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Offline Raptor

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After seeing c914's gunboat/ship/thing-bigger-than-bomber-smaller-than-cruiser-thing, I sat down and begun modelling the craft design I've had kicking around for about a year.  Somehow it's not quite working yet.








There will be two versions.  One a civilan light transport, with just a tail turret, and the military version, with heavier armour and shielding, plus the dorsal and ventral gun turrets:D

Can you guess the craft that inspired this?;)
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Yeah, a Star Trek ship, think its the Defiaint or something like that, well don't watch Star Trak. But, it is really better looking than it.
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Originally posted by Raptor

Can you guess the craft that inspired this?;)


Just tell me something and I will figure it out: Is it from FS?

[EDIT]Became out-of-date when posted. WeatherOp posted after I started typing the message.

[EDIT2]I guess you would like to get some feedbacl as we;;. ;) The cockpit part is the best so far. Hadn't WeatherOp revealed it to be an inspiration from a Star Trek ship, I would have said it assimilates with the YT-2000 transport from Star Wars.
« Last Edit: December 18, 2004, 09:30:31 am by 1079 »
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Thats the thing that jumped out at me, was that cockpit. Looks really good.
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Offline Singh

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The bridge looks like an Indy Patcom's or a Dreadnought Class Corvette's, yet the body looks like one of a defiant. the turrets are pretty much how it would look if two fighters were docked onto a Dreadnought Corvette's hull.  Yet the tail ages are more indicative of an atmospheric design and purpose, much like the Valkyrie (or whatever that craft was in FS1).

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I like it in general but I hate that squashed angular cockpit. Round it out a bit and I'd like the ship a lot more.
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For no readily identifiable reason, I just don't find this aesthetically pleasing. Dunno why - personal quirks no doubt. I'm sure others will find much to like however.
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Offline aldo_14

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I'm not sure about the overall flatness, but it shows promise.

 

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Aaaa now iwe have real FS defiant:nod:

BTW: Nose need more smoth work becouse it doesn't match to rest part of ship

 

Offline Unknown Target

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Looks like a cross between a Defiant and the patcom from IWar2. :) It's ok, but not very freespace ish, imho. Chunk it up some more, make it look more like a flying box than a squashed pencil.

 

Offline pyro-manic

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'Tis too flat. Give it some z-axis protruding bits, or make those fins a lot bigger and have them starting from the main hull rather than the engines.
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I could see that as maybe being some form of civilian ship in FS. But not military. I don't see that thing as having much armor, yet it has an amazingly surface area. In any serious battle, it would probably draw fire like a magnet.

That said, I like the design.
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Might as well be used as a transport....
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Looks like a cross between the Defiant and the Millenium Falcon...
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the cockpit looks like ****,
the rest of it's great, exept maybe the tail.
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Offline Roanoke

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I wouldn't go that far, but it does look like a dodgy boolean chop 'n' stick. It really needs to blended in with th rest of the ship

 

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that looks very familiar... hmm... and not like its from ST either...
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Offline Raptor

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Originally posted by TrashMan
Looks like a cross between the Defiant and the Millenium Falcon...


Correct!:nod::yes: I was aiming for a Defiant tail and nose, with Falcon central section.

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I could see that as maybe being some form of civilian ship in FS. But not military. I don't see that thing as having much armor, yet it has an amazingly surface area. In any serious battle, it would probably draw fire like a magnet.


Close.  The idea I had was that it began life as a civilian craft, something around the quieter areas during FS2, but after Chapella, the military built a gunship version for escort operations, long range patrols and anti-fighter duties.

Besides, this ship will have shields;7

The tail is incomplete really, and I'm not sure about the engines (the engines are what has been keeping this craft on the drawing board for so long.  I just can't seem to get a setup that I like!).

The nose defiently needs work, but so far I've yet to get a decent smooth form:sigh:

God, it does look bad head on!:ick:
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