Overall this is a good mission, but it's not exactly done, so I wouldn't rush out on your campaign just yet.

I played it twice. The first time, the Braveheart got within 100km of the Aquitaine, which was probably the coolest part of the mission. I made sure to order Gamma wing onto it the next time.

Now, problems:
1) The first time, the Psamtek (sp?) got off all it's messages fine, and departed on time, but I was wondering why the avi was a Vasudan fighter pilot. I recommend using Vasudan Command for your destroyer avis. Also, the second time, the Psamtek jumped out right when it said "Jump drives ready in 90 seconds."

When it was time for the "Jumping out now" line, it was said by Command, not the Psamtek. That was probably because it couldn't send-message from a ship not in the map, so it sent it from #Command.
2) After the first wave, Capricorn wing is friendly. Make sure to mark wings hostile in the Wings Editor, not ship by ship.
3) The "Repel NTF Forces" objective never came true. I think this was caused by issue number 2.
4) I don't think the Belisarius ever came (which then of course means that it never left). Maybe I just missed it?