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Offline TrashMan

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MORE! MORE!
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Offline Corsair

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Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

Offline Sandwich

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That two-timin' double-faced turd framed me! It's obvious, don't you see?!??!
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

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sure, sandy... that's what they all say.
"Think about nice things not unhappy things.
The future makes happy, if you make it yourself.
No war; think about happy things."   -WouterSmitssm

Hard Light Productions:
"...this conversation is pointlessly confrontational."

 

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It's good, but I want more explosions.:D
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omg omg omg!!!!one11!!1

um, yeah.

er... good stuff you got there.
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Offline Unknown Target

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SCENE SEVENTY SEVENTY SEVEN. INT. SHRIKE'S OFFICE - DAY.

We open to see SHRIKE sitting patiently at his desk. He is turned to face the door, a chair opposite him, and two beer glasses filled halfway are resting on the desk nearby. The clock ticks slowly on, its soft noise ringing out loudly in the silent, yet brightly lit room. A few seconds pass by, then a knock is heard on the door outside.

SHRIKE: Come.

The door whooshes open, and in steps ADMINISTRATOR. SHRIKE gestures to the seat in front of him. ADMINISTRATOR takes it, and faces SHRIKE, waiting. SHRIKE folds his legs comftorably and stares into his companion.

SHRIKE: I've been waiting for you...

He gestures towards the chilled glasses resting on the table.

SHRIKE: May I tempt you with an alchoholic beverage?

ADMINISTRATOR solemnly shakes his head, but keeps silent. SHRIKE nods and pauses for a few seconds, ponderng this seemingly insignifcant refusal. He turns and reaches behind him, lifting the same folder from earlier off his desk. Resting it on his lap, he looks back at ADMINISTRATOR.

SHRIKE: I understand you want to  fill in for Sandwich's duties...?

ADMINISTRATOR nods and speaks for the first time.

ADMINISTRATOR: That is correct.

SHRIKE nods and rests his elbow on the chair arm, and his head on his knuckles. Gesturing to ADMINISTRATOR, he address him questioningly.

SHRIKE: And what makes you think that I should pick you over my many other qualified choices...?

ADMINISTRATOR:  I believe that my resume there shows me as being the best choice for military duties.

SHRIKE nods, as if conceding to a point. Looking down at the resume, he opens it, and looks up and down its pages.

SHRIKE: Yes...your resume. Let's talk about that...infiltration, sabotage, ship commandeering, ship and fleet command...I fail to see why we would need to teach our peacekeeping force such...extremities.

ADMINISTRATOR: They may need to know them if, perhaps, an enemy fleet was to attack Hard Light Station...but liuckily for us, the enemy fleet is still holding position, correct?

SHRIKE glances up from his reading.

SHRIKE: For the moment, yes...

He returns to the folder, and ADMINISTRATOR nods, as if satisfied. SHRIKE speaks a few moments later, still looking down.

SHRIKE: One more question, before you can have the job...

ADMINISTRATOR: Anything.

SHRIKE looks up, his eyes burning into ADMINISTRATOR for a few tense seconds.

SHRIKE: Can I trust you...?

ADMINISTRATOR doesn't reply, pondering the question in its entirety. He nods slightly.

ADMINISTRATOR: You can depend on me.

SHRIKE nods. A second or two pass, and he stands, ADMINSTRATOR following suite. SHRIKE extends his hand and ADMNISTRATOR clasps it tightly.

SHRIKE: Welcome to the Hard Light Defense Force, commander.

ADMINISTRATOR nods and they shake hands. We fade to:

 

Offline redsniper

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ARRRGGHH!!! Can't anyone tell he's a bad guy? You can't even see his face. He must be evil!
"Think about nice things not unhappy things.
The future makes happy, if you make it yourself.
No war; think about happy things."   -WouterSmitssm

Hard Light Productions:
"...this conversation is pointlessly confrontational."

 

Offline Sandwich

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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

Offline Grey Wolf

That's one thing I honestly can't picture someone interviewing someone for the job of security director: "Can I trust you?"
If they say no, then it's obvious you have to get rid of them. But if they say yes, the answer is basically useless.
You see things; and you say "Why?" But I dream things that never were; and I say "Why not?" -George Bernard Shaw

 

Offline TrashMan

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This IS the HLP....

I can't wait for the big showdown and massive battles. I know I will be there..:D

sweetness...
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Quote
Originally posted by Grey Wolf
That's one thing I honestly can't picture someone interviewing someone for the job of security director: "Can I trust you?"
If they say no, then it's obvious you have to get rid of them. But if they say yes, the answer is basically useless.


Hopefully, he'll resolve that seeming illogical bit by having it turn out that Shrike was stringing along this "Administrator" guy from the beginning. *cough cough*


:D
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

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Nah, he will probely just end up saying that he framed Sandwich after he get popular, split HLP and rally his supporters and cause a huge Civil War.


*Wonders if he will join the ADMINISTRATOR or the HLP Admins.:nervous:
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Offline Unknown Target

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Sorry these are so slow everyone, but I am still working on the movie.

SCENE SEVENTY EIGHT. INT. GENERAL FREESPACE - NIGHT.

We open to see SANDWICH alone at a dirty, semi-deserted bar, drowning his sorrows in a gigantic mug of beer. Two agents in black uniforms are trying to make themselves invisible nearby, yet we can tell they are keeping an eye on him. SANDWICH obviously doesn’t care, and is resting his head on the table, staring tearfully into the cold brew in front of him, the reflections of the room bouncing off the chilled glass. Behind him, a figure opens the entrance door, and steps inside. Until the door closes, he is merely a silhouette, however, he is soon revealed to be KALFIRETH. SANDWICH regards him with a disinterested glance at the reflection, then returns to his distant stare. KALFIRETH moves slowly to the bar and sits down next to SANDWICH. The two soldiers shift slightly but maintain their positions. KALFIRETH motions to the bartender.

KALFIRETH: Orange juice, if you have it.

The bar tender nods and fixes him the drink, setting it down in front of KALFIRETH, who sips it slightly and sets it back down on the counter in front of him. Still staring ahead, he speaks, not looking at SANDWICH.

KALFIRETH: You’re…Sandwich, right?

SANDWICH shows his first sign of interest in his new guest. He gives him a sideways glance.

SANDWICH: That’s right.

KALFIRETH: Funny place for you to be sitting…out here with us vagabonds.

SANDWICH smirks in disgust.

SANDWICH: Well, if you haven’t heard, I’ve taken to murder lately…

KALFIRETH chuckles, which produces a surprised look from SANDWICH, who raises and sits up straight, his head turned to look at KALFIRETH.

SANDWICH: I’m sorry, is something funny?

KALFIRETH: Yep.
SANDWICH: I could use a chuckle – you mind clueing me in?

KALFIRETH: I sort of do.

He raises his glass and drinks another sip, setting it down on the counter. SANDWICH gives him a look of pure venom. KALFIRETH sighs and smiles at his glass.

KALFIRETH: They have good orange juice here. Can’t get it like this anywhere else in the station.

SANDWICH shuffles and glances over his shoulder and looks at the two soldiers, who are deep in conversation. Getting close to KALFIRETH, he spits out his words with an intense anger.

SANDWICH: Look pal, what the **** is your problem…? I got enough **** to deal with without having to listen to you ***** about orange juice!

He jabs his finger at KALFIRETH, who smiles and turns to SANDWICH for the first time.

KALFIRETH: What if I was to tell you that there have been rumors…out on the outer rims…of a new power coming into play…?

SANDWICH: I’d ask you why I should care.

KALFIRETH: Do you know who the greatest military power in this sector is…?

SANDWICH: Hard Light of course.

KALFIRETH: Of course. Now…if someone managed to control Hard Light’s military capabilities…they’d have a lot of muscle, would they not…?

SANDWICH: Look pal, if you’re gonna start some trouble…

KALFIRETH waves his hand and shakes his head.

KALFIRETH: Oh no no no, it’s not me. I’m just a wanderer. No, I came to warn you, and to ask you for help.

SANDWICH: With what…?

KALFIRETH looks around the room to make sure no one’s paying attention. No one is.

KALFIRETH: It’s already begun. That fleet that’s sitting outside is just waiting for the go-ahead. You’ve got a spy on board, and I need someone on the outside to help me stop him before things get ugly…someone like you.

SANDWICH: Why me? You could go to one of the admins and -

KALFIRETH stops him short and begins to speak with greater vigor.

KALFIRETH: Because you’re on the outside. If I go to the admins, the spy might get a hold of the info, and that might jeopardize not only my mission but my insider source in his  operation.

SANDWICH: You have a mole…who?

KALFIRETH: I’ll tell you when we’re in a safer spot…you can either trust me and possibly save Hard Light, or spend the rest of your life rotting in some jail cell with a wife named Big Billy Bob.

SANDWICH looks at his brew, considering. He comes to a decision, and taking a big swig of it, he slams it on the table.

SANDWICH: I’m in.

KALFIRETH: I knew you would be. Now, let’s get past these guards, shall we?

SANDWICH nods and smiles, the two standing up from the counter and turning to face the door. As they near it, the two guards stand in front of them. One holds out a hand.

GUARD #1: I’m sorry sir, I can’t let you –

He gets cut short as KALFIRETH karate chops him in the kink of his neck, knocking him to the floor unconscious. The other guard stares in disbelief and beings to draw his weapon, when SANDWICH grabs him by the face and slams the back of his head against the floor, knocking him out cold. The pair then continue onwards out the door, and we fade to:

 

Offline Singh

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oooooooooo!

And the plot thickens :D
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Offline Goober5000

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:wtf: Does Sandwich not know that Kalfireth is Kalfireth?  Or is there a weird Kalfireth/Thunder dichotomy going on? :confused:

 

Offline Corsair

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Dichotomy, I think. He's changed his name so nobody knows who he is, I guess. He already appeared and people didn't recognize him then.

Quote
.::TIN CAN::.: Never seen you around here before…tourist?

The PILOT sets his glass down and shakes his head. His back is still turned to us, obscuring his face from his view.

PILOT: I’ve been here once or twice before…

.::TIN CAN::. Looks pleasantly surprised, he extends his hand and the PILOT grasps it. Smiling, .::TIN CAN::. welcomes him.

.::TIN CAN::.: Well then! Welcome back to Hard Light, mister…I’m sorry, I didn’t’ quite catch your name.

The PILOT gives a good shake with his hand and sets it on the table.

PILOT: Kalifreth…my name is Kalfireth.


edit: I just noticed that UT didn't even spell Kalfireth right the whole way through :lol:
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Wash: This landing's gonna get pretty interesting.
Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

Offline Dark_4ce

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Tis sweetness.

*head explodes*
I have returned... Again...

 

Offline Sandwich

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Three nitpicks:

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  • I really really dislike beer. It tastes like pee smells. I'm much more likely to be caught with a glass of wine. :)
  • What's with me and cursing? It's extremely rare that I resort to using "sh*t" to get across how really pissed I am at something; the F word is totally out of place for me. And "kvetch" is so much more richly meaningful than "b*tch" in that connotation. :p
  • What Goober said, although I'll let it pass on some sort of yet-to-be-revealed plot twist thingy. Although there's no explaining Kal "asking" if I was Sandwich - he'd more likely say "Sandwich." To which I'd respond, "Yeah - who the heck are you?" Just a thought. :)
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

Offline Corsair

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Maybe Kal underwent some sort of memory wipe when he changed his name? Or maybe he's a robot who is going to pretend to be Thunder...
Wash: This landing's gonna get pretty interesting.
Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.