One generic issue I've noticed throughout the campaign at this point
*Depart orders often come in before the area is secure on a successful mission. It SHOULD force you to clear the area (otherwise you get run over by the Warlock, as in "The Ambush"

). I've pointed it out where I remembered to note it, but there's a few missions I missed earlier that need their objectives revised to reflect that. Seems awful silly to abandon allied warships and RTB when there's still enemy craft around.
Another issue that cropped up at the end: maybe I fell asleep during the briefings, but they just suddenly started talking about hybrids without any introduction in the last 3 missions. I was totally lost. It needs an elaboration in the E3M3 briefing (one sentence just doesn't make an impression). Here's the original (note I've copied and pasted a couple stages in sequence here):
The Vidar Project was the first project that the then Lieutenant Russik worked on. It was a top secret operation being conducted by the rogue Galactic Terran Intelligence back in the era of the GTA. The objective: to meld Terran and Shivan physiology into a single hybrid for use in conjunction with Shivan communications technology.
The GTE Vidar was the only ship of it's class produced. It was designed along the lines of a Terran Explorer class, which is a very rare vessel. The design is old, but we can deduce that since the GTI was crushed, the ship had been refitted.
Its exact communications capabilities are unknown. However, it is believed that Admiral Russik integrated an ETAK device into Terran Shivan genetic hybrids on the ship, potentially giving it an unparalleled capability to communicate with the Shivans.
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My suggestion (which hints at details discussed later in the campaign):
The Vidar Project was the first project that the then Lieutenant Russik worked on. It was a top secret operation being conducted by the rogue Galactic Terran Intelligence back in the era of the GTA. The objective was to meld Terran and Shivan physiology into a hybrid lifeform. The hybrids would then be used in conjunction with experimental Shivan communications technology. We suspect several may have actually been created.
The GTE Vidar was the only ship of it's class produced. It was designed along the lines of a Terran Explorer class, which is a very rare vessel. The design is old, but we can deduce that since the GTI was crushed, the ship had been refitted.
Its exact communications capabilities are unknown. However, it is believed that Admiral Russik integrated an ETAK device into the Terran-Shivan genetic hybrids on the ship, potentially giving it an unparalleled capability to communicate with the Shivans.
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The E3M4 briefing could also use some tweaking along the same lines. Original (again, excerpt):
Lt. Commander Niven will also be in the area and will direct your actions. Intelligence also speculates that Admiral Russik may attempt to communicate with the Shivans. The Vidar and it's integrated ETAK technology with living beings may bridge the gap that Admiral Bosch had sought to jump. Monitor the situation and record everything.
Suggested:
Lt. Commander Niven will also be in the area and will direct your actions. Intelligence speculates that Admiral Russik may attempt to communicate with the Shivans. The Vidar and it's Terran-Shivan hybrids coupled with integrated ETAK technology may well bridge the gap that Admiral Bosch sought to jump. Monitor the situation and record everything.
The E3M5 briefing says Russik is on an Azrael transport, but in the mission it's an Argo making its way to the node.
The E3M7 briefing also has some problems. Original:
After hours of intelligence work aboard the GTE Vidar, we have finally learned of Russik's final plan.
Russik believes that a single Terran-Shivan hybrid holds the power to control Shivan ships. This theory is based on the idea that Shivans are controlled by a hive mind.
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When he made contact with the Shivans, Russik not only contacted him, but he gained control of a small number of their forces. Intelligence believes that a central communications nexus in the Naos system may hold the key to his power over the Shivans. With the Shivan forces at his control, he could take over the GTVA in a matter of months.
Suggestion:
After hours of intelligence work aboard the GTE Vidar, we have finally uncovered Russik's final plan.
Russik believes that a single Terran-Shivan hybrid is capable of controlling Shivan ships. This theory is based on the idea that Shivans are controlled by a hive mind.
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Russik not only contacted the Shivans, but he gained control of a small number of their forces. Intelligence believes that a central communications nexus in the Naos system may hold the key to his power over the Shivans. With the Shivan forces at his control, he could take over the GTVA in a matter of mere months.
And, more testing:
E3M1 Contention of Power
-The Nethys CAN survive this engagement, and so when it gets destroyed and there's no mention in the debrief, it seems like Command is being even more unreasonable than usual. Maybe add a protect Nethys goal?
-Needs a clear area before the depart order.
E3M2
-Ship selection seems a little wide here. Otherwise, no problems.
E3M3
-The text transmission by Command at the beginning of the actual mission play misspelled communications (missed the first "i").
-Command keeps *****ing about the comm system even after it's destroyed until you also destroy the engine on the cruiser. Simple matter of revising the messages to either have two, one for each system, or one message that's a countdown for BOTH subsystems (which would be fine, 3 minutes is enough time to both kill the comms and disable it).
-Again, you're ordered to depart even when enemy fighters are still present. The warlock won't leave until they're all destroyed.
E3M4
-Alpha 2 is neurotic and talks to himself. OK, so it should be another pilot either answering the questions at the beginning, or asking them. Otherwise Alpha 2 seems a little bit nuts.
E3M5
-Vidar's cryochamber is misspelled as "cyrochamber" for all 6.
-It IS possible to save the Liberty, so the briefing should ***** at you if you don't.
-There are no directives in this mission. There should be 4: Protect Vidar, Protect Liberty, Destroy Bombers, Destroy Corvette (can't recall the name offhand).
E3M6
-Return to base order appears before the area is actually secured.