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Offline KillMeNow

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dawn chase (render entry)
 

still a work in progrss hopefully it will get better
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Offline NeoHunter

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Try to add more Noise to the water. That will make it look more natural. And try to make the horizon and the wayer more distinguishable. Because right now, it looks like they are mearged together.

Like the Millenium Falcon and the TIEs chasing it.

Are those Darth VAdar's TIEs?

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Offline Nico

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Are those Darth VAdar's TIEs?


yup. I thought there was only one X1?
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Offline KillMeNow

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nah there is always more than one prototype incase the other is destroyed in test flights
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Offline Nico

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well, do you often chase smugglers in prototypes (apart Vader who wants the best of the best, that is)?  
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Offline KillMeNow

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lol i conceed the point  but perhaps they were testing in the area when they saw solo and couldn't resist going after him
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Offline Nico

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lol, so i bet the pilots will be fired soon  
imagine what would happen to a pilot deciding to go only for a little trip with a YF22, w/o even talking about chasing anybody  

anyway, I failed to my duty:
yeah, the render is damn nice, the lighting is really good, but NH is right: add noise to the water  
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Offline KillMeNow

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already rendering now =) but those f22 pilots would get alot of reward if they shot down bin laden =) even without orders
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Offline Zeronet

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How can they shoot him down? he doesnt have a plane.
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Offline Thorn

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bombed him then...

 

Offline Nico

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Originally posted by Zeronet:
How can they shoot him down? he doesnt have a plane.

he could find two airbus, so why wouldn't he have a plane?
baaaaaaaaah
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back to topic: why don't you just put two Tie interceptors?

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Offline KillMeNow

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yup i was testing my f22 sir when i saw in ina  truck it was definatly him he was carryinga  big sign saying shoot me i'm bin laden - anyway lacking any bombs i descided to aim my f22 at him then eject sir - i got the ******  =)
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Offline KillMeNow

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heres the update:
changed the mountain range int eh back abit looks better this way i think - i might do another mountain range for this image that is acaully a snowy toped mountin i was just practiving with and to get it to look like an island most of it is submerged - but it suffices for now

 
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Offline KillMeNow

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argh i forgot to save the changes to the tie engine glows =( oh well do it again
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Offline Nico

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Originally posted by KillMeNow:
heres the update:
changed the mountain range int eh back abit looks better this way i think - i might do another mountain range for this image that is acaully a snowy toped mountin i was just practiving with and to get it to look like an island most of it is submerged - but it suffices for now

   

mmh,still not perfect. I think you shuold lower the reflectivness of the water a lot, seas are not really like mirors  
otherwise, it's much better anyway  

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Offline KillMeNow

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yup i agree now that you mention it the reflectivity only really would apply toa  far calmer sea as in the first image but that jsut didn't look enough like an ocean - hm iw ill get there in the end =) i'm contimplating putting some lasers in - but i'm not sure if that might enhnace the image or just shatter the peace of the image
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At first, I thought the first one was clouds...

 

Offline DragonClaw

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nah there is always more than one prototype incase the other is destroyed in test flights

Hence 2 death stars, a few SSDs, 2 Eyes...

bah now where's the second Sun Crusher

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Offline wEvil

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add some less uniform noise to the waves and try using some particle systems for the foam (think the perfect storm film)

also check the composition...split the image up into 3x3 rectangles and put the thing you want someone to focus on at the middle intersections like this
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if that makes any sense at all :0/