Since I read theoneofblood's script, i got inspired and wrote my own. of course, you may recognize some of it.
also, i couldn't think of my own company names, so i used theoneofbloods.
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Super: Universal Studios presents(Fade in to an external view of a wing of fighters, patrolling in deep space)
FIGHTER PILOT #1: No problems here, guys.
FIGHTER PILOT #3: Yeah, same here.
FIGHTER PILOT #2: Creepy, if you ask me. The Vasudans are unusually quiet today....
(Camera pans to show three jump points forming as a Vasudan wing jumps in)
(Cut to inside view of the third pilot's fighter. The pilot glances at his radar and looks to his 3 o'clock)
FIGHTER PILOT #3: Looks like we spoke too soon, guys. Inbound Vasudans, 3 o'clock.
FIGHTER PILOT #1: Roger, engaging.
(A Vasudan fighter is destroyed. Cut to another shot of four jump points opening up and strange-looking fighters emerge. The second pilot spots them first)
FIGHTER PILOT #2: What the hell are those?
FIGHTER PILOT #3: I dunno, but I can't get a lock on them!
FIGHTER PILOT #1: They're attacking!
(Two of the unknowns attack the Terrans while the other two go after the Vasudans. Camera focuses on the Vasudans)
(One of the Vasudan ships take heavy damage, and its pilot sends out a distress call)
VASUDAN PILOT: This is Cancer wing, we are under attack, please provide assistance.
(Cut to the Terrans executing frantic maneuvers. The second pilot fires repeatedly at an unknown ship, with no success)
FIGHTER PILOT #2: (Frustrated, angry) ****! They've got some kind of shield system! Our weapons aren't doing anything!
FIGHTER PILOT #3: Guys, let's get outta here!
FIGHTER PILOT #1: (Frantic, screaming) Oh, God! Hull precent down to 15%! I'm not gonna make i--- (Unknown fires missile, fighter explodes)
FIGHTER PILOT #2: Damn it! We lost Gamma 1! (Another unknown drops behind Gamma 2 and pummels him) AAGGH! (fighter explodes)
(Final fighter jumps out in time. A missile whizzes past the jump hole. Vasudans are destroyed, and cut to the unknown fighters as they jump out)
(Fade out)
(Fade in to an external view of a wing of fighters on patrol around Ross 128. An
Arcadia-class Installation sits in orbit in the background)
(Cut to the inside of one of the fighters. The pilot sounds bored)
FIGHTER PILOT #4: Ah, God, another routine patrol.
(A small window pops up and shows one of the pilot as he speaks)
FIGHTER PILOT #6: Hey, quit complainin'. (Chuckle)
(Another window pops up in place of the first)
FIGHTER PILOT #5: I just want some action, not boring patrols.
(The same process continues)
FIGHTER PILOT #4: Quit worrying about it. At least we don't have to worry about getting killed.
FIGHTER PILOT #6: (Chuckle) He's just excited about the flight recordings he's seen. Rookies.
FIGHTER PILOT #5: Hey!
(Cut to the fourth pilot's cockpit as several jump point signature is shown on his radar)
FIGHTER PILOT #4: Hang on a second, I'm getting jump-point readings.
(Cut to emerging fighters, then cut to the Vasudan's cockpit)
VASUDAN PILOT: Terrans, you are a conquered people. Surrender to us now, or be destroyed.
COMMAND: Pilots, intercept Aries wing.
FIGHTER PILOT #5: Finally.
Super: A Genesis Films Production FIGHTER PILOT #6: Watch out, Alpha 1, you got one on your tail!
FIGHTER PILOT #4: Thanks, I got 'em!
(Cut to the fifth pilot's fighter doing a flurry of evasives as the Vasudan behind him fires repeatedly)
FIGHTER PILOT #5: Ah, dammit! I can't shake this bastard!
(The sixth pilot drops in behind the Vasudan and obliterates them)
FIGHTER PILOT #4: Well, was that enough action for you, Alpha 2?
FIGHTER PILOT #5: (Breathing rapidly) Hell yes.
(Cut to the shot of a heavily damaged fighter emerging from subspace)
(Cut to a view of the inside of the fighter's cockpit as the pilot frantically fidgets with the controls)
ASH: This is Lieutenant Ash on Terran patrol! Wing Gamma! Three-niner! Reporting! (Pant) Taken heavy damage! Requesting immediate fighter-cover resque! (Scream) Come in anybody! (Pant) Requesting immediate assistance! Anyone, PLEASE!
(Cut to a view of the comm operator)
INSTALLATION: Barely recieving you, Gamma three-niner, this is Terran outpost Riviera responding. What is your situation?
ASH: Oh thank god. (Cut to a view of Ash's helmet-covered face) Our wing was ambushed, we didn't have a chance! I'm sure they're tracking me!
INSTALLATION: Calm down sir. Who attacked you? Was it the Vasudans?
ASH: Vasudans were killed to, they slaughtered everyone!
INSTALLATION: Sir, you have to calm down. You were attacked by Vasudans, is that true?
ASH: (Desperate, Angry) No, NO! We were in a skirmish with a Vasudan patrol, and then they just came out of nowhere and killed everone!
INSTALLATION: WHO came out of nowhere, pilot?
ASH: I-I don't know, but they weren't Vasudan, and they weren't Terran... Oh god, they were these death-black ships, and they flew like-, and their weapons were to much... they wasted everyone!
INSTALLATION: Pilot, sit tight, we're sending a recovery craft right n--.
ASH: (Desperate) Send FIGHTERS! I-I know they're following me, send everything you have now!
INSTALLATION: Sir, I don't have anyone else on scope. You're home free, it's going to be all right.
ASH: No it isn't! You don't understand! You weren't there!
(Cut to a shot from where we can see behind the fighter. From this view we see three or four unknown fighters emerge from subspace)
ASH: I can feel them following me.
(Cut to a view to where the fighter is a speck as a gigantic subspace rift opens up)
ASH: Oh my God, we're dead, we're all dead!
(As he is saying this, the view changes to about the same distance, only above them this time. We see a glint of light that is the fighter as the nose of a massive destroyer appears out of the hole)
INSTALLATION: Picking up unknown jump signatures... Scramble the fighters!
(Cut back to Ash's close-up as he looks frantically at the destroyer to the fighters then back again)
ASH: It's too late! Oh GOD!
(Cut to a view of one of the unknown fighters as it fires three or four times at Ash's fighter)
ASH: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
(The fighter explodes. We see the entire cockpit section flying toward us)
(Quickly fade to black as the cockpit section zooms by.)
Super: Conflict: Freespace (Super slowly fades out)
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Rip and flame.
