Turrets need to be redone, except that massive one in the center that one I like

although they do need to be scaled down a weeee bit, they look like they can't rotate, which is pretty useless since their not fleet/ptc type weapons.
Finally found the fighter bays, interesting position, i kinda like where they are
the bottom fins, i don't know what to do about, maybe something more fang like, or blockier.
The really high bridge isn't really necessar, looks too human, that nose/face section in the middle looks more like a bridge section to me.
the intakes are really too big, way bigger than anything i've made, although having them there is one less problem for me

other than that it looks like a good place to start

oh btw..... does it remind you of macross ships?