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Offline GZero

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Mission demo, pls test
on: October 09, 2006, 07:06:34 pm
Hello everybody,

here is my first try to create a mission, it is also planed that this will be a mission of my own created campaign.
Pls test this missions and give me a feedback what i can improve. Especially i hope there is somebody who can help me to improve
or correct my english in this mission ;)

Here is the DL for my mission http://rapidshare.de/files/36157041/demo.rar.html
This mission was created with Fred 3.6.9
« Last Edit: October 09, 2006, 07:19:10 pm by GZero »
 

Offline Rhythmic

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Re: Mission demo, pls test
Reply #1 on: October 09, 2006, 08:41:11 pm
My gripe with it would have to be the fact that nothing happens for like 5-6 minutes stright. I ended up using time compression just to see something happened. Fill up the dead time with something else. Add some more background.


I like the idea to push "j" to do a quick scan. That was cute.




 

Offline GZero

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Re: Mission demo, pls test
Reply #2 on: October 10, 2006, 02:50:27 pm
Thx for your feedback.

I have one Problem, this should be a search and rescue mission, so there have to be a search phase.
Perhaps you have a better idea to improve this mission, when yes pls post, i'm thankful for every help.
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