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Offline jr2

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Techno track m cooked up
on: January 09, 2008, 06:56:04 pm
Thought I'd drop this by you guys.. m's first composition, I think:

http://rapidshare.com/files/82549395/youarealive.mp3

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Re: Techno track m cooked up
Reply #1 on: January 09, 2008, 08:08:52 pm
Are you m?
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Re: Techno track m cooked up
Reply #2 on: January 09, 2008, 08:35:59 pm
No.  m is my brother.  He has his own account here, but doesn't get on too often.  (He's @ college ATM.)
 

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Re: Techno track m cooked up
Reply #3 on: January 10, 2008, 03:59:22 am
More of a Art subject methinks
Karajorma's Freespace FAQ. It's almost like asking me yourself.

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Re: Techno track m cooked up
Reply #4 on: January 10, 2008, 08:24:51 am
Has m got an artist page or something showcasing his compositions? I'd like to hear some more of what he's done.
 

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Re: Techno track m cooked up
Reply #5 on: January 10, 2008, 08:59:21 pm
    Critique
    • Practically every single instrument is a preset in FL studio.
    • The track is seriously lacking in depth, it needs either some background synths or chords, or more percussion.
    • Unnessacary volume contrast in the beginning with a really rough synth is annoying
    • Repetative, only a single idea, with insturment changes and almost nothing else
    • SHORT! This might count as a song idea, but not really as a full song.
    • Needs more variation!!!11!!!1!!1!
    • The drumloop needs more variation too
    • Songs that fade out instead of ending are generally looked down on. I don't particularly care, myself, but largely it should be avoided.
    • The beat is very hard to follow and the song keeps trying to reinvent itself, which is a problem. Without a bassline or something to run on, the listener gets lost

    I'm rather harsh with critique, but I do try to give constructive criticism. :P
     

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    Re: Techno track m cooked up
    Reply #6 on: January 11, 2008, 01:00:39 am
    Quote from: Darius on January 10, 2008, 08:24:51 am
    Has m got an artist page or something showcasing his compositions? I'd like to hear some more of what he's done.
    Quote from: jr2 on January 09, 2008, 06:56:04 pm
    m's first composition, I think:

    Quote from: blackhole on January 10, 2008, 08:59:21 pm

    Thx, I'll pass it along.

    Quote from: karajorma on January 10, 2008, 03:59:22 am
    More of a Art subject methinks

    True.. sorry, I forgot you could post Gen Disc stuff in art; I got it confused and thought it had to be FS related.  Thx.  :)
     

    Offline m

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    Re: Techno track m cooked up
    Reply #7 on: January 11, 2008, 03:50:56 pm
    thanks for the advice blackhole... I already told myself all that, and I'm just starting using FL, so it's a little hard for me to put what i want on a song

    and I like your techno btw
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    Re: Techno track m cooked up
    Reply #8 on: January 11, 2008, 04:25:59 pm
    Well, keep at it. Practice makes perfect. Glad you like my techno :D
     

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    Re: Techno track m cooked up
    Reply #9 on: August 05, 2008, 03:10:20 pm
    zombie threadage!!!
    BTW My college roommate and I have a site now:  http://www.download.com/felixvsm
    -m
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    Roll with the pack or get left behind.

    It's a Masterpiece conspiracy!!!

    -Taken from P.O.D.'s Masterpiece Conspiracy
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