[PeachE]

good ****ing lord, this took a long time. i don't think i'm quite done, but very much starting to look for feedback. any comments and/or criticisms are very very welcome.

****, i need a break after this

on a break

[an0n]

The upper-wall is too blurry, the cabling is too thick and the buildings need some light gridding for their windows.

Other than that, it's the best thing you've ever done. But I suppose you already know that.

[PeachE]

made a few corrections. added some (very) faint grid lines on the buildings. trimmed the cables a bit. made the rail at the top of the buildling less blurry (tho i left the bricks alone). i also extended the cracks in the sidewalk where the weeds came through.

[Carl]

he's sitting on a box of peaches

[kasperl]

I already posted on WS about the awesomeness of this, and the only crticism I have is about the size of the shoes, and the size of the dog.

[an0n]

I take it that 'highway' is a train track?

[Grug]

wow. bloody awsome peachE!

only thing i could criticise are size of shoes...

But it looks bloody great

nice job!

-Grug

[JarC]

Took one look and thought that is some kick-ass piece of work, wouldn't mind at all having this @ poster size on the wall...

now as for the given comments sofar...the dog's size is not the problem, it is its proportions that isn't quite right, its head needs to be ~50% bigger and more squashed/stubnosed (if it is supposed to be that little 'french bulldog' ) Shoes, well, on the whole, I think artistic freedom is in its good rights here, dunno how it would look when they'd be smaller...but indeed the dog is a 'new breed' with that small a head...and for the rest..I do not pretend to be that good to judge if the upper wall is too blurred or the wires to thick, after all, the wall could be obscured by a dustcloud (seems very smoggy behaind the wall) and the wiring could be the result of a nation getting sensible and covered them with isolation.

[an0n]

Ya need some cigs on the ground.

If he stops there , it'd stand to reason there'd be momentos of his visits.

[PeachE]

Originally posted by an0n
I take it that 'highway' is a train track?

it's where the train tracks would be if Houston had any sense. but they dropped them down to the ground right in the middle of main street instead. now some ****wit hits it like once a week.

[Bobboau]

more buildings to the left, and it could look a bit dirtier

[PeachE]

any more buildings and the top would look too busy. i already don't like how much focus the background gets (but that's prolly just cuz i'm used to doing more minimalist stuff).

and yeah it could.

[karajorma]

Originally posted by kasperl
and the size of the dog.

Surely that's the whole joke. Either the dog isn't worth being beware of or it's like Holy Grail's pyscho bunny

[Flipside]

Please don't make me mention the Holy Hand Grenade

Awesome work there as always PeachE

[PeachE]

Originally posted by karajorma


Surely that's the whole joke. Either the dog isn't worth being beware of or it's like Holy Grail's pyscho bunny

tru it's supposed to be a miniature boston terrier. i'm not sure if those things actually come in miniature or toy sizes, but just the same. that's the joke. the head should probably be a little bigger, but meh.

and thanks Flipside.


btw, it's not really that legible at this res, but the shirt says "shiny happy people are my trigger". i've had requests to make it more legible, but then it wouldn't look as worn, so not going to happen.

[SanKor]

maybe the smoke coming from the cig is a bit too thick? or wrong color at the beginning, because the end part of the smoke looks to be in the correct color(somewhat bluish grey)

[USS Alexander]

l33t pica there:D did you al composed that with ps?if so...then your a ps wizzard:p post it at www.simplyphotoshop.com one of the gretest artists are there.

[PeachE]

yeah, it's all PS. paintbrush, smear and a little bit of vector pen.

[USS Alexander]

Originally posted by PeachE
yeah, it's all PS. paintbrush, smear and a little bit of vector pen.

for you mate. in 1 and a half year of master classes of ps i never seen anybody that made such a image. Your skills probaly exceed my teachers skills:p

[Lightspeed]

Originally posted by USS Alexander


for you mate. in 1 and a half year of master classes of ps i never seen anybody that made such a image. Your skills probaly exceed my teachers skills:p

Well, a lot of people could do a background like that, but that guy sitting there is amaz0ring