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Offline TopAce

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Originally posted by Jetmech Jr.
It is slowly becoming the Hi Poly Serapis. :D


It can be the sequel of the Serapis at best.
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Originally posted by Corhellion
...wtf Swampthing...

...check the persons post count before you welcome them...

and the fighter does have a cockpit look closer...it's the black space...



Ups, don´t i feel silly right about now...
What can i say, i never saw you around here, and you gave the impression you were new to the modeling, so excuse me for being polite and welcoming you. I won´t ever do it again...
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The ´cockpit´ was/is not very visible in those shots, hence the remark. :nervous:
No Freespace 3 ?!? Oh, bugger...

 

Offline TopAce

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Speaking of the cockpit, it is too small. It pretends the fighter to be larger. The FS2 Cockpit/Craft size ratio was less.
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Offline Knight Templar

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Looks better than my first model. :yes:
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Offline karajorma

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Originally posted by Mad Bomber
Ohhhhhh yeeeeaaaahhhh :cool:

Did you improve its texture at all? I've always felt it needed a little improvement in that regard. (shrug)


We haven't so far but there's a good chance that we might try talking DaBrain into it :)
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Offline Trivial Psychic

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I'm sorry to say this, but I liked the feel of the first one more.  My suggestions are, start with the older design, then put the wing sweep somewhere between the first and second designs.  Make the wings thinner, but have the thinning start just outboard of the main "hull".  To compensate for the wing-space reduction, move the trailing edge of the wing back a bit, so the net result of this specific change is that the wing is longer not in span, but in distance from leading to trailing edge (sorry, but I'm not sure of the exact term to use to describe that dimension).  I like the way the engines stay close to one another in the first design.  For the cockpit, despite Swamp_Thing's opinions, I prefer the non-bulbous design in the first incarnation.  Just look at how recessed the cockpit on the Serapis is.  Next, regarding your gun barrels.  IF you are aiming for a stealthy craft, I'd advise slinging any guns inder the nose and keeping them short barrels, like in the first incarnation.  To be perfectly realistic however, if you look at Vasudan FS2 craft (or almost ANY FS2 fighter/bomber for that matter), they don't have gun barrels at all.  If you must include them, I suggest you look at the Horus for guidlines, since it is the Serapis' effective predecessor.

All that said, this is YOUR model and not mine, so proceed how you feel is best.  As always, these are my opinions, from a guy who can't even MOD anyway.  Incidentally, your current low-sweep wing model is somewhat reminiscent of an american experimental plane from the 1940's, which were testing flying wing concepts for a future 4-engined bomber design, the XB-35.  I forget the name of the actual model this reminds me of though.

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hmmm...

...who knew that model making was so...challenging...I can model...but I can't do anything else...somebody tell me that you can take it and make it your own cause I can't...I can make two variants...the older more stealthier version and the Serapis MKII variant, if anyone wants them.

  

Offline NGTM-1R

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The second one reminds me horribly of my first fighter model.

May it never see the light of day...*hides his copy of C4D*

I think the first design is just all-around better looking. I'd almost say go with it as is, but instead I'll advise a bit more detail on the model, and a bit less curves...not too many less curves, though, or then it turns Terran on you.
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