First of all, the smoothing factor in your render is too high; the central bulge looks smoothed out far too much. Try taking it down to about 5-10 degrees.
Also, try to make it less symetrical, both in the top/bottom and the front/back axis's.
EDIT: This looks like the perfect ship for this suggestion - give it well defined decks (lights and floor lines) in the texturing...
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[This message has been edited by sandwich (edited 07-05-2001).]