A functional mission, but still not a good one. I can point out many errors in that mission:
1) Spelling/Grammar Errors (no capitalization of wing names)
2) The Cruiser Rapier is actually a rebel cruiser, but no biggie.
3) No delay between some waves
4) Still no background
5) No starfield (!!)
6) Briefing tags don't work, sign of not testing
7) Stupid directives "Vaporize xxx" "Cure Cancer"?

8) The guest appearance of "Jump Node 0"
9) Zeus bombers aren't even carrying proper warheads
10) Gamma wing's initial orders are to guard the base instead of attack the Rapier