, extending in what appeared to be 2 giant arms or spires from the main body. Horizontally, two small wings extend from the main body here. The 'tail' as such was short and narrow, but was traditional in the sense it still had 2 elevators and a rudder. Along both sides, a rather strange symbol could be seen - similar to a pentagon, but yet, strangely different, as it seemed more like 2 upside down Vs in a box, with diagnols connecting the corners and a line running vertically through the center.

What most perculiar about the ship was not the shape, or the speed for that matter - it was the fact that at several points, it was emmiting flames, and bullet holes littered the outside of the hull, giving it the appearance of swiss cheese. It was a wonder the thing was still going - if at a downward slope. Every minute, some explosion went off (mostly around the oval pods near the bottom) and shook the entire craft, taking out huge chunks with it. The only calmness and serenity in the entire craft would have been inside the cockpit, with the pilot.

Any other pilot would have been panicking right now, but if one were seated behind him at this point of time, they would suspect nothing to be wrong if not for the such an incident was an everyday occurance. The cockpit was rattled quite often with the sounds of susbsystems exploding, and each time the explosions simply got closer and closer. But yet the pilot remained calm, moving switches and just generally trying to keep the ship together. Moving to the front and looking at him would have been quite difficult, as he was wearing a standard face mask and helmet. But his eyes were exposed (for better sight maybe) and his expression, inner feelings and to an extent, maybe his thoughts, could have been easily seen in them.

Turning back to the front would have treated one to a rather spectacular sight: another white hole appeared in front of the ship and enveloped the ship, now surrounding it with a completely blue-white environment, a sharp contrast from the lucious green hills and vallleys present mere seconds before.

But even this came to a short end - for there was light at the end of this tunnel as well. In this case however, the whiteness from inside simply continued, as the ship emerged into the exact same valley, except this time it was snowing. After crossing a certain distance, the Pilot hit a button and the ship once again was consumed by the tunnel. Remaining calm throughout this, the pilot finally spoke into his radio set. The undertones of his voice did not betray his apperant calmness. During this time, the ship once again transitioned into the valley outside, the only difference being was that it was now snowing and a few trees were present.

"Mayday, Mayday, Mayday, this is Epsilon 4 of the 22nd. I was engaged by Chaos units and am heavily damaged. I've got ruptures all over the hull and loosing integrity to all the modules quickly. Engines 3, 4 and 5 are down, and the rest won't stay there much longer. Please advise, do we have units in the vicinity??"

The terrain once again disappeared into the blue-white tunnel.
Equally calm, a reply came back through the channel.
"Negative, all available wings are busy elsewhere - what happened to your escort?? Where is the rest of Epsilon wing??"

The pilot replied in a tone of fustration and anger, as if his patience was running out.

"Beta wing is down, and so is the rest of my squad. I'm trying to jump through to HQ command, but my drive is malfunctioning and - OH CRAP!!!"

The pilot reacted immediately, pulling up the craft as much as possible to avoid hitting the tip of a tree that was at the exit of the tunnel. The ground was getting closer and closer with each jump  - and the trees were getting higher. The pilot continued, his tone now more controlled.

"Never mind that. I'm stuck jumping through a few hundred meters of tunnel before I have to drop out into different exit points. The ground is getting awfully close. Any advice command?"

The person at the other end of the line remained quite for a few seconds, before he finally replied.

"There isn't a thing we can do Pilot - your best option may be to try to crash land."

"That's it?? That's your plan?" The pilot replied, his fustration showing even more.

"Unfortunately, yes. You have a better idea?" Command replied.

The pilot was silent for a few seconds, before he nodded and replied rather shakily as explosions rocked the ship even more.
"No. Any orders for the units?? Eject or...?"

"Yes. Try to get as many survivors as possible away from the crash site. Try to get to a clear area first! Those trees will rip you to shreds at this speed."

"Understood. I'm cutting the line." With that, the pilot flipped a few switches above his head and then cut off the line. The ship once again entered into the real world, this time back in a relatively empty valley, but much, much closer to the ground.
The pilot continued to remain calm. He went to the pre-ejection procedures for the Pods, but frowned his screen showed red lights for nearly all of them except a handful. Something must have jammed the release mechanisms. No time for repairs - he simply ejected whatever could be ejected.

From the outside, one could see 3 Pods falling out from the bottom of the craft - 2 were taken out however, by the explosion of the Number 2 Engine Module. Only 1 survived and continued on its fall to the earth below.

Back in the cockpit, the pilot was tensed. The ship was now constantly shaking and rattling - the explosions were now nearly at the cockpit itself. Sighing to himself, the pilot reached to a panel next to him and released several switches. This released the air-brakes and forward thrusters, which would slow down the craft as much as possible. The display panel next to him showed him 50 seconds to impact with the ground. This number actually increased as the ship slowed down and started to give in to gravity.

The pilot adjusted, firing whatever engines were left. The time was now at 40 seconds and altitude at 100 meters. The ground was getting even closer - at this point, the Pilot could see some minor details of the ground below. The soil at least appeared a bit soft, if nothing else.

The pilot sighed to himself - he had done all he could. He reached to a box underneath his seat - inside was a single injection of Morphene and an audio casette.

35 Seconds to impact, 90 Meters, and the alarms starting to ring, warning of low altitude, low fuel, low hull integrity - warning that the pilot and the ship were simply screwed. But the pilot didn't care - he shut off the alarms and injected the Morphene into himself. At least he wasn't going to feel much pain, either way.

Then he studied the cassete before putting it in. 30 seconds now and 80 Meters to the ground. The speed really showed now as the ground rolled by.

Pressing the play button, the Pilot went limp and sat back, simply staring ahead as the ground closed in. Music started to play, and the all-too familiar voice of Frank Sinatra stated to play over the speakers. The pilot sang the words as they came out, as if on instinct and he continued to sing even though the ground came closer

70 meters.........60 meters........50 meters.....it just kept on coming, but he kept going on, unfazed.

"Fly me to the moon...let me play among the stars, let me see what spring is like on Jupiter, ah-jupiter and mars. In other words....Hold my hand....."

If one looked carefully enough, in the final few seconds before impact, they could see tears forming in the corners of the pilot's eyes. The song ended there, before the ship met the ground and everything went black.

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Tunguska?


huh? Wha? :confused:
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Tunguska meteorite... russia...

It looks nice... keep up the good work. :)
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Tunguska, Siberia, 1908
a meteor or comet exploded a little distance from the ground, flattening trees for quite a distance..
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Tunguska, Siberia, 1908
a meteor or comet exploded a little distance from the ground, flattening trees for quite a distance..


Ah that......remember that from quite a while back. Turns out they never actually found the thing did they??

And no, this isn't related to that, its just a story I intend on continuing. Any other thoughts or criticism regarding it? I'm accepting flames now as well ;)
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Nope. No fragment of the Tunguska object has ever been found. It is assumed to have been a boloid containing volatiles.
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mikhael: thats actually quite interesting to know. I always though the object had landed intact. But it isn't100% confirmed that it did explode is it?
anyways, heres the next bit.

The Valley was now littered pieces of wreckage from the crashing ship. It was assembled in a trail all the way to the crash site itself, which had the largest piece - the ship. A scar stretched across the land from where the ship had initially crashed to where it had dragged itself till now. It had crashed and rolled several times vertically, before finally coming to a rest on its side. It had remained surprisingly intact, courtesy of the soft soil it had landed in. But flames still rose upwards from some areas, and no matter how much repair work it got, this ship was never going to fly again.

A short distance away, in a small crator created by the impact, the last surviving pod lay on the ground, still smoking from the heat and energy of the impact. Externally, the pod had almost no features, simply smooth and egg shaped - the only indication of an exit or entrance was a small hinge to one corner. No other sign was present that a door was there, or if it was a door at all.

The little gap that one might look for to determine if it was a door only appeared a few seconds later as it slowly rose upwards and over. Then it speeded up as something - or someone - from inside kicked it open. Viewing from the side, one would have seen a blue-gloved hand come out and hold the edge. The fingers strained a bit, pulling up someone. From this angle, few details of the person was actually visible. What was definately visible, however, was the fact that the person was in some sort of armored suit and judging from the size and shape, the person was male. It wasn't until he sat up fully that we may now be able to see the person. Covered entirely in blue armor and a visored helmet (the visor was also reflective, not revealing the face behind). the person shook his head first and then raised his hand upto his head, as if trying to get rid of a headache.

He shook his head again and then looked around, studying his surroundings. The person climbed out of the pod, and continued to do this for a full minute, looking everywhere and trying to get some bearings. Eventually, his sight fell upon on the wreckage only a short distance away.

The reaction was instantaneous - the person starting running at top speed towards the wreckage, unfazed by the fact that the ship was spouting flames and every other second an explosion would emerge from the top. After half a minute of running, the person reached the side of the craft- or at least, the former. The ship had rolled over such that the port side was now facing the sky and the bottom was facing the person, with the bottom . Nevertheless, the person ran around the bottom, towards the cockpit side. Along the way, he took note of the damaged and otherwise destroyed pods that had not cleared the ship.

Ducking under the rather low bottom spire, he rounded the nose of the craft till he came into view of the cockpit's window. It was clearly smashed in, and upon walking upto it, the Person could see the stiletto of a body inside. Before peering inside however, the person switched on a flashlight installed into the helmet, allowing him to see better. He then climbed through the window, right into the cockpit. He crept into the space between the pilot and wall, and then continued to creep in till he could stand and get a good look at the Pilot.

But once he did, he quickly looked away and shook his head. He then glanced back, looked away and shook his head again. When he turned his head back to look, he didn't turn away.

The pilot was, as expected, dead. The cause of death was primarily the fact that a large shard had penetrated his chest and upper body. His neck was also twisted at an odd angle. The pilot's eyes were still open, and despite being lifeless, they continued to portray the pilot's last emotions and fears before death.

In the background, underneath all the explosions and flames, the person could hear the faint sound of a cassete player. Listening closely, he recognized the sound, or rather, the song that was playing. Again, he sadly shook his head. He grasped the pilots open hand, like how comrades would shake hands when they first met after a long time. Then, using his other hand, the person moved it over the pilot's eyes, closing them. There would be peace here, one way or another. He then reached up towards the cassete player control panel and changed some settings, after which he stood at attention and saluted the pilot.

With that, he crept out and jumped down to the ground below. Standing up, he looked from one side to the other. Over the horizon, their were some pillars of smoke - maybe a small habitation or village?

The person first looked up at the cockpit, nodded and then started jogging towards the pillars of smoke.
In the background, the ship started to play words on the external loudhailers as the person moved away. Only a few words could be heard before the speakers died out in the fury of several explosions. The words were simple, yet timeless in their significance. The person echoed the words as he jogged away from the wreckage, if anyone had been there, they would have been able to hear him say it out loud.
"If they answer not your call....walk alone, walk alone.....
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ack...stop spamming like that o_O

Any comments?
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about time I continued writing this....

The uniformity that was the grass in this area was once again disrupted; but this time it was disrupted by the tracks of horse's hooves as opposed to mechanical destruction and devastation. The number of hoove prints might have indicated around 6 horses and riders to anyone that looked carefully enough, and that they were not far away.In fact; one simply would have to zoom across the landscape, focusing on the figures riding off in the distance till they were actaully visible. At this point in time, one would have seen the true nature of the riders. Totalling 6 in number, all were wearing the same hoods, covering there faces from view. However, their bodies were much more visible, along with the armour they wore. This was where they differed from each other the most.

5 of the riders rode on black horses, but this contrasted differently from the bright silver-color clothes they wore. These clothes were bare of any markings whatsoever, but it their color was the most unique. The silver had a particular shade to it; although seemingly bright and reflective, it still had a dark sense to it which was quite unexplainable.

What was the most interesting however, was the sixth rider.

The six rider was dressed nearly completely in Red clothes, and riding upon a horse with a coat not unlike that of the riders surrounding him. What was the most interesting however, was the coat of arms on the back of the rider's coat.
From this distance, all one would be able to see would be something that looked like a star inside a square. But upon closer inspection, they would have realized that it wasn't exactly a star; it had 6 points. 3 facing upwards, touching the corners and the center of the square, and were connected directly to the opposite corner/side on the bottom of the square. The colors in the symbol were all white, yet another example of the contrast.

The riders went on; over hills and trenches, through valleys and shrubs. They rode on, till, finally, over the last hill a small city came into view.

City is probably the wrong word to use here, since it was definately smaller and much less advanced than one. With mostly huts and a only a few modern-looking houses. The most modern one was what passed as a castle here - right in the center of the town, it was the only 4 storey structure in the entire place. WIth a flat terrace, surrounding by raised walls and fortifications, it was probably the only building capable of defending itself too.

Sprawling in a hexagonal pattern, the structure made up for lack in height in its total area, which was quite a fair percentage of the village. How it could have been supported or built by the sparse population was a mystery, how it remained functioning was an even stranger.

The riders didn't pause at the top of the hill, in fact, they speeded up, rushing down towards the town. For them this was the end of the journey, and regardless if the journey had taken them to heaven or hell, one could definately see that they were definately wanting to get home.

Once they entered the town, they didn't stop, breaking out in a full run towards the central structure. As the various inhabitants came out of the huts, they dashed back in, shouting and sometimes cheering. It was obvious that the riders had not been expected, and from what we can see, it is also obvious that their arrival was a welcome thing.

As they rode towards the main gate, the gaurds spotted them, and after an initial pause of shock, scurried about to open the gates.
One of the gaurds in particular, ran along the outside wall. Had one followed him, they would have gone first around the entire structure, giving a rather spectacular and significant view of the village, and through an entrance into the main structure itself. This entrance would lead through several corridors, at first made of simple stone and wood, but then later reaching fine carpet and walls lined with fabulous paintings hanging on them.

At this point in time, the Guard paused near one of the paintings - that of a large tree, and leaned against the wall, gasping and resting for a second. The fact that he was wearing the traditional knight's armor didn't make it any easier. After a second or two, he continue to run down the corridor, taking the first left, then the next right, and so on and so forth till, finally, he came to a large hallway with many people milling about. There was no central organisation to the hallway, just several tables with clerks working on them, a large board to one side holding several numbers and figures, and many many people moving about communicating information and seeming to prepare reports.

But the gaurd's target was none of these. Instead, it was one small group of gaurds on the other side of this. These gaurds surrounding what the probably the most important person of the entire group. Dressed much like what was casual wear for british royalty, the person was moving about, collecting reports and studying them carefully. At approximately 6 feet tall, the person could easily look over just about anyone else in the room. With a well-built and somewhat plain body, the most notable feature was his face, which was round and chubby with a full head of hair and dark-brown eyes. It was this person that the guard finally addressed when he came close enough.

"SIR!!!!!" He shouted, attracting the person's attention. He then stopped right in front, gasping for breath and nearly collapsing. Another gaurd next to him helped him up. The person in question nodded and asked

"Yes, what is it? Do you have news??"

The gaurd gasped and replied between heavy breaths.

"Yes...sir...They've returned."

"Who? Speak up man! Who's returned??"
The person replied, obviously quite annoyed and confused.

"We have Prince Dalon, we have."

This time, the voice came from the other side of the corridor, from near where the guard had entered into the chamber. The voice that had spoken had silenced everyone in the room, all of whom were staring in disbelief at the new arrivals. The voice had come from the person dressed in the red clothes, who then proceeded to lead the group accross the hallway. In front of them, the crowd opened up immediately, leaving them space to walk through.

Prince Dalon in turned picked up the pace and walked towards them, his gaurds hanging back for a bit.

"My God!! It's good to see you back! The battle - we thought all of you were..."

The prince froze at the person's expression. Normally, he would have expected to see some sign of joy, some sign of victory in those eyes, especially after the battle that they had just returned from. But Prince Dalon saw none of that. Looking through the helmet at the person's eyes, all he could see in them were an expression of Sadness, fear and despair.

"Dead? No, we aren't....." The person replied slowly...

"But the battle? Were you victorious?" Prince Dalon asked.

The person didn't reply, instead, he glanced around at the others in the room and Dalon immediately understood.

"Everyone!! GET OUT NOW." With that single order, the gaurds started to evacuate everyone out. A few minutes later, the hallway was now entirely empty. Dalon pointed to some of the chairs.

"Sit down, you must be exhausted. Tell me everything."

With that, the person just nodded down and took a seat. It was quite obvious from the tone of the voice, the person must have been in deep distress. Then he started to tell the entire story to Dalon.
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Very good Singh.

I'm doing my own science fiction novel, stops me sucumbing to boredom.  It's slightly based on Homeworld but is longer and is about Humans.  It's on paper now so I can't give you all a taster just yet.

 

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Very good Singh.

I'm doing my own science fiction novel, stops me sucumbing to boredom.  It's slightly based on Homeworld but is longer and is about Humans.  It's on paper now so I can't give you all a taster just yet.


Ive never played Homeworld............
Look forward to reading it whenever you're done though :D
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well, I got some more. too much free time tonight.

"The defense of the valley entrance began around 4 days ago. We managed to get there well ahead of the Emperor's forces and set up a total blockade, 3000 Men strong. All of them consisted of what you sent along with me Dolan, along with a hundred or so we could pick up from the main capital. A day later, the enemy finally made within sight. It wasn't good - they numbered around 10,000 at the least, and could have easily overrun us had we not been prepared. The fighting started, and it continued not for hours, but throughout the day and well into the night. In the first day alone we managed to repulse 6 seperate attack attempts. We lost nearly half our force, but so did the enemy.

At first, it looked like we might be able to win the battle; the Emporer's forces would be repulsed and the defense would be succesfull."

A brief pause before the person continued.

"But oh God........God, why were we SO wrong?? They attacked again, this time pitting everything against us - by everything, I mean everything. I dont know what or why they were so determined to get through us - they were for all practical means and purposes throwing themselves at us, desperate for some way through. Not even the Emperor can motivate these troops so much, not even he could make them fight as much as they did....But in the end, we won - the last of the forces were finally gone, and we managed to hold the barricade long enough. Not one of the enemy survived - not one!!!. We were the only survivors of that battle......"

This time Prince Dalon spoke up.

"But isn't that incedible?? For heaven's sake, you and the entire force should be rewarded for holding that line!! Because of you, we're all safe, the valley is protected and we don't have to worry about the Emporer sending forces here for quite a while! Where are the rest?? We'll hold a giant feast in all your honour!"

The person just stared at Prince Dalon for a full minute before replying.

"You don't understand do you?"

"Undestand what?"

"That we are the only survivors of that battle......."

Prince Dalon looked first at the person, then at the others that had come at him. Realization dawned on him, forcing him back into his seat, limp at the thought that had just occured.

"My God.....don't tell me......"

"Yes.....nobody else survived Dalon. Nobody else. 13,000 soldiers, all dead save for the 6 of us. It was horrible."

He paused for a second. Dalon looked into the person's eyes, and could not even imagine the horrors it must have seen.

"Nothing was left - it was a damn massacre. The overwelhming sight of fields upon fields of dying were only overshadowed by the sounds of the suffering, the dying. I swear, at least a thousand men had to have been dying and in pain, judging from the moans and the screams. There was nothing we could do too help them - they were too many, and we were too few. Never have I had to witness such an opponent before Dalon, never. At least when the Emporer's forces challenged us at that pass, I felt I had the power to do something, to change the tides of the battle into our favour. But in the aftermath, amongst all those dying people, the Suffering.....my God, I don't know how or why, but the suffering somehow became an enemy that I could not do a thing to stop. It was everywhere...mocking me, taunting me....."

Dalon reached out and grabbed the person by the shoulders, shaking him vigorously.

"Snap out of it! You've witnessed this thousands of times before, why would now make a difference?"

The person just shrugged him off and replied

"Because I never saw it to this extent, not this close, and especially not for those that were so close...."

"Look, either way, do realize that you have possibly saved the lives of tens - if not hundreds - of thousands of people out here. By stopping the Emperor's forces, our safety is almost totally assured. Each of those men and women knew exactly why they went out there, and each of them were prepared for it.

"Still doesn't make much of a difference."

"Their isn't anything I can say that will change you state of mind?"

"Not really...."

Their coversation was interrupted however, with the sound of thunder from outside. Again, one of the gaurds rushed into the room.

"Sir! Something really odd just happened."

"What?" Both Dalon and the person echoed.

Not sure who to respond to, the Guard replied rather hesitantly.

"We're not sure - all we know is that part of the sky turned blue and....something came out from it. It was spewing flames and creating a lot of noise - it just flew accross and appears to have landed nearby..."

Dalon looked to the person before looking back at the gaurd.

"You sure?"

"yes sir. We're already dispatching some scouts to check them out."

"Tell them to wait up - I'm going along."

"What??" Dalon asked, but when he turned back, the person had already moved off, heading back down to the stables.

"You heard me. We leave in 15 minutes, no later. This has to be investigated, no matter what."

With that, the person left the hallway.

"Is she always like this?" Dalon asked to nobody in particular.

The 5 gaurds that had come with her simply looked at each other and nodded. They headed down as well.

******

Once again, the group were on their horses, but this time their destination was nearby. Charging through the Village, they exited it within a minute, and then continued to race on.

But along the way, they rode too fast to notice a person completely in blue armour and a visored helmet hiding in the ****es, observing them pass by.
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This is all very well written and interesting.   :yes:        my imagination is not that great, but if i had to guess, was the ship that guy was flying similar to a myrmidon? And that guys blue armor sounds kind of like Halos Mjolnir armor? anyways, thats just the way my mind works. keep up the good writing.
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Offline Singh

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Originally posted by redsniper
hmmm.... time travel?


Not exactly....;)

Jetmech: Unfortunately, mine isnt that great. The ship was meant to be something like a B-wing, in the sense its a transport designed vertically. The closest example i can give is a weevil from Forced Alliance.

And yes, sue me, its Halo's armour. I cant help putting that in, its just too cool looking and the only one that looks better IMO is the Starship troopers one, but they dont have visors that conceal faces ;)
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(

 

Offline Singh

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Originally posted by Jetmech Jr.
I thought it was subspace...


I'm not going to explain the mechanics just yet, but yes, its something similar to subspace (only in appearance though).
"Blessed be the FREDder that knows his sexps."
"Cursed be the FREDder that trusts FRED2_Open."
Dreamed of much, accomplished little. :(