Haven't finished it yet, but I have found a pretty big bug.
The second convoy will only arrive only if all three Hippocrates depart. (i.e. If one of the medical ships is destroyed, the mission comes to a grinding halt.)
On a smaller note, you might want to check over your grammar and spelling a bit. And in the last briefing stage, the GTC Sol is displayed as a cruiser wing.
Needs music, a proper name, and you should take some time to mess around with the loadout options. (Not that I mind being able to fly a Mara!

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And just looking in FRED2... where's the debriefing?
