[pecenipicek]

tis my new WIP... not for FS2 in any way, shape or form...
i think it could be a cruiser but im not sure yet...
itll probably end up being a corvette...
im currently out of sleep and ideas for this...
so any opinions and/or critics of this




Here is everything that i made in the ways of graphics. Please click the link and tell me your opinions on those other ships which are there.
My work

[Taristin]

It's still very basic. But keep trying, and eventually you wil make nicer meshes.

[Trivial Psychic]

I think that it could become a cool missile.

[pecenipicek]

perhaps... if i ever learn how to make engine glows(or thrusters...)

[TopAce]

Harpoon Mk II I say.

[pecenipicek]

this isnt finished you know?
damn...
gotta round it up a lil bit

[Taristin]

If you don't want criticism, post a more advanced version.

[aldo_14]

bit plain

[Trivial Psychic]

Originally posted by TopAce
Harpoon Mk II I say.

Actually, I was thinking of something more like a cross between a Trebuchet and a Stiletto.

[Unknown Target]

Interesting, but get rid of the prongs, make the entire body fatter and taller, and add more detail.

[TopAce]

I think adding a single cone to the head of the missile would make it look like ten times better. The back part is perfect but the wings also need some adjustments. Maybe scaling them would help.

[pecenipicek]

i know... im not too keen on the wings... ill render up another mess soon... currently im readin HLP and then im off to test 1 mission and perhaps then will i be able to do soe more work..

ill enlarge the wings and stretch em a litle bit...
umm...yeah do you think i should add spikes to the wings?

[pecenipicek]

UPDATE: remade he wings... added more wings, errm... added something that looks like a cone and decided not to part with engines...

pics are here:

[Trivial Psychic]

Is this gonna be a missile or a ship?  If the former, I'd advise rearanging the forward fins so that they are in "+" configuration, while the rear ones are in "X" configuration.  I'd also suggest that the front ones be reduced in size to about half of the rear set.  I'd also blunt off the tip of that cone front somewhat.

[aldo_14]

Those fins just look weird to me.

[TopAce]

Good, it's a Stiletto III now.

[pecenipicek]

well... i dunno... probably a ship... but if it gets to be a missile ...
now people tell me what to put on the ends of the fins?(AKA wings)

[pecenipicek]

okay... this is definitely goin to be neither... i think ill make it an arm of some mech
as for the spikes i think i could say i'm the lord of all things spiky

PIC UPDATE:



and yes. this is TrueSpace3.2

[TopAce]

Shivan-like missile. I don't like the back part though, why is it pointing upwards?

[c914]

Second one is big alien tree;)

My lite advice..for first model do some small terran boxy cruiser:nod: