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Offline modis

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First time for public: My model
This is my first model which I'm showing for public.
I was working on TS 3.2 and decided to show it and ask Your opinion.

http://www.MyOnlineImages.com/Members/modis/images/shot0011.jpg
http://www.MyOnlineImages.com/Members/modis/images/shot0021.jpg
http://www.MyOnlineImages.com/Members/modis/images/shot0031.jpg
http://www.MyOnlineImages.com/Members/modis/images/shot0041.jpg

This should be heavy multipurpose cruiser. I don't think it could be from FS universe, because it has rotation habitat and some kind of fighter launchers (you can see them in shot 4).
Of course, no weapons yet.

I added my fighters to let you imagine how it looks
http://www.MyOnlineImages.com/Members/modis/images/shot005.jpg

Waiting for your advices, opinions and critique (just not too much).
« Last Edit: May 04, 2005, 08:32:52 am by 2190 »

 

Offline Charismatic

  • also known as Ephili
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Good job man. Keep up the good work!
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First time for public: My model
I like the design of the ship very much..
Is it a science vessel?
OMG! We're lost: Kryptonite = Tiberium

 
First time for public: My model
Looks like it should be a gas miner of some sort.

 

Offline WMCoolmon

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Ooh, spinny things.
-C

 

Offline Rampage

  • Son Of Rampage
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Lose the balls.

But other than that - - - - it looks very nice.  All you have to do is make those combined primitives and use Lightwave or something to mesh it all together.  Then add in some detail.

Love the sextant thing on the hull.  It'd be cool if it oscillated instead of spinning around.  Go SCP crew or something...
« Last Edit: April 30, 2005, 11:15:54 pm by 255 »

 

Offline Ypoknons

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Way to go !

Poly the balls :) Detail by bevelling the sidearms. That kind of thing - most people like HTL models these days, I'm guessing.
Long time ago, you see, there was this thing called the VBB and... oh, nevermind.

 

Offline Nuke

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i like tha balls :D
I can no longer sit back and allow communist infiltration, communist indoctrination, communist subversion, and the international communist conspiracy to sap and impurify all of our precious bodily fluids.

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Offline karajorma

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Love it. It needs some smoothing to make it a bit more high poly but I absolutely love it :)
Karajorma's Freespace FAQ. It's almost like asking me yourself.

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Offline Flipside

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Looking good! You need to polyficate the front section in my opinion, is too much large flat area compared to the rest of the ship, but then, it may well look different when textured :)

 

Offline aldo_14

  • Gunnery Control
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Quote
Originally posted by Nuke
i like tha balls :D


Damn, that's ripe for siggy material........

 

Offline Nuclear1

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Quote
Originally posted by Rampage
Lose the balls.


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Poly the balls


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i like tha balls


New thread title: Revenge of the penis references. :p

Cool ship, BTW :yes:
Spoon - I stand in awe by your flawless fredding. Truely, never before have I witnessed such magnificant display of beamz.
Axem -  I don't know what I'll do with my life now. Maybe I'll become a Nun, or take up Macrame. But where ever I go... I will remember you!
Axem - Sorry to post again when I said I was leaving for good, but something was nagging me. I don't want to say it in a way that shames the campaign but I think we can all agree it is actually.. incomplete. It is missing... Voice Acting.
Quanto - I for one would love to lend my beautiful singing voice into this wholesome project.
Nuclear1 - I want a duet.
AndrewofDoom - Make it a trio!

 

Offline krisvek

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penis references?  what penis references?

anyhow, keep the balls, theyre yummy...

i imagine them as being some kinda fuel containers or something....not from the FS universe though

 

Offline Carl

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I like it. now high-poly it :nod:
"Gunnery control, fry that ****er!" - nuclear1

 

Offline Solatar

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I like the ship, but I actually kinda like the fighters a little more.

 

Offline Kie99

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Now where's our argentinian friend?
"You shot me in the bollocks, Tim"
"Like I said, no hard feelings"

 

Offline Taristin

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IMO Everything is too blocky and chunky. Refine it some more :)
Freelance Modeler | Amateur Artist

 

Offline Taristin

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Quote
Originally posted by kietotheworld
Now where's our argentinian friend?


Banned. (Well, his latest nick anyways)
Freelance Modeler | Amateur Artist

 

Offline WeatherOp

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Looks Good :yes:
Decent Blacksmith, Master procrastinator.

PHD in the field of Almost Finishing Projects.

 

Offline Rictor

  • Murdered by Brazilian Psychopath
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Looks great. My only recommendation would be to add greebling to the big spinny thing, since it's so prominent. Its the only thing that really stands out as undetailed.